astone2292

Vincent's living the high life, isn't he? Sleep, play, eat, sex, then more sleep. The meeting was interesting, to say the least. Snyder's a doofus for thinking a random stranger's the best person to talk smack with. And of course Wagner's in on it! Oy vey...

Panda's got it real bad! Cy's fallen head over heels for Kap. Won't be long now until that purple mark on Kap's neck becomes all mangled... I loved introducing the interviewing characters. They're all so different! I can't wait for you to meet them. I think you mean Henry's hiring Dirk.

The internal dialogue is so much fun. Like you said, it adds complexity. If there was a second voice in my head and had a slight behavior difference than my own, I might be more outgoing

The EC might've seen this as an emergency, so they sent Bylus ASAP. Your options are valid, but put yourself in Vin's shoes. All you wanted to do was save your friends. Now you own (and have to manage) a very large city.

I agree with how VinW was correct, but you can't help but feel for VinH. Having your body not in control of itself, then watch yourself kill another person. It can be very scarring. Speaking of scarring, Stacy's a trooper. Or at least hasn't completely registered everything she's seen.

Dang, Alpo? Let's hope Vincent has the same plan.

I assure you, this alpha is an alpha. I'm so excited for you to read this section of the story!

Teehee! But that's part of the fun!

Dang, missed one day and the story gets flipped upside down. Wagner is trying to make up for his mistake. Cy and Kap are absolutely adorbs... With Stefan, there's no way to tell... unless someone finds some evidence.

Vincent's beginning to know what a real fight is like. Sure, we're still watching him spar, but now he knows how to take a hit.

Dave and Stacy are adorbs together! All because of a "hunk" cup... I just wonder how she'll take him being someone who would like to tinkle on fire hydrants. I think I've created a suspicion of other moles running around. With Stacy's roommate being a new character, everyone looked at Gwen with a magnifying glass.

I think you'll find this goddess to be much more entertaining than Dinbe, god of love. Cyrus is a man with plans, and most of them will make him giggle.

I like stirring up the chapters. I also like Richard. Information brokers are some of my favorite characters in stories and video games. There's bargaining, drama, and sometimes story progression. This phantom alpha's got you worried, raven. I'd reassure you, but I don't like spoilers.

Plenty to learn from watching both of your teachers duke it out. Yakob's a very knowledgeable person, so the fact he knows a God has possessed Vincent is surprising and also not.

The gods work in mysterious ways, and they can cause a lot to happen considering there's seven of them!

I seldom use the angry reaction, but I always assume it's used in reaction to the story plot. I've found that many happy people have dark and hidden pain. My characters are no exception to the rule.

Seems like Shaw's dingus attitude has been sent to Wagner... I so can't wait for you to meet this new alpha!

There's plenty to learn with Yakob. I'm not sure where Vincent would be without him. To this day, Vin's Shady Delivery Service is hilarious. Ooooh, the telepaths being private investigators, or spies! Interesting! I believe Cyrus is cementing the fact Kaplan will be his mate. He had reservations how his bear would approach the relationship, but continues to be surprised by the forwardness. ScuttlebuttShaw might be in some serious trouble...

The training is why I like Vincent. It's easy for a MC with superhuman to become overpowered in a story like this. Scenes like this are needed to remind the MC and the readers that combat experience is also needed. You can know how to fight, but being in a fight is totally different. With the report, it's important for files to accurate details. Before, the Maryland alpha had no idea Stefan was behind the Bolton murders. With Vincent's statement, the correct information will correlate if/when Stefan is caught and goes to trial. Traveling in the shadows is so important, and I can't believe I haven't had Vincent do more of it! You'll see more of it from here on out.

I didn't want to leave a warning, but I wanted to make sure every had their blood pressure meds on standby.

Dang, I thought I covered my tracks by making her Dirk's destined.

Oh she's Dirk's destined. Yep, ice cold. I'm excited about Snyder's scheme! Can't wait to torture y'all with that one.

You'll never know how hard I just laughed. Thank you for your across the pond conversion, and thanks for commenting! Glad you're enjoying the story so far.

I thought I was cruel for making Dirk destined mate a hunter and a cop-killer... I have never had to do so much research for a part of a story! Holy crap! Anything involving rent in NYC is waaaaaay overcomplicated. What could Snyder be doing? Dirk's mind is divided, and he must choose a side. Also, Ingle!!! Thanks for commenting! Glad you enjoyed it. Now, now. Just because Sarah's a telepath and Shaw's murderer is a telepath does not make Sarah Shaw's murderer. At least, not to our cast. Snooping of a certain hunter's house is required. On the build-up to this chapter, I kept thinking "Damn... I'm really going to break Dirk, aren't I?" I hope he fairs well. I left the tiniest of clues in both LitS and RitS. Anytime Ingle was thinking of something, Sarah was quick to ask "What's on your mind?" Not that she needed to ask, but it kept up appearances of her "caring." How will the Hunter's Association respond? Will they even learn of her death? Lot's of questions... Shifty authors? I'll take that as a compliment. I love the analysis! I imagine Sarah went under everyone's radar. Back in the RitS chapter 29 comments, everyone kept calling Stefan's accomplice "he." *laughs* Sarah is a master of self-manipulation. Having everyone's thoughts at your fingertips instantly hands you a Royal Flush, and she ran with it. However, it doesn't stop panic from taking over and shooting blindly at your front door. Not my first choice, but there's gotta be character flaws somewhere, right? Cy and Kap got eclipsed in this chapter. Much bigger fish to fry, but I'll always find time to give Patch his dosage for the week. *** Honestly, I was expecting more pitchforks and torches from the comment section. Thank y'all for commenting!!