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This has been such fun!! What a great journey.Of course now that @Joie J. Is with John and @J.El has hitched up with Connor, Rusty and I are having a whale if a time.
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Who’s The Toppest Dog, After All?
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Who’s The Toppest Dog, After All?
Yay for Rybalt and Slicky Coolplums. Mr Preston is safe, Sunny Hill can remain a student haven and we're all happy. -
Who’s The Toppest Dog, After All?
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Who’s The Toppest Dog, After All?
We are too hot for Connor, but maybe @Joie J. and I could put on a bit of a show. -
Well, let's see if Hudson's cover has been blown. I doubt it, although a man scorned is not normally a good thing. 😕
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Agreed @raven1, there is trouble ahead.
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Well this new club is going to be awful and the depraved who go there will be witnessing live unsimulated action. I'm very glad Otis has Hudson as his temporary, on probation to being a full-time boyfriend.
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Yes @Headstall, Jubal is incredibly brave and a strong man. His love for Lucas and willingness to sacrifice his own life shows this. The emotional chaos he is experiencing is something that will only be resolved when Lucas reveals his love for Jubal. When that happens I want to be in the room!!
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That was a difficult chapter to read. Jubal is anxious in crowded settings and then further anxious about revealing his feeling to either Reid or Lucas, and then finally afraid that he has been found out and it's not reciprocated. In short, Jubal is a big emotional mess. I can't wait for he and Lucas to have that conversation
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Lol. @Gary L I'm also an English teacher. Thank you. 😊 your words are kind.
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Colin is growing into himself. This is great. I'm glad he told Jimmie what's what. Now for his mummy dearest. 😈
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That was a great chapter. I'm really glad rhey had a sleepover ☺ 😌 They are getting to know each ither and finding that they are enjoying the journey.
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A meeting between Brian, Gordon, Owain and Colin would be hysterical @Summerabbacat
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Coward might be a bit harsh. I think Colin is a quiet bloke, who has hidden himself away, because of shame, fear, or uncertainty in the face of perceived social and religious expectations. I'm sure he will make the right decision, when he has a good reason to do so.
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Otis spelt it out very well, didn't he?! 😄 😁 🤣
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What a fantastic scene. Otis thinking he is a student and Hudson a teacher, while Hudson just wants Otis to be his. This could end beautifully.
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Well @J.El, if you take Otis that will leave Hudson for moi.
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I love that Otis is trying to figure out how to get Hudson to sleep with him, when that is precisely what Hudson wants to do anyway.
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@J.El I've already had them!!
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Too damn right it's making me thirsty @Joie J.. 😆
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Yay, they've crossed the line. But now, as @drsawzall suggests, they need to talk about expectations and behaviours. If they don't, they could be in for loads of misunderstandings and heartbreak.
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Billy and Reid is a story I hope we can read one day too. An older man and a younger man together at a time when choice for homosexual men was extremely limited and very very dangerous.
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A fantastic chapter, superbly crafted. As Jubal goes through the two days delivering everything that Lucas could wish for, he is at the same time exploring what he wants and how he feels. Jubal is certainly being careful but I am confident that when Lucas returns, they will understand each other very clearly.
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Agreed. This is an outstanding example of layered, metaphorical writing. Jubal's work through those two days, building, repairing, rebuilding, removing all speak to his personal growth, building and rebuilding. I loved every word.
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Owain's mum sounds like a right old nag. Not so different for Miles. I'm looking forward to Owain's take on Colin's bum. 😆 🤣 😂
