Theo Wahls
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Earthlings have learned early in their development "never get between a boy and his dog".
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Wonderful Bouncer is back!
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Garjah puts two and two together fast. Ruminate Essell on wiliness.
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Absolutely I rushed reading this also. I need to read it again. What action! Thanks for a wonderful X-mas gift. It has made my Christmas week. Thank you for a great chapter. 😂❤️
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Genetics works various ways. There are parental genes which frequently show up in children as they did in their ancestors. Talents can be genetic and influence the talents of offspring. However the wild genes that inhabit man are always the surprises for humanity. Frank Herbert pretty much covers all of that territory. We as earthlings persist due to these differences. Older alien races may have developed over a longer time in a caste system and abilities may be rigid in the gene pool, think clone. Essell better start using his human talents. He needs to think outside the box or else without his environmental suit he might not make it. Let's not forget Bouncer, poor puppy, out like a broken light bulb. Three cheers for Bouncer and Essell.
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Thanks for a good couple of chapters. Understanding Russian history is so difficult. One step forward and two steps back seems to be the favored response to anything new. The Tsars were autocrats of the worse sort even when they were trying to be modern. They have not changed much. From a forward thinking Gorbachov to a new tsar with secret police and poisonings of those that disagree. A very enjoyable view of an intriguing era. Thanks Mark for your writing.
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Essell, be careful. Keep gathering info and before you do anything You will need Bouncer.....
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I do not think the aliens are hiding only themselves. The biome of the planet could hold many interesting substances that humans could adopt and adapt. The aliens were not only rescuing Essell. They are also trying to hide the planet's secrets. This story gets more mysterious with each chapter.
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These would be assassins do not seem to notice Firuz for what he is, 'DANGEROUS'. Such an enjoyable chapter. The tension mounts. Thanks for great writing.
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Had to look at photos of St. Michael's Castle. What a paste up. Bizarre but ornately attractive. My husband used the word "ungapatchka" a yiddish word to suit the strangely designed palace. 😉 Thanks for a great chapter. The countdown for the overthrow of the crazy Emperor begins 36 days and counting. Cant wait for the rest.
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Mark Arbor, you said this chapter would have an interesting character. A man with a very recognizable name, Count Pavel Stroganov and his eponymous beef dish. The slavs do love their sour cream. I hope Granger likes it as well. lol😁 A good chapter with repartee and finesse. Granger does it again. Thanks!
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The hurdle of the wedding dance is conquered. With this final(?) rite accomplished Nisa'a shenanigans grow most desperate. I hope Firuz does not get lost in Neith's charms. Pay attention Jihan and Firuz. Looking forward to more chapters, thank you Sui for wonderful writing.
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I just read wiki's account of this child woman. A formidable personae with an interlocking relationship with England.Mark you write about such an interesting historical period. It makes me search out bios and historical events of the period.
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I am a big fan of Mark Arbor's George Granger. Court shenanigans wrapped up in manners are always interesting and George finds his way through it all with such success. Good chapter. Thanks for great writing in this time of self quarantining. 😊
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Great chapter! So Jihan is now papa.So nice. Thank you for the map and character list, it is most helpful.
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Another good story about the CJ world. Write sufficient biographies And there will be an entire universe of hot men. Looking forward to Colt and Tony Carlos I hope your list of todos is long, these are addictive. Thank you!
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Loads of good history lessons. I hope the protests can move forward. A change in the administration and a lot of congressional seats have to be changed in the next election to continue to achieve equality in how people are treated. A very good chapter, a clarion call to reform.
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Pretty much agree with everyone. It's a great chapter but I cannot wait for more. I hope for more adventures with this now bicoastal group of men. ❤️😍
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Good story characters, but oh how meddlesome gods can be. lol😉
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It seems Brett's inner surfer dude is creeping out. Sun, sand and sea are the new three 'esses' for a jarhead. Good chapter: low key, nice people, and a house under control. Thanks Carlos!
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Good one. Brett already downloaded the loan agreement with details of each piece. It's where all the pieces are. I wonder how well decorated the board members offices are and/or their homes, not to mention Fernando's home, his girl friend's home, and even Auntie Meryl's place.
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Nalbo slips away like the craven man he is and another beast enters the pictures. Good thing Brett and Cesar are becoming bi-coastals. Great chapter Carlos, a fun read on Friday to start the weekend. 😃
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When love grows like this love, strength comes to do what is necessary to keep it. Good luck Kas and Jihan.
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I am being patient about new chapters though obsessive about most things. Just a touch of OCD about new chapters. I know how hard it is to write a well written story and I do appreciate the hard work. Crown Prince Yoshi and Seiryu Spirit are favorites. I will bide my time reading her other stories and enjoying a little romance now and then.
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I am glad I am not the only obsessive about new chapters. I sometimes wonder if Dicken's readers had the same agonies waiting for another pamphleted chapter to be hawked in the streets. I agree The empress is too transparent. She wanted Firuz and Jihan to find the poisons, but why? Financial strength always attracts attention and politics always rears its ugly head.
