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  1. 🏆 We may need to get you a space ship my friend! I freaking love this story!!! I love being able to "feel" the emotions in the meeting of the minds. Mason's anger is palpable 😠 ... felt the rage! Felt a little mischievousness in Vincent's sly smile...the little mage is up to something with his meeting with the ass! I can't wait!!!! Love the focus on Kaplan. I feel a "closeness" with him and what he has went through. His pain, fear can be felt throughout his meeting with Cyrus! I can't wait to read his story! And Cyrus...there is something about that panda!?! There is so much more to him than meets the eye! Simply love how this chapter starts with the core group and just shifts to Kaplan and the New York group without missing a beat... effortless transitions! I have said it before my friend...You are the King! 👑 I bow to your greatness.... 💎💎
  2. If the pedestal that we've put you on gets any higher, you will need oxygen to breathe!! You keep raising this story higher and higher! We might have get you a telescope so you can look at the rest of us from your home in the clouds! I don't know how you do it my friend...it's getting better and better!!!! The transitions are effortless and so smooth. The sex is hot as hell but not smutty...freaking brilliant writing!!!! One minute we are in Kentucky and the next we are in New York. No abrupt take off, no turbulence, no quick stop... just a smooth flight (change) from one place to the next!!! When this book is published, I want a signed copy!!!! (and I am not a collector of books but this one I want!!!) Again you have spun a chapter out that made me lose track of time and space......The sun was up when I started and now it has set.... I absolutely, positively love this story!!!
  3. Yep 3 maybe 4 times...I truly did enjoy it! I feel like it is pretty original. I don't think I have ever read a story that had this much "wolf dialogue" in it. It really is a brilliant idea! Southern Indiana is southern enough for me! I'm a bit further south than you and I do have an accent...not awful but you definitely know where I am from!! I use to hate it but a few of my friends who are not southerners, like it. I've been stuck with it for this long, I guess I'll keep it!!! Hahaha Frame it my friend!!!💎
  4. My friend, this story has not blossomed...it has EXPLODED!!! It shows how talented you truly are!!! You are a master!!!!
  5. Is it possible to have every chapter as my favorite? Well it is now! LOL You've done it again! You've upped your game to another, higher, level. Again, the ebb and flow of the story is perfection! I have read and re-read and re-read this chapter. You have brought a new perspective to this story with this chapter. In all my readings (and I read a lot of stories), I have never experienced the story from a "new born" wolf's point of view. That was absolutely genius!!! In all the other stories I've read where the wolf spoke, it was never more than "mate" or "mine" or to voice their emotions. Never have I experienced the "birth" of the new wolf. I loved it! (I must...I read this chapter 3 times before I went all wordy-nerdy on you.) Again, you have IT!!! You have to be southern! No one can "spin a yarn" like a southerner! I remember sitting on the front porch of my grandparents home and my Grandad would spin the best bedtime stories. I don't remember much about them but they were so captivating that when he finished, I almost always went to sleep in his arms, swinging on the porch swing. You brought back some wonderful memories, feelings for me with this chapter. That for me is what great stories are about...invoking feelings and sparking memories... Even though this is fiction at it's best, it brings real feelings, real emotions..... Still "mad" at the mole.... Hahahahaha! Well I think I've spun my yarn on this comment! Think I'm going to re-read this chapter again (4th)! I just love the newborn wolfs perspective!!! Brilliant!!!!!!!!! Gonna steal from a song...You, as a storyteller/author, are "shining bright like a diamond"!!! Thank you again for another great addition!!! 💎👑💎💎👑💎
  6. This is my favorite chapter by far! The sex was epic but that's not what made it so good! It's all about the love. It's not just the love between Mace and Vinnie...it's the love that they all have for each other (with the exception of the damn mole). Simply amazing again my friend... I can't tell you enough how much I am loving this perfectly mastered story! Even with all the action in this chapter, I felt a feeling of peace while reading it. The wolf's heart has been tamed, bringing he and Vinnie even closer together... Nothing but love for you my friend!!! Thank you again!!!!!!! You are the 👑!!!
  7. I always get so caught up when I read your story that I forget all that is going on around me.... You always invoke so many emotions with each chapter. Anger is a powerful emotion. I could literally feel the waves flowing off of Lei. And now as the chapter ends, I have the anger..who is the spy? I know time will tell but damn what a cliff hanger!!!! Awesome job as always my friend... I will be here waiting...impatiently LOL
  8. Another great chapter!!!! Perfect in my opinion and I am unanimous in that! LOL Seriously though, it was another great addition to an already intense story. Stefano is certainly digging his tendrils into Shaw...the action seems to be heating up again. The rise and fall of the action in your story is absolutely on point. So much to say but so little time...totally in love with this story and the characters! (Well not the evil ones hahaha) Thank you again for this story! Simply loving it!!!!!❤️
  9. Started with tears.....ended with tears... The "in-between" was absolutely astounding! The in-between had everything...love, friendship, loyalty, peace, and true Thanksgiving... You may have not intended this chapter to be a Thanksgiving story but it truly was. Family and deep friendships (getting deeper) set all together like the perfect Thanksgiving dinner. Perfect chapter for this perfect time of the year... The deep feelings between all of the "family" at the table at the end was the absolute best ending. Thank you for writing another perfect chapter especially focused on family and friends and their importance to each of us. This chapter was the perfect addition to a wonderful Thanksgiving... Wishing you guys all the best...much love my friend!!!
