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  1. Goodie

    Chapter 1

    Hmmmm, sounds like real life to me....wonder how many people are still with their first love?
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    Prologue

    Wait, how did we go from boy feeding goldfish to boy killing abusive foster parent. You've captured my attention, looking forward to reading more.
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    Afterwards

    I kind of think it is. Aiden and Dennis....no comparison, Dennis was an asshole, end of story.What did Aiden ever do?
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    Afterwards

    Kudos on another great story. Having read some of your other works I knew I wouldnt be dissappointed by this one and I see theres a sequel that Im looking forward to reading next.Great job and thanks for writing.
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    Long Time Coming

    Man that was a super long day full of twists and turns leaving us all in a nice happy place. And they still have the energy( at least Aiden does) for a little fun before sleep time.
  6. Didnt see that one coming....damn dude you really know how to keep us on edge, good one.
  7. Poor Ben, he was only trying to help and gets beat up for it. Maybe Dennis wasnt an active part in it, maybe, but he sure helped cover it up. That being the case, theres really no forgiveness for that which is a shame, I thought there was going to be some redeeming quality to make him worth saving. Or am I just being too quick to judge before reading on and getting the full story.
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    Conversing

    Wow, so Ben finally cracked it. No wonder everyone thought it would be a good idea for Owen to talk to him. Looks like an interesting story about to unfold regarding Ben and Dennis, cant wait to read that. I also so want to see Tony and Jake get together and find their happiness, they certainly deserve it.
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    Things that Change

    This is probly a big reason why that woman never gets better, she needs to deal with her own problems and leave others alone.
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    Damn the pests

    I only just realised how much I love Lacy, you go girlfriend. Im kinda hoping Owen can somehow come clean to Adam, its like Adam is trying but will all that effort go to waste if he finds out the truth. I can sorta understand why Owen doesnt want to burst Aidens little happy bubble about Karen. The last thing you want is to hurt the ones you love, shame that trying to do what you hope is right ends up hurting them anyway.
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    Decisions

    Right at the end with the mom. I suddenly thought of the homeless dog story. If Aiden knew what she said he'd probly choose to stay with Owen instead of at home and she'd quickly change her tune. As much as I want to see her get better for Aidens sake, I don't like her trying to keep them apart. And "special friends"......really. Trust me lady, you haven't been around enough to know better..
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    Dennis

    Darn, now I actually feel sorry for Dennis. In hindsight it was probably a mistake for Owen to even be in that house, but it may have done some good in triggering his healing. Such a good story.
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    Stress

    no time to comment gotta read the next chapter
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    Confrontation

    Janie is gonna cause all kinds of drama but I think Owen and Aiden will be ok, they have a lot of good friends to support them. Im really really hoping Adam remains one of them.
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    Revelations

    just to repeat everyone else, great story and that too was such a sad chapter.....STOP ok lol. On a side note, Im kind of wishing Owen had spoken to Nicky or something, I think he needs some kind of closure there. As for Aidens mom, she has a lot to deal with and needs help before she destroys whats left of her family.
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    Remembering Dan

    I have no words....
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    Something New

    Yeah I guess having been kicked out at 18 and having to fend for themselves, theyve had to grow up real quick. I think theyre doing an incredible job. Really hope things work out between Tony and Jake.
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    Surprise

    Haha...you know Owens not the only one surprised by that, I didnt figure it being a date either but that was brilliant. Great writing and great story....actually might go back and change my reaction from like to love.
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    The Long Day

    Good chapter, thanks. The twins continue to amaze, guess theyve been playing big brother role to Aiden for a while. Amazing that these caring and amazing people can be the product of two bigotted and uncaring parents. Whatevers going on with Aidens home situation, its good he has the Dovan boys for support.
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    Oh Boy

    Wow, that was kinda bold of Aiden to make a move like that. Glad he did tho cos for sure Owen wouldnt. Hoping things go forward from here and they dont let any unnecessary awkwardness ruin things.
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    Faith

    This was another good chapter. Chris and Owen sharing their moment on the couch was heartwarming. I cant really decide which of the twins is my favorite, so I guess i will just have to call it a draw and be glad that Owen has these two awesome brothers in his life.
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    Getting Out

    Owens expanding circle of friends is good, they seem like good peoples and Im really glad for him.
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    Late Night Visitor

    Nope not crazy at all. They are like the perfect big brothers and will make excellent substitutes for Owens homophobic dad......I love them too. Good story keep it coming.
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    Change of Heart

    Small world indeed. Everyone seems to already know each other so that should make it easier for Owen to make friends. And I think that Aiden, Adam and Shane have already proved they could make great friends by standing together.
  25. Good story so far. Feel sorry for Owen but glad he has the twins to help him. Thanks for the story, looking forward to reading more.
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