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Another WOW!!!! I am loving the ride! Sheamus and Cyn keep getting more and more tactile...touching each others animal is very personal. It took a lot of courage for Cyn to allow Sheamus to pet his deer. And to be able to be around all the wolves ... He has certainly come a long way! Hopefully Cyn's tracking skills will make him feel more like a part of the pack and give him more confidence. He still has a long way to go but he is getting there! Wolves and deer and a cliffhanger, Oh my!!!
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How many times can I say "WOW" before it gets too repetitive??? Another amazing chapter!!!! Cyn has certainly become very courageous, strong, brave.....and so on! He has grown so much since he started on this journey. Touching Sheamus' wolf and having Sheamus touch his buck was just beyond touching. πΊπ¦You know I have a weakness for the perceived weak...Cyn, Kaplan, even Vincent (to a degree)... I love it when they come into their own. Cyn is certainly doing that!!! He is so much stronger than he even knows! I think Sheamus is starting to see it and I do believe Arric does.... You just blow me away with each chapter!!! Might have to make tonight my night to re-read and see what I have missed!!!
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Chapter 7: Abhorrent Alpha
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 7: Abhorrent Alpha
You have definitely NOT fallen behind!! Quality over quantity! Although I think you could write multiple chapters a day for multiple stories and each one would be impeccable!!! I definitely enjoyed this chapter...was in my own "shadow" world.... I know I've told you before but I get in my own little world when I read... I didn't even realize my dog was on my feet asleep until I tried to get up!!! He's 110ish pounds so it's hard to imagine him sneaking up and laying down on my feet....Hahahahaha -
Chapter 7: Abhorrent Alpha
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 7: Abhorrent Alpha
And the other players surface with a common bond...hating humans. Weaving a very intricate web with this one!!! Building a pack of human haters can't lead to good things at all! Damn good ending to this chapter!!! The rest of the chapter was as phenomenal as expected! The sparring was epic and the protectiveness of Caleb! Didn't think twice about jumping in to a perceived battle! Strong character traits!! I imagine he'd be another force to be reckoned with on the battlefield! Vincent's growth with control is astonishing. He had no trouble controlling his hybrid. Can't wait to see what all he can do!!! Yakob seemed really impressed with the hybrid and Caleb's lion! He also seemed in awe of the power Vincent possesses....even caught that he was visited by someone! Another epic chapter!!! -
I really do!!! So insightful!!!!
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All I can say is "damn you made me cry π again!!!!" The hell Cyrus went through and to have Kaplan turn his shame into a thing of beauty....genius!! But so very emotional!!! I love me some Cyrus and Kaplan!!! πΌπΊ And for the rest of the chapter......WOW.... I always expect your work/words to be awesome but this was just unparalleled in its tremendously brilliant sparring/staring matches! (Not to mention the tear jerking beginning) Running out of adjectives to describe your chapters!!! When you started LitS, your writing was already unique and mind blowing .... I didn't think you could get much better. You were already "there"!!! But boy was I wrong!!! You keep growing and proving just how amazingly awesome you are!!! I would pay a handsome price to have a fraction of your imagination!!! You are just amazing!!! I grew up reading comic books and still love them and the tv shows and movies that were born from them BUT if I had been able to read stories like yours, I could have saved my parents and myself a lot of money π°! You are rocking the were-creature and magic world bud!!!!
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You have truly mastered the art of the unexpected! To have the Alpha be the protector of Cyn, just epic!!! This was another great chapter in a litany of great chapters! Cyn is gaining confidence and trust in his relationship with Sheamus.... Better and better!!! π¦πΊ
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Very WISE words!!!! We are all a work in progress.... In the end hard work always pays off!!!