  10. You know you have "it" when as an author, you can make regular tasks like shopping a main focal point of the story and your subjects can't quit reading. You keep upping your game my friend. Another rollercoaster of emotions in this chapter! Anger, compassion, joy, and so many more.... And ending with the big one...Love! You got a few tears on this one too... Perfect ending to the perfect day! Thank you again for another great chapter .... nothing but love here for the author and the story!!! ❤️❤️
  11. Well to be honest, I get chills every time I see that you've updated... I don't get excited about much (lately) but I sure do over your chapters. I look forward to each and every word you post!! You are so right about the placement of this flashback - PERFECTION. Your timing is impeccable with it. I can't wait for more flashbacks... Have a great day my friend!!! Keep up the great writing!!!!
  12. I am so running out of adjectives to describe your work!!! I love the glimpse into the past and finding out the history between Elaine and Stefano (the king of all asses)... You are a master of working the written word so your readers can "see" the setting and the action. I can almost see the beauty of the library (before Stefano basically destroyed it), smell the fireballs burning the books, feel the cold of the frost shield and the snow breath, see the use of the ice to cover the burned hand. The list goes on...and on... You just keep spinning this tale in all directions. In most stories the flashbacks seem a little out of place...they sometimes mess with the continuity of the story. NOT this time...the flashback fits seamlessly into your story. Perfect timing as Vincent recovers from his dance. Again man, I love this story! I love knowing the history.... Keep spinning your magnificent tale!!! You are the 👑!!!
  13. Sorry I made you cry...NOT...HAHAHAHA! Seriously though, I am glad you were touched by my words. Your words (in every chapter) have touched me... I wait anxiously for each chapter and I hang on your every word... Keep up the great work my friend! You are amazing! (And I am unanimous in my opinion! 😂)Have a great day!!!
  14. Every chapter surpasses the previous one...this one is no exception. It is beyond anything I was expecting. The development of the characters is still awesome! You learn something new about them in every chapter. But what impressed me, captivated me the most was the detail of the dance. You know you are a good author when your "subjects" feel like they are there. I could almost feel the ups and downs of the roller coaster ride, the chill of the frost, the pride of the alpha... The imagery you put in the chapter was astounding. I could see the fireworks and feel the boom. In my opinion, the mark of a good author is the ability to take the reader and make them feel, see, experience, all that is going on in the moment. You have definitely achieved that! Amazing doesn't cut it anymore. You are a very gifted and talented author! So glad to be a part of this journey...
  15. Well I have to admit, I had a tear myself. The beginning of the dance and the entrance lived up to and exceeded all expectations. I can only imagine how the actual dance will go! You are spinning a tale that rivals (maybe surpasses) my favorite stories. Love, love, love this story!!!!
  16. Yep...as expected...another AMAZING chapter!!! The build up to the dance keeps getting better!!!! Awesome chapter (again!)!!!! You definitely have "it"!! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
  17. The build up to the dance continues!!! Loving it! I love how the other characters (their development) are at the forefront of the chapter but the dance is still the main event, for now..... Amazing work as always... You just keep getting better and better with your "storytelling"!!!! Top notch!!! 🏆 🥰❤️🏆
  18. Definitely!! I hate waiting but it is so worth it in the end!!! 😃👍
  19. Another day, another PERFECT chapter!!! I fall deeper and deeper in love with this story with every chapter!! Thank you again for such a wonderful story!
  20. Another chapter, another perfect addition to their story! The build up to the Mage Dance is spot on! Loved the "spot light" on Caleb and his family! Again I want more!!! 👍
  21. I love rollercoasters.... This chapter was definitely a rollercoaster of emotions. Happy and sad, over and over.... You know you have a good story when you are smiling and laughing in one moment and watery eyes in the next. An emotional rollercoaster in the best of ways, that is what this chapter is. Each chapter gets better and better. You always leave me wanting more.. (I know I keep saying that but it's the truth). 🥰💗😍💗😘
  22. And again, you have left me wanting more! You know you have a great story when you feel like you are living the moments with the characters...when you can "feel" what they are feeling. Excellent!!! All I can say is more, more, more!!!
  23. Every chapter gets better and better...more involved...more detailed... I have to be honest, every time you post a chapter, I start with chapter 1 and read it all the way through. That is how much I am enjoying this story!!! I just can't wait for your next installment!!!! Amazing story teller! 💗⭐⭐⭐
  24. More!!!! This is fast becoming my all time favorite lycan story. I absolutely love it!!!!
  25. Congrats on your wedding!!! And again, another amazing chapter!!! I can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!
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