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  1. Goodie

    Chapter 20

    Elsa Torne/Earl Stone, very clever. " I’m impressed that your first questions weren’t about my genitals..." , that made me chuckle because it was admittedly in the back of my mind. If anything, I think Marion taking action against the Orders leadership has painted a target on herself. Their influence seems to be far reaching and their are likely many who would not have been present at her little coup. Also, I'm not sure either her or Jared would be willing to waste Ironian lives helping Alex in his war. Remembering of course they still plan to try him for his "crimes" against her fa
  2. Goodie

    Chapter 19

    If I rememeber correctly I think he felt with Yago being Ysabels brother and her being married to Darion, he wouldn't get their support if he tried to take revenge on Yago, or something like that. Just made me think, it would actually be justice if it was Devan who finally killed Yago in the end to avenge his butchered family.
  3. Goodie

    Chapter 19

    Another great chapter VVesley. It allows for a short breather as we await further developments. I'm glad to see Adrian and Kade now safe aboard ship and preparing to leave for the comparative safety of the Illjard away from all the dramas. I'm looking forward to seeing how Kade adapts to his new role and tries to fit in with his new people. Yago seems "happy" which is a disturbing thought. He claims his plans are coming along and unfortunately I believe him. I expect we are in for a nasty surprise. Meanwhile poor Talia continues to fight a losing struggle against the effects of the inculc
  4. Goodie

    God's Plan

    Great chapter again. Fingers crossed for mason moving in and completing the family. Like everyone else thrilled to see the mention of Ryder and Messiah. Nice to see Sadie too, just hoping she has come for good reasons and that she isn't the bearer of bad tidings, otherwise welcome indeed to SF. Thanks for the new update
  5. Goodie

    Chapter 18

    Awesome chapter. Alex change in tactics by going for the enemy leadership has paid off and likely turned the tide at the capital especially with the death of Davora. Let's just hope that Alex own wounds are not too serious and he will recover to enjoy the victory. Meanwhile in Monceit, the Order continues to cause havoc and consternation and it's looking like Marion has had enough. I wonder if she'll take a more active part in the war once she realises Yago is pulling the strings controlling the Order. Finally and best of all, victory for our friends at the Di Coteau manse. Was looki
  6. Thanks for another great chapter. “But you’re the first person to tell me they love my son.”.....awww so sweet. Can't wait for Dizzies' reaction when Artie finally gets to tell him.
  7. Goodie


    Mmmm this chapter makes me hungry for donuts, on my to-do list tomorrow. Knowing the shop is his pride and joy, Adam is probably really thrilled to have the boys take an interest and share in this with him. And it's looking like they are going to do really well, especially Dizzy, with his little mission to improve the whole inventory system. It came as a bit of surprise to me that they hadn't shared the L word yet after all these months of dating, but at least now Artie seems to have a plan in mind to make it a special moment....you go boy!! Thanks Mr. Ace for another great chapter, absolutely
  8. Goodie

    Partner in Crime

    Yessss....great to see another chapter of the Golden City ! I love that Artie is really beginning to see in Adam a proper father figure. Makes him giving Ezra the short shift all the sweeter. However, I don't see Ezra as the type to just accept that and we probably haven't seen the last of him. I too wish he would just f/o back to Dallas and stay out of Arties life. Hope to see more of the crew soon, thanks for the update,
  9. Goodie

    Chapter Nine

    That was decidedly different than what I'd usually tackle but no less remarkable for it's gripping plot and powerful character development. Of course I'm glad Corey survived this ordeal though I'm sure he will continue to suffer the effects for quite some time. As for Sebastian, he's exactly where he needs to be. I still think he's a tragic character, that a better life could have moulded a happier and more productive individual. The sappy side of me would like to continue to believe that there's noone beyond help or redemption, of course I've never had to deal with the Sebastians of the world
  10. Goodie

    Chapter Eight

    I too am of the opinion that this is too small a town to have any kind of proficient police force, certainly none that would have had to deal with an actual homocide. And yes, Corey may well suspect Sebastian, but will he go into denial or worse confront him? I don't think Sebastian would kill Corey unless he was somehow trapped with no out and decided he and Corey would be together in death. It's scary and horrible to think about.
  11. Goodie

