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Blown away!!!! Damn good chapter!!
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Prompt 892 - Wiler's House
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Prompt 892 - Wiler's House
I just wish I had half the imagination you do! That was such a change from the other stories. All the little details about the abandoned house were on point. When I was much younger, my great uncle inherited a house from a distant family member. The house had been vacant since the mid 1940's (this was in the late 70's early 80's). It was similar to this. No domestic animals, but there was evidence of other "critters"! Hahaha... The house was small but nothing had really been touched since she passed away. The furniture and "knick knacks" were still in place. It was cool to go through and see what all was there. I don't remember much about it except I found silver dollars under a piece of vinyl flooring in the bathroom. She had hidden a bunch of them under the flooring. My uncle let me keep one...still have it LOL. Anyway, this was a refreshing change and it really shows your versatility as an author!! As always, LOVE your work!!!!! -
Phenomenal!!!!!!! I might need a cold shower!!!!!
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Despise fake people... and Stuerm is definitely fake! Sneaky, underhanded, manipulative, jerk...those are the nice things I can say about him! But the bright spot is Kaplan and Cyrus!!! Made my day!!! πΌππΊ Another packed chapter!!! So much going on and that was just my first read!!!! Brilliantly captivating chapter!!!! π Still waiting for some lightning fried bad guys! Hahahaha!!! Just kidding!! As always, you are an AMAZING author!!! π
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Great chapter!!! Kaminsky....I don't even like the name hahahaha! He seems to be the stereotypical, by the book, asshole suit. He got put in his place real quick by all the "powers". Loved it!!! Just to agree with Cyn...."I'm ready too!!!!" I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Now to go back and reread to see what I missed hahaha!!!
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If you were not happy with this chapter, I would love to see what makes you happy! I loved this chapter. It had a bit of mystery and espionage....a traitor and a new friend (in the future possibly)... Now onward to the bug crushing!!!! Great chapter in my humble opinion!!!!
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Chapter 4: A Peace of Mind w/ our Demons
Patch1 commented on NFields1608's story chapter in Chapter 4: A Peace of Mind w/ our Demons
Beautiful.... Battling demons is tough that is for sure. I am so glad you won your battle!!! Still working on my fight but I will win! -
This!!! You keep stepping your game up!! This chapter devoted to the Alpha and the Scribe is perfection. It is lighthearted but heavy at the same time. Perfect balance of fun and serious...Kieran and Arric are too stinking cute (hope it's okay to call an Alpha cute). They balance each other. Love seeing the Alpha's softer side. Just proves you can be soft but still be an awesome leader. At first I wasn't sure about Kieran, but now he is such a loveable goofball. (I know what you are thinking but no one can replace my πΌ and πΊ...) You are an absolutely amazing author!!!!
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Chapter 20: Introductory Interview
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 20: Introductory Interview
Another amazing chapter..... From babysitting to meeting the "2" candidates to Yakob and the Seven...such a wonderful read!!! Thank you for "taking me away".... I really needed the escape. I promise to be back to commenting more soon. As always your talent blows me away. ππ€© P.S. You are probably to young to remember the commercials for Calgon...but for some reason the slogan "Calgon, take me away" was on my mind... -
Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
Patch1 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
I absolutely love this story. I am sad that it is over but damn what a ride!!! Awesome!- 79 comments
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Mmmmm Death Wish coffee!!! My favorite! I'm liking Arric even more now. Love the budding relationship between the alpha and the scribe... I think Kieran can handle the alpha personality just fine. I don't believe Arric and Kieran even realize they are "courting"...too cute!!! Love is in the air again.... Speaking of love, Sheamus and Cyn are just perfect. πΊππ¦ Love them. It's awesome watching them grow! Loved Sheamus getting all super protective! Cyn seems to have a power over everyone he comes in contact with. It's almost a calming effect. He is so much stronger than he realizes... As always, loved this latest installment! You are still π!!!
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Absolutely loved this chapter! For not being around kids much, you perfectly nailed it!!! Lowe is awesome! I can't wait to see what he does next...toddlers are so unpredictable!!! This chapter was a perfect blend of light-heartedness and seriousness. I believe the NY pack is in for a few revelations (and maybe some lightning strikes!π©οΈ). You know how much I love Cyrus and Kaplan.... Seeing how protective both alphas are of Kaplan was heartwarming. Someone is in big trouble with 2 very powerful and pissed off alphas! I wouldn't want to be around when the lightning and the fire are brought down on a certain wolf.... There may not be much left of him. πππ
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Hahahaha....You are too funny! No message needed...Cyrus and Kaplan will always be first! He sure is dopey... That may not be the best trait for an alpha mate but I kind of find it endearing...
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Exactly!!! For a genius level (maybe beyond) wolf, Kieran has blinders on... Could it be that he just doesn't feel worthy of Alpha Arric? And why is Arric hiding his feelings? Kieran would be an amazing mate. He is brilliant beyond measure.. Those two would be a power couple like no other.
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This! Loving the love Sheamus has for Cyn. This chapter was just full of the warm fuzzies... Even Arric had some moments with Kieran. Could it be? Another budding romance? Thanks for putting me in the gray my friend.
