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The Backstory (Part Three)
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Backstory (Part Three)
Awesome chapter. Love that our boys have the support to be themselves and enjoy their relationship. A relationship which is strong enough to share with the Asian hottie and lord help us all she things (shudder). Loving Cam and Ian. Fab story. -
The Backstory (Part Two)
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Backstory (Part Two)
Umm yeh not sure how many of us can actually read....most are probly sitting back waitin for Peter Jackson to make a movie out of it......wow id be first in line to watch it too -
The Backstory (Part Two)
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Backstory (Part Two)
Hot stuff, need to find me some of them gay passes.....not for me mind. Can issue them to my hot straight friends when I wanna get wicked. Yup, think Im hooked and with so many books in the series, got my summer reading and alone time fantasies all sorted. Thanks as always. -
Ch-ch-changes (and Epilogue)
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Ch-ch-changes (and Epilogue)
Hehe good thing bout being late to the party sometimes is getting the bonus chapter. Lovely, beautiful, I dont have enough words.This story is everything. Im really sad Billy had to go, tbh was kind of angry at you too, but it all turned out the way it was really supposed to....the final touching scene of the threesome where Billy brings Nicky and Noah together clinched it for me. See why I love Billy so much, how totally awesome and selfless was that? I almost feel happy enough here to not bother reading the last chapter............nah who am I kidding. One more encore. -
More Than I Could Have Wished For...
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in More Than I Could Have Wished For...
Awww no fair, im too lazy to find tissues and have to put up with a salty wet face.......dont go there. Tears and more tears, what a super sweet chapter. Love that they have a church that practices love and acceptance, and thanks for throwing Hairspray in there, one of my personal favs. Had a feeling Noah was putting on a face and not taking the breakup with Liam all that well. For Nick and Billy to share their love and include him was really special,and not just for the pervy hot 3 way sex factor. They gave Noah just what he needed and cemented a bond that will make them truly unbreakable. Cant tell you how much I love this story ......standing ovation. -
Chapter 11 - Moving Forward
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Moving Forward
Tears of joy and much gratitude for bringing this awesome family together, they all deserve this. Nick, our reluctant hero, has brought so much love with him over and above whats been given to him by Noah and the dads. For never having had a real family before, hes not had to share his love but save it up till he could give it to the ones who finally mattered most. Thank you. . -
Yeah real shame Liam and Noah missed out initially and the sister slipped in, could have avoided so much drama. then again the familys homophobia would have made a relationship difficult. I wonder if Hannah knew Liam was gay which is why they hated each other. Imagine if she did and only hooked up with Noah cos she knew her gay brother was into him. Also when he mentioned f""""""" Hannah, even tho we know hes a virgin. Im guessing he was using that in the context of doing sexual stuff just not actual intercourse. After Nicky and Billys first time hed used the term figuratively then before clicking that they had done it literally. Happy for all the boys, gonna miss them when this journeys over, not long now.
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The First Day of School, The Last Day of Fear
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The First Day of School, The Last Day of Fear
The best thing I got from this chapter was Nicks concern for Hannah. Despite everything he still showed compassion and genuine concern for her throughout. Yes, shame she had to die but got to be prepared for that when you take up a gun to kill. So glad our heroes came through ok. Do they really have panic buttons and shooting drills......thats whats really sad. Again great story, stellar job. -
A Day In San Antonio, A Night In Heaven
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Day In San Antonio, A Night In Heaven
Mindless.....hate guns,theyre made to kill. Hannah you stupid........ugh forget it, just gonna read next chapt, so glad this is a complete story.......Im too impatient to handle cliffhangers. -
The Boyfriend, The Girlfriend, The Brother
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Boyfriend, The Girlfriend, The Brother
Wow Hannah,insecure much? She obviously knows Noah was kind of into boys sometime, when she made the crack about Nick probably being a fag too and maybe Noah going back to that. I can only imagine its got to be the worse kind of feeling for her to think of losing her boyfriend to another guy. Thing is. gender got nothing to do with it, shes just not a nice person who got jealous for no reason and thankfully opened her hateful mouth so Noah could see her for real and dump her hateful ass. Unfortunately she isnt just going to go away......hell hath no fury.... God I love this story. -
Actually was having so much fun forgot CPS. Thank goodness in this story they are working for and with our family and not against them. And Mrs C, obviously fills in nicely for the mother Nick never really had, what a super woman. Billy and Nicky, what more needs to be said. I do love those txt msg, so cute and so typical....think we can all remember composing a few of those. Apologies to pre txt readers, Im sure in your day you probly would have passed little notes.
