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What an interesting new magick this is. 👏 Now how far can they trust the word of a known dark mage? 🤔 Lodda has obviously undergone some kind of strange metamorphosis and is endangering the continued life of the entire planet. Let's see...
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Well finally they have reached Methuwan, the lair of Porvus and possibly of Lodda. They should proceed with extreme caution. It is going to be a grueling few hours for them all.
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I'm very glad that Sedwick got his dick back in its proper form. I was hoping they would go back and attend to that, just in case...
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A LOT of dancing I would think. 😆 🤣
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Lukas and Jubal make an excellent team. They plowed through a huge job together and did it well. They are definitely experiencing a mutual attraction, both physical and emotional. I'm interested to see who will make the first move and how rhat will take place. I expect the outcome to be monumental! I love this story. Thank you for writing.
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While I am glad Urvan is defeated, there is still something poignant about his passing. This aspect was extremely well written. 👏 👏 👏
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That was an amazing chapter. Our group of warrior mages have become a monumental force to be reckoned with. Where is Jamie's Master Mage? I've got a feeling he will be needed I the final confrontation. I hope Jamie goes back to the castle soon to restore the prince "to full health".
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Jamie's power alone is sufficient to defeat Urvan. As a group they may be almost ready to defeat Porvus and Lodda and their plan for world domination. Removing the false memories has unleashed a mighty confidence and energy in Jamie.
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Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
Hudson is a legend! Jasper owes his life to Hudson. I hope he will try living a different life after this. As for Otis and Hudson. I have stars 🌟 in my eyes and a smile on my face. -
Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
Detective @Joie J. I'm with you. These kids need saving and Hudsom needs support. Let's be like: -
Well yes. Obviously. 😆
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These two silly buggers need to step back for a moment and get some common sense into the situation. Rusty is speaking on behalf of Matty in this self-imposed argument. He MUST sort himself out. Hopefully August can help. Matty is also jumping to conclusions. I'm hopeful that they will quickly get past this momentary insanity.
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Rusty is actually damaged, but there is a solid core of goodness that will win in the end. 🫂 🤗
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Oh the extent of this delusion is pitiful. Sweetie, it will be alright.
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Well what a charming little chapter. I'm so happy I could fart rainbows. You are a troll !!! Brrathe breathe breathe. Now that I've calmed meself down I can go on. I respect Kyan's wish to honor his late wife, but really!!! No!! The best way he can honor Dayna is to give her chikdren a wonderful second parent. Perry is that parent. Kyan must open his heart and his eyes.
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I'm sure it will Mr I Live in Spain 🇪🇸 😀 😉
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That was a lovely chapter. The promise of something between them is in the air and tantalizing. I can't wait for the moment they realise that they are safe with each other. The cabin is going to be beautiful. I can see it already. Thank you for that bit if building history.
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The Cornishman is a brief glimpse into the life if a conflicted, closeted man. Anyone who has lived a "religious life" will appreciate what the protagonist experiences. Well written and true to life.
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Although set 100 years ago, I think many men who have been brought up in religious households and have tried to live that life, know exactly what the Cornishman goes through. You expressed it all really well. Thank you.
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What a wonderful chapter. Granger has a fantastic group of people around him, children, friends and servants alike. I'm interested to see how the meeting between Michael and the king goes. 🤴 Thank you for another super installment.
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A perfect summary. 😆 I'm glad I read the chapter though. 😉
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Perry and Kyan are the cutest couple. That finger on the curb not moving, but promising the earth, is amazing. They really seem to understand each ither so well. They have had years to get to know each other, and perhaps it is that slow maturing of feelings and connections that makes it so powerful now.
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From the mouths of babes! Go Ava!
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Oh God!. John. Kill me now.
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My head is screaming and not in a good way!! Oh my goodness. Rusty is being so silly. Matty didn't choose the best time, but I understand fully why he told Rusty that he loved him. I'm counting on the Maddox, Jonathan and the gang to sort this mess out.
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