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A Very Special Boy (Part Two)
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Very Special Boy (Part Two)
Great chapter yet again. Im with everyone else so I wont repeat whats been said already. This story just gets better and better which is kind of sad cos its nearly over boo hoo. -
A Very Special Boy (Part One)
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Very Special Boy (Part One)
What can I add that hasnt already been said.....just more of the same. One of the best chapters. Charlie and Jacob now engaged, and how awesome was it for mom to give them the house so they could live together. Sad about gramma tho. WOW Charlie makes the noise stop for Timmy and Noah.....how special is that. And is that the Noah that was mentioned in the Stitches epilogue? Ohhhhh this is sooooo good. -
The Architect (Part Two)
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Architect (Part Two)
yeah we all know the magic that is Charlie Danner, his ability to connect with people and in particular kids is surprising considering his supposed shyness. His devotion to baby Eli and the way he attracts kids in general shows what a great dad he would make. Until I got to see Charlie in his own story, I never really appreciated him fully till now, he sure is something special. Another beautiful feel good chapter, Thank you. -
The Architect (Part One)
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Architect (Part One)
It was always Jacob,now all is right with the world. I too enjoyed the scene where Jacob fed Charlie as he fed Eli.For me it was really intimate. Another great chapter. -
Great chapter. So glad to see the Frankie issue resolved ( that should appease all the Frankie haters lol ). Great to see we're finally catching up to Stitcher.We get to hang out with Cam and Ian again as well as our favorite baby boy ( who btw will be featuring in his own Barnstable story Im sure Book of Eli lol ) And of course now with the appearance of Jacob at last, Charlie will finally find what his lonely soul has been looking for , not that he didnt have plenty of hot fun looking. Love it.
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Haha Im glad Charlie managed to lay down the law and straighten Eric out...well he certainly straightened one thing out. Think I mentioned after the Frankie breakup how resilient Charlie was, after all, it didnt take him long to hook up with David. Now hes found a bit of distraction in Eric and good on him, i mean is there meant to be a suitable mourning period between broken relationships and if so how long??? As for Frankie, Im actually hoping he wants to man up and apologize for the way he treated Charlie, not that Charlie needs it,but I think he deserves it.
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Oh the dreaded trip, Billys last chance to come clean. And then theres Aiden playing his own major part in Billys downfall by giving his master the key to lock Billy out of valedictorian. Conniving little s""t, I really wish Dustin hadnt bothered making up with him. Thanks for the chapter.
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The Musician (Part Four)
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Musician (Part Four)
Oh so bittersweet and seeing that it was coming in no way made it any easier. And if your words werent enough to make me cry, those music links sure didnt help either. Beautifully and heartbreakingly moving. Still, if not for this, then we know that the good times ahead would not be possible, still sux though. The hot 3 way provided some consolation. Super super chapter. -
We all know how magical Charlie is and David can sure cast a spell of his own, together they are seamless. Charlie may have been with Frankie but he still managed to experience some incredible firsts with David.Im so happy for them right now. Awesome chapter. PS Charlies magic is so powerful that this story has helped me move on from Cam and Ian, tho I still get a little kick when they get a mention.
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Awww CD and DC go hand in hand. They fit so perfectly. Im trying not to get too excited because Im gonna end up in tears later ( actually Im practically in tears all the time reading your stories) Anyway, I will prepare myself for the worst whilst I enjoy whatever beautiful moments they have together.
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Glad Charlie is so resilient, we always knew he was strong.I still cant hate Frankie,actually felt sorry for him in that party scene,my bad. David describing relationships as being like a complicated piano piece was very cleverly done. Be interesting to see where you take this particular piece. Thanks for another great chapter.
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Charlies first heartbreak, Im gutted for him.Its easy to say,but knowing the score from the get go, they probably should have kept it to friends with benefits and not fallen in love. Ah well who can control the heart. I cant be too angry with Frankie cos I know from Stitcher that it was never meant to be, but that was still a totally gutless way to breakup...too bad,his loss. Great chapter, on to the next heartbreak.
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What can I add, simply more of your finest work. Im pretty sure Im gonna love everything you write.