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The Backstory (Part One)
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Backstory (Part One)
Thank God thought this was gonna be another gay romance, bless you Cam you wonderful straight man. Wait, what are you doin in that shower? Wait. No, stop, noooooooo. Dammit lost another one to the rainbow nation. Looks like this is gonna be a fun story. Just thought Id take a quick peek since it was recommended. Be back after I finish Nicky and Billys story. -
Billy and Nicky are just sweetness and all things nice (sigh) Nice to meet Cal,another positive addition to the team. Surprises me Noah hadnt thought of introducing them sooner both having similar backgrounds.Nick really has lucked out here, so many awesome people around him. Im dreading school starting and the appearance of the token scumbag to cast the dark cloud over all of this joymancing. Btw loved the lyrics from that song ( no not Manilow )...so powerful and so Nicky, they fit perfectly. Such a beautiful moment.
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Awww such a sweet chapter. Hats off to Billy for being so accepting. This is such an awesome feel good story. Bit worried bout the shoe dropping warning,please dont be too cruel. See some star ratings being thrown out there....definitely deserves top billing. Bravo!!!
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Nick has the world at his feet and probably deserves it, can definitely be overwhelming. I hope he can balance things out and keep his humble down to earth side. Billy and Maddie, what a great pair of first up friends to make...this will help Nick settle in and maybe a romance to boot couldnt hurt. Another great chapter...awesome stuff.
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Love it. Nick and Noah will make the best of brothers so Im hoping they dont end up as anything more. A harmless j/o session in the shower is just a bit of innocent fun which both knew and understood. Didnt quite get the when we turn 18 and you arent my foster brother you can suck me off ??? umm what diff wud any of that make? Great chapter. Think this is one of your first stories Ive ever read so if theyre all anything like this will definitely be looking forward to reading more of your works. Meantime, must get thru this...cheers.
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Love it already after only the first bite. Im a bit of a sucker for poor unwanted orphan boy gets dream break stories. Despite some pointing out how unrealistic certain aspects may be, hey, its fiction. Im just gonna sit back and enjoy the ride.
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Cool wee story, loved it. TBH only read it cos I felt guilty bout not liking and abandoning one of your other stories but glad I found and liked this one. Good stuff and thanks for the words. Harry/NZ
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Never seen parent trap so this is new to me. The concept of long lost twins reuniting is old sure but still makes for a good story. Um do Scottish boys really say 'lad' I dunno. Just realised, Kyle has failed miserably....should have gotten Finn playing rugby lol.
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Ok this one i like, dont ask me why. Separating siblings is always difficult, but twins? Who thought that was the best solution. Worse, not telling, seriously. Did the question of wheres mummy never come up. Christina probably dodged that one by remarrying and obviously keeping secrets also. Dont mean to take sides cos frankly right now I dont like either parent, but at least Finn tried moving to the other side of the world to do the "right thing". Christina grrrr nemind rant over......did I say I liked this story. Thanks.
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Hadnt he already been to the police station so they could interview Jonah meaning they already know he has the boy and the circumstances surrounding his finding him in the back of the car, etc. Also some of the dialogue,especially from young Jonah sounds too grammar perfect and unnatural. The sanctuary sounds like some sort of survivalist camp being set up in preparation for an end of world scenario. Please keep up the writing. Although this story doesnt do anything for me, I wish you well. Maybe some other story of yours will be more to my liking.
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Its a bit weird cos I try not to let the other book ruin this story for me. Its a bit hard tho being too concerned for the characters when you kind of know the eventual outcome. Having said that, being in the moment allows me to still enjoy the emotions going through our cast and even my own mind. From chapter to chapter you.ve got me going back and forth from hating to loving Aiden. Seriously, lets just stick with Hartley being the evil b****** and keep directing all our hate at him. And for the record. Im not gonna cry over Him and Dusty not getting it on no more.....jealous much lol.
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I know I shouldnt blame Aiden for letting a snake like Hartley manipulate him, afterall impressionable young kid vs devil incarnate, no contest. Still, just plain dumb sometimes.
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Yeah I kinda wish Aiden would heed his own words and stand up like that when it really mattered, hes kind of misdirecting his angst and we all know where thats coming from, maybe a little jealousy of someones particular closeness with a certain someone else.
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Far too lazy to reread so just picking up where I last left off, think I can remember most of the gist of things. Anyway, as much as I like to see bullies get their comeuppance, Im with Aiden and think this was a little overkill. Still, this is more evidence of Hartleys evil influence. And hes even more despicable for making me dislike my Dusty for a moment.