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Chapter 18: Final Fulfillment
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 18: Final Fulfillment
That was just pure, hot, raw, steamy sex...fully mated at last! Love it!!! I love Cyrus' theatrical introduction/speech/question and answer session! I can't wait to see what he has in store for the "snakes in the grass and the henhouse". Maybe he will call upon the lightning to take care of a few pesky, slithering jerks! LOL... Another superb chapter! -
Chapter 17: Instant Interest
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 17: Instant Interest
Got to agree with you! The Beta/Delta couple is my choice.... I love how Aaron keeps coming up with "new" concepts. A Beta/Delta couple leading a pack like an Alpha. Love it! I think that would also be another awesome story to be told!!! I'm going to be reading for years hahahahaha! -
Chapter 17: Instant Interest
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 17: Instant Interest
Wow....another chapter that is packed full!!!!! Vincent is certainly growing into his "alphaness". The phone conference was great. Making the decision to have his council vote to decide who gets to purchase the land is a very educated move. He has certainly stepped up his leadership game! I love the "after" conference with Tierney. Mason really helped him realize that Morrine was his mate πΊππ―. Love watching (reading lol) the "birth" of another power couple! I can't wait for him to move and really "connect" with her and her tiger. And to another emerging power couple (I hope), Dave and Stacy.... I was worried how she would handle things but she seems to be progressing nicely. Dave is such a considerate man. Love seeing them grow....baby steps! Finally, you know you've made my day with Cyrus and Kaplan. I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter (for the dslfkjhs time LOL). I still get a chill when Cyrus verbally claims him. Kaplan deserves a man like Cyrus...just as Cyrus deserves himπ. They are going to rule NY! I could right a book on how I feel about them...πππππ Still the π!!!!! P.S. Just a big thank you for your stories.....You have certainly helped me get my mind off of the chaos my life has been lately. I can't tell you how much having this escape means!!! Thank you my friend...π -
There were so many firsts in this chapter! Cyn's innocence is a great reminder of so many things that we take for granted. He is just so pure and (previouslyπ) untouched. Big relationship step for the two of them!!! You did an amazing job writing the sexy scene. It was so sweet and touching. Absolutely loved it!!! π¦ππΊ If Cyn got that mad over the description of a movie, I can only imagine how mad he will be when they finally confront Eike and Hauser... He may just call down some lightning (Hahahahaha...Had to get that in there!!!) Anyways, another perfectly written chapter!!! π
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Chapter 16: Professional Partnership
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 16: Professional Partnership
I'm not going all wordy nerdy on you with this comment... BUT I'm going to say this chapter was for me (π) .... You already hit the ball out of the park with the first part of the chapter. You always make it so we can feel what the characters are feeling. THEN you go and hit the ball off the planet (in my opinion!!) with the remainder of the chapter! Positively love Cyrus and Kaplan!!!!!! β€πππYes, I got the "gray" but I also got chills... The kind of chills you get when you hear a song sung so perfectly, you feel it in your skin. I have read it a few times and the same reaction happens... Wow...just WOW!!! πΌπΊ -
You know I don't like anything you do....I absolutely, positively LOVE it! You know I read a lot...but until I found you, I had not found an author that puts me in the "gray" with every chapter. You do that! Until next time my friend....
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And again, you have done it! I just love the freshness of this chapter (and the last one).... Cyn is so very innocent when it comes to things we take for granted. Sheamus has the patience to teach his mate all these things and he does it without being condescending. You can tell he actually loves showing Cyn how "humans" go about doing the day to day stuff that he does automatically. It's just so sweet!!!! πΊ π¦ I love how these chapters have been so opposite from the darkness of the previous ones. Your writing just flows without any "bumps"...it's just seamless. Absolutely love this story.. You just continue to prove you are the π And yes I went into the gray again...I guess I need to get use to it!!! βΊοΈ
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Chapter 15: Disturbing Decree
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 15: Disturbing Decree
Dang!!! How do you pack so much in a chapter without anything getting lost or pushed to the side??? As always your work is amazing!!! From dealing with the exposure and how Stacy is handling it to Vincent's "award" of his on territory....everything flowed so smoothly without feeling rushed. Your chapters just go to quickly no matter what...grey zone! Now time to go back and read this chapter again...you know, in case I missed something...hahahaha π€£ We may have to get you a bigger throne to sit on as your reign continues!!! π -
I just fall more in love with Cyn and Sheamus with each chapter. Cyn is such a sweet, gentle soul and for an enforcer, Sheamus is equally so. I know Sheamus would be a force to be reckoned with, especially when it comes to Cyn. Cyn has also proven that there is more to him than his docile nature. I can't wait to see their relationship develop more. They have already come so far...it's just heartwarming. πΊπ¦ I also love how this story can be so light and fun loving but at the same time it has a deep darkness and down right evil aspect. You have meshed, mashed, combined, joined (or whatever) these two things so perfectly. This chapter was just so stinking sweet it was dripping with sugar.... But at the same time the chapter when Eike literally feeding the poor girl to the wolves, really showed how ruthless and vile he really is and was so very dark. The imagery yo create with your words really is uncanny. Just makes me go to the "grey"...twice in one week!!!!! Love it!!!!! π P.S. I must be getting calm...I didn't want anyone electrocuted or killed....hmmmmmmm π€£
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Chapter 14: Psychological Struggle
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 14: Psychological Struggle
Another WOW chapter!!! That was one hell of a fight...both with the alpha and between Vincent and his wolf. I absolutely loved it!!! Got my violence/death/kill without being extreme, graphic, gross...but you know I have been waiting for someone to get what they deserved! I love it when a bully gets served....my inner rage is at peace for the moment!!!! Seriously, this was an epic chapter both physically and psychologically intense for Vincent and his wolf. He will have a lot to deal with in the near future. I could go all "wordy-nerdy" on this chapter but I'll leave it with this.....this was a monumental/pivotal chapter for Vincent. You captured every emotion, every internal conflict perfectly. Thank you for sending me into the "grey" again!!!! Absolutely love it!!!!!!