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I so didnt want it to end, but if it must, it couldnt have ended better. Amazing story....heartwarming,funny,inspiring,romantic and erotic, all the ingredients to make it a great read. So glad I found your story Always which lead me to here. You've gained another devoted fan. Thank you for inviting me into the fabulous life you have created. Endless applause to you.
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Awww its nearly over, gonna be hard to let go. Warren, Jeannie and Timmy will make great additions to the extended family. Looking forward to the next book once this is done, yup its a Charlie spinoff which is awesome but I hope the rest of the fam dont get left out. Final chapter (sigh)
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Highway head, too funny and whats the first thing Cam notices when they arrive? Yeh busted lol. Ians recovery is coming along nicely ( honestly my dirty mind just noticed after I typed that ). Hoping Jacob can quickly get past his reservations, he and Charlie will surely make great parents and as someone else suggested Eli could use a playmate. Thinking back to Janets comment about the boys and their children suggests Eli can expect little brothers and/or sisters. Another bestie.
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So glad Ian and Mary are reunited happily and free of the abusive bstd, no loss there. And yes thankfully the insurance payout meant he was good for at least one thing, enjoy spending that. Hot teacher/student RP scene. Vic and Hayden fit so well and will hopefully go far together. Another great chapter, thank you.
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I thought it was a nice touch that you brought Janet back just to show she was still watching out for our boys. A cute scene would have been baby Eli staring off at his mom hovering over Ians bed smiling happily to himself while everyone else wondered what he was looking at. I hope Ians mom turns out ok and becomes part of his life again. Im sure she wanted to be but wasnt strong enough to fight Jack on this. We shall see, provided she stays conscious long enough.
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Ditto this has my vote for best chapter too. And who wouldnt wake up to beautiful Eli and this time theres no doubting he said dada. This chapter definitely earned my tears. Welcome back Ian we missed you....Im soooo happy.
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Hurry Up and Wait Some More
Goodie commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Hurry Up and Wait Some More
yup great chapter. A wedding and adoption...sweeet. I know Ian will make a full recovery, cant wait for him to come back to us. Almost missed the POV change and had a moment of confusion, but that was a brilliant way to get the backstory. Vic is gay,,,yay. Real sign of trustworthyness that everyone kept this little secret for Vic to reveal in his own time. Hayden did have a BF in high school but hope hes single now so Vic can maybe find someone for himself,,,,,a hot younger former student ( thats not too weird right). Funny thing, when Hayden was whispering in Vics ear I thought he was secretly confessing hed always had a high school crush on cam or Ian, but maybe he was havent fantasies about getting it on with the teacher. Again, lovely story. -
All pain hurts, but its definitely worse when you know it was caused by mindless stupidity. Claire definitely played mama bear role well, not one to mess with, go mommy! Couldnt help the tears when cam felt Ian trying to squeeze his hand. Now hurry up and bring Ian back to us soon. Love this story.
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Noooo, I stopped reading a different story which was leaving me not feeling good to come back to happy times at Barnstable and you do this???lol. Please dont let anything happen to Ian, baby Eli needs both his daddies. Least I dont have to wait to find out. The vacay sounded like a blast btw and Im so glad the boys got this special time and Im looking forward to them enjoying many more. ....right???
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Another super chapter in another of your super stories, glad I was told about this one. Charlie sounds like a real character and Im glad he and Jacob found each other. Everyone is pairing up nicely, maybe even Liz can find someone to start anew with. Loving this.
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Yay happy family. So glad baby Eli became the uniting factor to bring everyone back together. The little guy needs all the family and support he can get. Speaking of baby boy, I have to figure out sometimes if Cam is referring to Elias or Ian. Great chapter and lovely story.
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Awww baby Eli will want for nothing with two awesome daddies and two sets of doting grandparents. Shame about Janet, every boy needs a mommy figure. Hope Liz might step up and help. Feel for Janets dad, hope he wants to be part of little Elis life. Sure, they wanted him adopted out but now hes the only link to his lost daughter so heres hoping. Touching and beautiful story with some raunchy playtime thrown in. Yup I go through a lot of kleenix reading your stories.