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Wow! I had no idea that we could eat acorns! π° (closest thing to an acorn lol) I have enough in my yard to feed an army!! Besides the fact that I am now very curious about eating them, that was another great chapter!!! I didn't see the "leaving Cyn with Walter thing" working. He's like a kid being left by his parents for the first time....terrified! Anyways, I think I'll go pick some acorns now!!! ππ
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πΊπ¦ I just love how Sheamus is so protective of Cyn... Always being in constant contact like a true mate should. And Cyn... his guilt is almost overwhelming. He is such a gentle soul just trying to survive. His innocence is so endearing. His love of the snow βοΈ and how it's the tears of someone watching over him....Love thinking of snow like that! His fascination with the fountain is so genuine and funny yet Sheamus handled it without embarrassing him. Sheamus trying to explain how he feels about Cyn in such a way that he understands it...too sweet. Finally, you have Arric using his alpha voice on Walter. You can feel the power πͺ.... So many emotions/feelings in this chapter.... Another WOW chapter!!!! πππ
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I completely agree with you! I think a big part is "they" also know what a hard and capable worker you are and they don't to move you up because they also know they will not be able to find someone to fill your shoes... Same old story - the harder you work, the less chance you have for any promotion. I wish you all the luck and good vibes in rectifying the situation. Rock and a hard place!!
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Chapter 5: Cyrus' Scourging
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 5: Cyrus' Scourging
Without going into details, this chapter really shook me. Again your writing has gone beyond anything π. You captured everything with this chapter. All the pain abuse causes lasts a lifetime. Such strong, raw emotions!!!! Even into adulthood, the struggle is real. I'm going to use a song reference (again)..."What doesn't kill you makes you stronger". In Cyrus' case that is very true. He is strong because who he is as well as what he survived. Cyrus and Kaplan are great together. Sharing each others pain lessons the burden. You keep making me love these two characters more and more ......Just WOW!!!! And yes, you are and will always be the π.... -
Cyn started the day so happy and it morphed into his on personal hell. Sheamus was there as always to pick up the pieces. Cyn has this image that he is weak...far from it. He is so much stronger than he realizes and with Sheamus at his side that strength πͺ is even greater. He just has to realize his own worth. Again you have written an amazing chapter. With your writing, it is so easy to visualize and feel what everyone is going through. I could read your work over and over .... ok, yes I do. I just can't get enough .... I am still loving the Cyn/Sheamus coupling...πΊπ¦
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I've said it before but it never hurts to repeat some things.....you keep one upping yourself! Higher and higher! π In all my years of reading (avid reader since 9 or 10 - comic books and I am old LOL), I have never read a story that was so fresh, different, new... I think you have "given birth" to a new genre. What genre it is, I don't know, but the style, content, hell, everything..it's nothing like I have ever read before.... It is more than romance, drama, comedy, action...It is just spectacularly different!!! I am loving Cyn and Sheamus more and more with every chapter πΊπ¦. I love looking at life though Cyn's eyes. It makes me appreciate everything I was fortunate enough to have, so much more. It's truly a gift to be reminded that even the mundane things are really special. You are the master my friend!!!
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Such an appropriate poem for me today. The one year anniversary of the door closing on my chosen career is fast approaching... It is bittersweet, mainly because it was not my choice to end my career, rather it was my body's decision. I was one year away from true retirement. This was to be my year. My year to have the retirement party. My year to have the limo pick me up from work and take me home (my fantasy lol). My year for the speeches and tears to finally be about me. But alas it wasn't meant to be. I was blessed and yes, cursed. Now, like in your poem, I just have to not overthink things and move on! It is truly uncanny how your poems "know" me... Both you and Aaron at times seem to be writing about me and aspects of my life... Have we met before? Hahaha... Thanks for your poetry and your insights...Makes me think, a lot!!!!