    Chapter Seven

    Corey knows this is not right but is trapped anyway by his ineptitude brought on by his anxiety. Trying to break up with Seb is probably the closest he will ever come to finally breaking free, however, since that failed he's not likely to ever attempt being assertive again. I'm really hoping Zoe is clever enough to recognise the danger and encourage the rest of their friends to help. A very small part of me feels sorry for Seb and wishes he could get the help he needs, his whole life and upbringing has been a tragic affair and now he's destined to be that psycho kid that lost it one day and no
  12. Awww can't believe it's over, that was such a sweet story and I really enjoyed watching Travis bloom under the care of the guys. I hope we get to see more of TC as it's a wonderful tale that deserves to be told. Of course the real gift is in the telling of the story and I particularly enjoyed your writing style. Not only did I fall in love with your characters, but you painted an appealing picture of Tampa. Excellent job all round and thanks again for sharing.
  13. One of my fav chapters I think. Adam may well have the solution to helping out in both Bryce and Travis situations. The job and house offer are both timely and generous. Adam always had good instincts about these things and was quick to pick up on Travis interest after viewing the sketchbook, so it's no surprise he would offer to help the newest additions to the group. I'm worried though about his take on Rob and Giles and hope that for once he might be wrong, I like Giles and think he's a good sort. My favourite part had to be when Travis was internalising his thoughts about Jer, clearly maki
  14. A really thoughtful and emotional chapter. The closeness of Rob and Jeremy, which is not all just about Jer needing emotional support, but also about Rob wanting to grow and expand his familial circles having grown up with not much family before being adopted by Adam. Only just met, but I already feel for Travis. I get his social anxiety issues, Rob was really great at talking him down. It's plain to see Travis and his uncle/dad come from a different less affluent set of circumstances. I can see the beginnings of something developing between Trav and Jer. Always rooted for the underdog a
  15. Goodie

    Chapter 22

    Thanks Droughtquake, wow there are so many, I got a lot of reading to do
  16. Goodie

    Chapter 22

    A great story with all the necessary elements to keep us engaged and entertained. Loved the way it ended with a positive outlook for the future of both Drew and Cole. I've heard SS mentioned a lot, now I'm going to have to try and find it. Thanks for sharing this awesome story.
  17. Goodie

    Chapter 21

    Stubbies. Now those were really short shorts. Glad that Drew and Cole were reunited, in Endwell of all places, gotta be a good sign. Considering all the drama they caused, not surprising Morgan won the court case and got the house and younger kids, Ginger being just like the mother is probly better off with her. Can begin to breathe a sigh of relief as we near the finsh line and everything is beginning to resolve itself satisfactorily. Of course with that comes the inevitable sadness that the ride will soon be over. But GA is a huge fair with many rides and attractions to keep us co
  18. Goodie

    Chapter 17

    Hope Alfie made it. If Luca had any concerns about his worth and what if anything he had achieved in life, then Alfie's sacrifice should prove just how much esteem the commom folk hold him in. I just knew Eamon would come. His blindness is no handicap when it comes to saving the love of his life. I especially enjoyed watching Adrian display his prowess with a blade as well as his crown. I think Kade was equally surprised and just as impressed. As dire as their situation seems to be, I'm still quietly confident that help will arrive soon from an unexpected source. Alex and Carl are to
  19. I really enjoyed this chapter. Loved the way Rob quickly went to comfort Jer and help him sleep. Having gone through something similar he was a great comfort and support to his younger cousin/brother. Having to go through the house was a difficult and emotional ordeal. The towel and the box of toys was a funny moment though and helped lift the spirits a little. After such a tragic loss, Rob, Adam and Duncan are probably three of the best people around to help Jeremy get through this. They are even offering to adopt so Jer can feel he has a stable home and future and I think they will mak
  20. It's great to be back in Tampa with these guys and getting to meet Jeremy. Kinda sad about Jeremy losing his folks. I actually liked Ian and thought he made a really great brother figure, always caring and very supportive of Duncan. At least Jer has the love and support of his new family, but I can imagine it will still be really hard for him. And I got to learn something new, not having an understanding or appreciation of what it meant to be asexual. I loved the other TC books and by the looks of things I'm pretty confident I'm going to really enjoy this one too.
  21. Goodie

    Chapter Five

    I'm really worried for Corey. I'm especially concerned his friends might end up becoming so alienated by Sebastian that they actually abandon Corey leaving him at the mercy of that psycho. I hope that isn't the case because Corey needs his friends. I wonder if he's confident enough in his friendship with Zoe to mention that he's being pressured into sex.....probably not.
  22. Goodie

    Chapter Four

    For sure Grandma is next on the list ( sorry to add that I wouldn't actually miss her ), then after that probably Corey's friends till there's noone left to come between them. He's going to need a much bigger shed.
  23. Goodie

    Chapter Three

    Under an entirely different set of circumstances these to would probably work out well together. However, knowing what we do about Sebastian, I just want to scream out to Corey to run and don't look back. Honestly, Sebastian gives me the shivers, what a great character you've created.
  24. Goodie

    Chapter Two

    Umm yeah this just got weird. I thought at the start Seb was kind of tragic and really felt for him and his circumstances. Moving on he actually turned into someone I'm not sure I would like at this point. Having a fear of spiders, the bug thing really creeped me out. Now I'm sitting wondering if he really would just let his uncle die like that. On to the next chapter.
  25. Goodie

    Chapter One

    Interesting story. I think that with his social anxiety issues, this is probably a good way for Corey to ease himself into getting to know someone. I'd expect that were this secret admirer to approach him in person he'd probably freak. Looking forward to seeing how this goes.
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