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Chapter 10: Christmas is a Time to . . . .
Doha commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 10: Christmas is a Time to . . . .
This was a heavy chapter but needed. Jason and Peter are going to face more uphill struggles because of money. Peter needs to let go of his insecurity and accept that Jason loves him and no amount of money will change this. -
Yet another great chapter. A fight about money and insecurities and emotions. Quite deep. Fingers crossed for these 2.
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The frustration levels are going to be difficult for both our guys, but they are worth more than any amount of frustration. We all want them to succeed and to be happy together. 😊
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Chapter 7: Three's a Crowd
Doha commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 7: Three's a Crowd
Well thT was all quite fortuitous. 😅 good job @Andrew Q Gordon -
Chapter 6: Ask Me in the Morning
Doha commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 6: Ask Me in the Morning
It just gets better and better. -
Chapter 5: Shot Across the Goal
Doha commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 5: Shot Across the Goal
Great for Jason and Darryl, however, being captains of the soccer team will make them more high profile. This could make Jason's relationship with Peter, more dangerous than before. -
Chapter 4: Dare to be Happy
Doha commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 4: Dare to be Happy
Glad that they are getting to know each other better. There are going to be awkward moments for sure, but they can work through those. -
Chapter 3: The Best Laid Plans
Doha commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 3: The Best Laid Plans
Wow. I understand that nervousness so well. This is so true to life and so well written. -
I re-read this and almost cringe - I've learned a lot from a lot of talented people since I started this story 5 years ago. If I had enough time I'd love to go back and rework it some and clean it up - sigh, time, time time. Thanks Dave! You know, I've read a lot of stories on GA. I'm loving this. Your writing is engaging and the words fly by.
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It's a line I may have to try. 😆
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Whichever way it goes with Damian and contact with Jackie, she remains his mother and the negative impact on Damian, has already been immense and will be even more so, after a prison visit. My own view is that Damian needs protection first and guidance from a professional who understands 10 year-olds. Ludo should visit Jackie, but not too soon either or it will arouse suspicion. Rather just leave her well alone until after the trial.
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Chapter 1 A Chance Meeting
Doha commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 1 A Chance Meeting
Why did I take so long to find this story? Loved the first chapter. -
Mrs Winston appears again, as I had hoped she would. Alongside Lesley, Gordy, Graham and Dot, Mrs Winston could be part of a great friendship circle for our two men. ❤️ Gordy running a kids party? 😆 🤣 they would never forget it and the mums will want to be there too.
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School Issues & Date Night
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in School Issues & Date Night
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School Issues & Date Night
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in School Issues & Date Night
This would have been a distressing incident for the boys. Well done Adam, for standing up for Damian! As for religious fervor, this is something you find in every faith and every community to some degree. It was bound to come out, but I think the headmistress dealt with it well. She too, may become member if the circle.
