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Boys Like You Don’t End Up With The King
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Boys Like You Don’t End Up With The King
Silly Billy. No amount of saying that grass is red will make it so. Rusty has always been mine. 😉 -
They have the makings of a horse stud right there. A great idea to capture the entire herd. 👏👏👏 As they make plans their lives will be increasingly intertwined. I can't wait for them to touch each other for the first time. I can't hardly wait ya'll.
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Its been a tremendously busy 2 weeks so I was delighted to come in and see 2 chapters to read. Yaaay. Jubal and Luke make a really good team. I'm sure Luke's hand on his hip was not a coincidence and rhat Luke was actually awake looking at him. The sheriff is jealous. I hope it doesn't become a problem later. 😕
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Porvus is probably being honest about his fears and the resulting chaos if they actually come to pass. Jamie and the gang need to proceed with absolute caution.
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Absolutely. If he doubts himself, he can rely on the obvious adoration his children have for Perry. That should get him moving. Fingers crossed🤞
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Wow!! What a heartfelt chapter. I'm so glad Jed went over and talked some sense into Kyan. Max also helped soften him up. Max is a good friend and Jed is a great father. It's time now that Perry and Kyan make up.
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Thank You For The Heartache
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Thank You For The Heartache
Wow. Rusty really is wallowing . He needs a big wake up call. August is a good friend, but he needs Jonathan or Maddox to give him a good shake. Matty is quietly dying. He also needs to go and get what he wants. Now is not the time to lie down and give up. -
Thank You For The Heartache
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Thank You For The Heartache
You are a funny bunny. 😄 Rusty is right here beside me having a good laugh.- 45 comments
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What an interesting new magick this is. 👏 Now how far can they trust the word of a known dark mage? 🤔 Lodda has obviously undergone some kind of strange metamorphosis and is endangering the continued life of the entire planet. Let's see...
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Well finally they have reached Methuwan, the lair of Porvus and possibly of Lodda. They should proceed with extreme caution. It is going to be a grueling few hours for them all.
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I'm very glad that Sedwick got his dick back in its proper form. I was hoping they would go back and attend to that, just in case...
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A LOT of dancing I would think. 😆 🤣
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Lukas and Jubal make an excellent team. They plowed through a huge job together and did it well. They are definitely experiencing a mutual attraction, both physical and emotional. I'm interested to see who will make the first move and how rhat will take place. I expect the outcome to be monumental! I love this story. Thank you for writing.
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While I am glad Urvan is defeated, there is still something poignant about his passing. This aspect was extremely well written. 👏 👏 👏
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That was an amazing chapter. Our group of warrior mages have become a monumental force to be reckoned with. Where is Jamie's Master Mage? I've got a feeling he will be needed I the final confrontation. I hope Jamie goes back to the castle soon to restore the prince "to full health".
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Jamie's power alone is sufficient to defeat Urvan. As a group they may be almost ready to defeat Porvus and Lodda and their plan for world domination. Removing the false memories has unleashed a mighty confidence and energy in Jamie.
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Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
Hudson is a legend! Jasper owes his life to Hudson. I hope he will try living a different life after this. As for Otis and Hudson. I have stars 🌟 in my eyes and a smile on my face. -
Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
Detective @Joie J. I'm with you. These kids need saving and Hudsom needs support. Let's be like: -
Well yes. Obviously. 😆
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These two silly buggers need to step back for a moment and get some common sense into the situation. Rusty is speaking on behalf of Matty in this self-imposed argument. He MUST sort himself out. Hopefully August can help. Matty is also jumping to conclusions. I'm hopeful that they will quickly get past this momentary insanity.
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Rusty is actually damaged, but there is a solid core of goodness that will win in the end. 🫂 🤗
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Oh the extent of this delusion is pitiful. Sweetie, it will be alright.
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Well what a charming little chapter. I'm so happy I could fart rainbows. You are a troll !!! Brrathe breathe breathe. Now that I've calmed meself down I can go on. I respect Kyan's wish to honor his late wife, but really!!! No!! The best way he can honor Dayna is to give her chikdren a wonderful second parent. Perry is that parent. Kyan must open his heart and his eyes.
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I'm sure it will Mr I Live in Spain 🇪🇸 😀 😉
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That was a lovely chapter. The promise of something between them is in the air and tantalizing. I can't wait for the moment they realise that they are safe with each other. The cabin is going to be beautiful. I can see it already. Thank you for that bit if building history.