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Chapter 4: Egotistical Enforcer
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 4: Egotistical Enforcer
Wow!!!! Great chapter....again!!!!!! I can't wait to see the punishment the egotistical ass of an enforcer getsπ€¬!! Maybe let Vincent have a go at him..teach him a big lesson in humility, respect, and true alpha power! π§ πͺ Of course if Mason gets a hold of him there may not be much left! Love seeing Vincent's growth in using his powers. Taking a day trip to Times Square and picking up hot dogs ππ...too much fun! Glad he is enjoying using and experimenting the big and little aspects of his powers, even with the "mishap". And a new player πΊ enters the scene...looking for followers, usually not a good thing.... Still shining bright my friend π -
Every time I read a chapter, I think I feel like Cyn did while looking at the manor, sitting on a bed for the first time, and the race on the phone...I'm in awe! Such a smooth and effortless chapter to read and get lost in. Time stops for me while reading your work. β²οΈI just love Cyn and Sheamus...and apparently Arric does too!! π¦πΊ Cyn is so childlike when dealing with aspects of the human world but such a strong man when it comes to survival (he had to be)... Another epic chapter my friend..... May your reign be long and prosperous!!! π
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20 minutes of your time wasted...... This is just me but if I was told that you didn't have something, that would have been the end of it. I would also have explained that I locked my phone in the car too. I would ask if someone minded calling a towing company since I would not want to use someone else's phone with everything going on ..... But that is just me. I am a little paranoid about the virus...ok a lot! You are a better man than I am. I would definitely not have let him touch my phone. That is your personal property and no matter what that goes above and beyond customer service. I am all about helping my fellow man but there is a line a customer should not cross and in my opinion, he crossed it. And like you said, it is always at the end of a shift that the crazies come out!!!
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You are nailing it for sure!!!! Cyn's innocence and his elation over the simplest things is perfection. He is like a kid in a giant toy store! Sheamus is amazing with him...and so sweet/tender. Such a protector!! Loving them growing/learning together!!!!πΊπ¦ In response to your response about the italics and inner thoughts, perfect!!! I love reading what they are thinking and the different text makes it so much easier!! It's like everything you do is new and fresh!!! π
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Chapter 3: Desperate Detective
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 3: Desperate Detective
Another amazing addition! How you pack so much into a chapter just amazes me! Vincent's understanding of the shadows is growing fast! Loved how shocked Caleb was as to Vincent's location! β°οΈ Mason and Caleb needed that little bonding moment...and they were funny talking about Vin's Shady Delivery Service!!!π And the egomaniac makes a guest appearance...I bet Shaw freaks out at every shadow he sees! And finally my Kaplan and Cyrus... I can still see the stunning home that Cy lives in. Kaplan sure has captured the heart of the Panda (and of course mine too). The panda certainly is warming to Kaplan a lot faster than expected. Such tender moments between them. πΌπΊ Your imagination knows no boundaries! -
Chapter 3: Valentine's Day
Patch1 commented on NFields1608's story chapter in Chapter 3: Valentine's Day
Beautiful.......... Valentine's is all those things rolled into one short day. Thank you my friend for your poetry. It makes me "expand" my thinking as well as remember some wonderful times... Happy Valentine's Day my friend..... -
I can honestly say that I have only had to de-ice π§ my car once or twice in my life!!! I am glad that I don't have to deal with that... I hope that Shea and Cyn are made for each other... I just love their relationship. They just click and their rapport is built on trust and a little lust thrown in for good measure....
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Innocence .... that is Cyn. He is the personification of innocence. Such a pure, untouched soul... Sheamus better take good care of him! π Another great chapter! The trust Cyn has for Sheamus is really growing. As always you make your readers "feel" everything...the fear, the trust, the protectiveness...everything! π Loving it!!!πΊπ¦
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Chapter 2: Slippery Shadows
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 2: Slippery Shadows
Loved it!!! But you know I love anything with Kaplan ! I don't know why I latched on to him but I do love anything with him in it. His gentle nature is so calming and the interactions with Cyrus are always so tender yet mysterious! πΌπΊ The glimpse into Dirk's character was great to! Seems Vincent made a big impact on him...letting humans out before him and his alpha.... And then we have the shadow training with Yakob. Intense!! And we get to take a trip to the monastery and find that Yakob is the head honcho! Intriguing... As always, another epic chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! Your reign continues....π -
Margarita Wine...reallly good!!!!! It sneaks up on after you have had a glass or 4......
