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Like the others, I worry that Rabiah, is more interested in having a pet demon than getting Theodrik home. She may be helpful or self-serving. It could swing either way.
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I'm so sorry that Nathan finds himself in this situation. I'm flat rhey got the crystals. I had quietly hoped that ma6be the tentacles could offset the gobling bite. I'm holding out for a hero. Maybe a specialist wizard doctor.
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Like those who have already commented, Rabiah is not to be trusted. She is definitely interested in keeping Theodrik as a kind of tool/servant/weapon. Our guys are going to have to be very careful. I'm still hopeful for a cure. Perhaps one of these fractal dimensions will hold the solution.
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This was a very exciting chapter. I hope that between the daemon and Rabiah they can save Nathan.
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I do wonder how they could have made reservations at the hotel in a land of horses and no phones? 🤔
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Indeed, they do have consequences. I've certainly seen that in my own life. I'm sorry for Nathan and Brohm, but hopeful that solution will be found. Nathan MUST tell Brohm. He must!
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Yes. I'm also hoping for a miracle. Morgana maybe, or the healer they are going to visit.
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A fascinating chapter with networks appearing that are smaller and more close-knit rhan one would imagine. I wonder how Jonty will turn out. I'm glad Thomas is moving in.
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Another super chapter. Tying up loose ends can be a messy business but it's best to get it done. Thomas is a very good foil for Keith. This works so well.
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That was a delightful chapter and had me smiling throughout. Our guys are getting so comfortable around one another. It's good though, that they swiftly deal with little irritations.
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This trip is taking them past a number of landmarks from their old lives. A trio down memory lane as they go on. It seems like Brohm and Cormac have reached an understanding.
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I saw that immediately as an option @drsawzall - Theodrik transporting them and saving 2 weeks. Im glad that Brohm has got his feelings out in the open and that he and Nathan can move forward.
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Well the friendly demon returns for help. If his return to rhe underworld closes the portal for the goblings then I hope that Nathan and Brohm can figure a way, or perhaps rhe monk knows. A trip to Morgan might be on the cards.
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Dog Whisperer is a short story of two men who find one another, whilst workong jobs they love. It is a pleasing mix of realism and hopefulness that lifts the spirit. A great weekend afternoon read.
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That was good. Two men meet, eventually fall in love and the rest is history. I loved it. 😍
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Absolutely 💯 true. Granger is a master strategist whether at sea or on land.
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Another super chapter. 👌 The two men are sorted with mistresses and society will be placated. I do hope that these convoluted living arrangements do not create more barriers than opportunities for Granger and Calvert to develop their own relationship.
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Hmmm. Truth seeer and truth teller, living with truth hiders. This is an interesting set of possibilities. How will the goblin bite affect the magic that keeps their identities hidden.
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What exactly are those squat little creatures- vileness personified. And what will that bite and stabbing pain up the arm produce? I hope it does not change Nathan on some way. Nathan is far too trusting, not a trait one would expect in a retired assassin. Eyes open for the coming chapters.
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So we meet the beggar who calls himself Cormac. I wonder if that is his real name. 🤔 Tarn. 😔 😟 I liked him, but there was no way he could stay. Nathan and Brohm need to keep their tracks well and truly covered. Brohm gets a little too physical with Nathan at times and I hope he never gets pushed too far.
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I'm quite certain Tarn will show up again and as for the demon and the beggar... who knows but I suspect they will both re-enter at the most inopportune times.
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Tarn is back. I'm glad. He was such a huge help. I hope he can find a new purpose in life and that it will develop out of this opportunity from Nathan. It would feel redemptive. Brohm, of course, is totally justified in his anger. And as for the beggar... who knows what will come of it all.
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I wonder if the beggar is simply in disguise? Is their a witches guild or some such group for magic folk? Ramsey has taken 20 years to mourn his wife and is still raw. I wonder if there is more that is not yet revealed. 🤔
