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The bed sounds truly strange but obviously big enough for two. omg!🤔 thanks Mark.
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Cadet First Class • I
Theo Wahls commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet First Class • I
Poignant. Ritch turns twenty one soon, but that day in the cemetery he became his own man. Touching, very touching. Good writing Carlos and thank you for it. -
What a cliff hanger. Garjah is large, muscular and now a prehensile organ. Just saw a Nature episode about whales including camera footage of a their large 'PREHENSILE' organ. Ooh La La! Essell you have a wild ride coming. Awaiting the next chapters less than patiently.😘
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Cadet Second Class • IV
Theo Wahls commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • IV
I love family get-togethers. Owen can keep CJ under control and I hope Ritch will find his anchor. He is finding out he misses and yearns for family both Abello's and The Wing. Mayhaps Lucy?? -
Counting down the hours till Paul is history. A great boost to George's adventure. St Michael's Palace is a dangerous place at this point in time. Great writing, Mark Arbour, as always. Thanks.
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There were instances in my life when I often thought an extra hand could be useful. With as many erotic touchy feeling zones on a human as there are, orgasmic highs could be HIGH. Cia, I thought there would be movies. I had popcorn all planned, plus a bit of lube. 😜
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Cadet Second Class • III
Theo Wahls commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • III
Ritch is certainly growing and becoming a fine adult in the CJ world. The broken nose will make his pretty face far more interesting. Nice chapter Carlos, good writing. -
Ooh La La! sex, aliens, and jealousy. What fun!😘
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Mark Arbor, it is always a joy to awake to the morning and find another chapter about Granger. Thanks for the writing. It is nice to hear from Caroline and the catch up with the family.
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I agree it does seem Timok is a bit too clinical in his assessments as to how Essell responded. Maybe he is jealous of Garjah and Essell. Maybe he is searching for something more deadly in Essell's amalgamation and adoption of odd gene strains. These ETs have certainly avoided humans up until now. Keep writing, Cia.
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It seems WOW!!! is the word for this chapter. Between the planet and E.T.s and human DNA, there is a mega gene pool reacting in Essell and Garjah. How is Bouncer going to react? 😃
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Such a chapter this was. so much love and growth amongst the new family of Prince Kas and the Kamrans. Kastan was fortunate to find Jihan. The wedding bonfire and presentation solidified Silver Shore Valley but this failed attack solidified Kastan and Jihan and wrapped them with family bonds that should go for ever. Now I am not being greedy, I hope not at least. I will wait patiently for the next chapter. Thank you for your writing.❤️
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I am so glad for a new chapter. Now I am over the top about another one so soon. Court politics throughout history are often deadly.Very excited about more. Great writing! A real pleasure to read. I love your attention to details and your visual imagery. Thank you.😘
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There is yet a secret about the origin of the four armed ET's. There are still many things Essell does not know about these ET's. Timok just recognized the sameness between the two genome? Is there a stronger connection to humans than they will admit? How long would it take for humans under duress on a planet and interaction with plants, animals and other forms of life, which forced DNA changes, to survive? Is Essell just another recruit? Still lots of questions that need answers. Thanks for a new chapter. I look forward to Wednesdays. (Sorry, alien is currently a politically charged word I am trying not to use.)
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Cadet Third Class • IV
Theo Wahls commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
Great chapter Carlos. I support animal rescue big time. My husband and I adopted an abused dog . I cannot believe someone could or would do such things to our fellow denizens on this planet. Not a real car person but 'Hats off' to Ritch for one upping CJ with Heinrich. LOL😀 -
Glad to finally learn more about this specie. It was a long time coming but in the quiet of a bedroom the privacy allows awkward and personal questions and answers to be dealt with. I wonder about the bots. Ya know Essell might just get used to four arms.LOL.🥰
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Fascinating! The possibilities are enormous. I have a custom knee made from an MRI and then translated by computers to a 3d printer and voila a new titanium/resin knee. I think Timok's process is far better if only a future process. Chill Essell it will all be fine in the end.
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Garjah's concern for Essell is beyond comforting. There is a connection between the two developing. There do not seem to be any females on this alien ship. Strange! If they bring forth young are they on the home planet and in a creche? Do they produce broods in axolotl tanks? Is there a queen like ants or bees? Are they in a hive? So much is not known. But I trust Bouncer's judgement. He is such a good puppy.
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What an important chapter and nothing happened except Granger went to chapel with the Tsar and had a chat with Daventry. I am sure the news he received in such a way was typically court news mongering. The fact that the countess chose Granger to speak about it will keep the gossip going for a long time. Considering Napolean will invade Russia albeit with disastrous results only shows how things change as quickly as they do. One more month goes by before Tsar Paul is murdered. Granger and Daventry are definitely in perilous times and dangerous territory. Good chapter!
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Cadet Third Class • I
Theo Wahls commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • I
Another great chapter. It's nice to see events, which were only mentioned in other stories. Ranger was a great story on its own. It is nice to see Brad back and learn more of his interactions with Ritch (in the first person). There is trouble in the future. Isn't Ritch required to report Donovan to his superiors as well as Donovan reporting himself? It is part of the Code of Honor. Yes/No? -
As we are still in the dark about these extra-terrestials, they could be clones or at least an intense caste culture or ghola culture. Six legged beings are often caste (ants) or spiders in the octopod form. Adrian Tchaikovsky's Children of Time views intelligence in a alien environment. Clarke's Rama has very intelligent octopods. They seem paranoid in their reticence to name themselves or their planet system. Cia keeps the chapters comingvery regular ao time will tell.
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Many species can grow lost appendages. Perhaps Timok can help Essell grow a new hand. Ever really think about those extra arms? Bouncer is still a star.😀
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Cadet Fourth Class • IV
Theo Wahls commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Fourth Class • IV
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Will Bouncer let them get that parasite out Essell? Will he need to be put under again? Waiting for the next chapter. Will Bouncer bond with Garjah if he saves Essell? Good cliff hanger.
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Cadet Fourth Class • I
Theo Wahls commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Fourth Class • I
Carlos always a joy to see a new story about the CJ universe. Thanks for the great writing. I know how hard it is to write a saga and keep all the characters under control. Oh and thanks for the missing aunt. Ritch needs family as we all do.
