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Well insomnia kicked in last night so I reread Cernunnos and the results are in...Yep still love it!!! Hahahaha... Seriously though, Cyn and Sheamus are right up there with my favorites! This story is just so different...so fresh....You have your big conflict and an intense love story with a little enigma thrown in (ok a lot of enigma)... perfect combination and perfect story telling... I guess that means perfect author too!!! And I am unanimous in my opinion!! No arguments! Hahahaha...
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That was just WOW! This chapter was so sweet...Cyn's innocence is so refreshing. He has so much to learn about other lycan and mating. But this chapter was so effortless to read...no darkness...just pure light! Absolutely loved it!!!! πΊπ¦ I love it when your chapters take me to the "zone"....but then again, all your chapters do that!!! You are the Master!π
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Chapter 13: Careless Clash
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 13: Careless Clash
Somewolfy is pissed off!! I can hardly wait for the main event!!! That is one thing I love about your cliffhangers - you give enough action and build up with the smaller "fights" and then stop! The main event will keep us "on the hook" and begging for more. But dang what another action packed chapter! Glad Dave and Stacy are safe for now...Vincent dispatched the others with ease.....the ass, I mean alpha, might be a little different... But you know how I think...I am ready for some lightning π©οΈ fried wolf..Hahahahahaha... Or at least a frozen βοΈ one! π π -
I do agree...I don't think it's in Cyn's gentle nature to really take a life. He is strong but I honestly think it would go against everything he is to kill...unless it was to save Sheamus. And yes you know me so well.....I love both couples !! Hahaha! Keep up the great work bud!!! I truly love your writing style!!! I always slip into the grey zone!!!! π
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Cyn for the win! That nose of his..finding the truck and making his mate proud. Cyn and Sheamus are just amazing! I love how Cyn is growing and it seems with each touch from Sheamus, he is becoming more aware of the wolf's love (?) for him! It' the little things that get me...like offering Sheamus some of the cracked acorns.... Cyn and Sheamus are up there with another couple that I really, really love!!! π¦πΊ I can't wait to see what you have in store fore the "murderers"!!! Maybe Cyn will impale him with his antlers!!! Well, maybe not, Cyn is such a gentle soul... But he is also a force to be reckoned with!!! Anyways, as always, you have written another amazing installment!!!! Still shining bright like a π!!!!!
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Chapter 12: Lurking Lycan
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 12: Lurking Lycan
Hahahaha!!!! STRONGLY disapprove! Love me some Kaplan and Cyrus! But you know that! π€£ -
Chapter 12: Lurking Lycan
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 12: Lurking Lycan
First things first....another freaking amazing chapter!!!! I've had to read it a few times to process...there is so much going on.... Love the confidence, strength, and power that Vincent is showing!!! His "alphaness" is progressing πͺ! I'm still voting for some lightning burns on Wagner....just a few...nothing to bad....enough to let him know he offended Cyrus (and my Kaplan)... I also like the brotherhood between Tierney and Cyrus... There was a lot of power in that cab!!! And now Dave is in trouble. I don't think I'm going to like where this is headed.... Cyrus needs to fry the new "alpha" and his stupid pack after Vincent and Yakob mess with their minds..... (As you can see, I am back in "striking them down with the lightning" mode....) Ummmmm that would be a HARD NO! Leave Cyrus and Kaplan alone!!! π©οΈπ©οΈπ©οΈ -
I'll have to say you have reawakened my love of poetry... So much power in just a few well thought out words. This poem should be read by everyone in a relationship (or even if they are not). So many need to realize it's not always about "me, me, me". It's an "us" thing. As always, great poem!!!
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Eike is one nasty piece of work....evil doesn't even cut it! I can't wait for him to be put down!
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Beautiful!!!! I think the last sentence is the most important thing we have to realize.... Everyday is your moment! Love this!!!
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Chapter 11: Beginning Brawl
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 11: Beginning Brawl
Vincent has a lot to learn but damn he is such a BADASS!!!!!! I just love Vincent's wolf!!!! Hell I love all of them!!! I love how he really put the "enforcer/bully" in his place without any violence (I know ... weird for me to say that π€£) The Bully was terrified! I think he might have lost control of his bodily fluids...serves him right!! ... Still want some lightning π©οΈ burns on his ass because of his attitude and the disrespect he showed Kaplan! (Don't #*@% with Kaplanπ€¬) Hahaha!!!! The double spar was AWESOME!!! I love it when I go into the "gray" and block out everything around me... I missed the hellacious thunderstorm that passed through here, well until the power went out..... But obviously it's all good now! Hahahaha Wish you could win an award for your writing .... but until then, this will have to suffice...πππ -
You know me too well!!!! Greta rocks!! π
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Glad that Kieran is not a bad one!!! He's such a goofy one...hahahaha... Cyn is growing so much! I wonder if his growth is helped by Sheamus' new Enforcer status? His confidence boost seems to parallel Sheamus' "power" increase. πͺ I think it is also sinking in that Sheamus really likes him! π¦πΊ So much going on in this chapter....an intricate web of mystery and deception... I really like Greta...she has an almost grandmotherly vibe to her, like a strong matriarch. Yep, I like her. Hahaha Another SOLID chapter!!!! Oh and if there was ever any doubt...you are still the π
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Chapter 10: Delinquent Deity
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 10: Delinquent Deity
Oh the fury is there!!! Just feeling "nice" today!!! Hahahahaha.... As for the chicken fingers with the KY bourbon sauce, we use to go eat every Wednesday night and I would ALWAYS get the fingers with KY bourbon sauce! I actually haven't had it since my health went a little south but here is hoping my vision starts improving so I can start driving at night!!! I miss those chicken fingers Hahahahahaha -
Chapter 10: Delinquent Deity
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 10: Delinquent Deity
Another "WOW" chapter!!!! Honestly, I don't think you could write a chapter without the "WOW" factor!!! First the visit from the God of Order and now the Goddess of Mischief!!! Vincent's hatred of Stefan is a given, but to hear how much love he has for Mason and his friends, and for the mischievous Goddess to feel it and "side" with them is a whole other thing..... I guess I can't say she is siding with them but the rooting for them thing is a big deal! Love the "oh I'll just run up a mountain and get my mentor/teacher" moment... πββοΈ Still have to wrap my head around the "shadow run" but damn, it's a cool power!!! And Dave! Stepping it up with Stacy!!! Slow steps but still! He needs to be happy too!!! And damned if I don't want some chicken fingers π now!!! It's only 9:40 a.m. and I am really wanting some with Kentucky bourbon sauce!!! Well it's a smoked Kentucky bourbon sauce! Funny how that has been my favorite sauce for years now.... Coincidence???? P.S. Notice I didn't mention any lightning, burning, ashes, and so on .... Trying to curb my desire for some "electric karma"!!! (insert the evil laughter again) π€£ -
Love this!!!!! Seems like we are always trying to please others and impress others that we forget to take care of us! Great words of wisdom my friend!!
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I did expect Pierce to be the "one". He seemed to be the more "traditional" type. I was also not expecting his "bear's soul" comment!!! Nor was I expecting his sympathetic feelings towards Cyn and his loss. This chapter was full of surprises and yes I had to read it twice to catch some of them LOL!!! And you are correct, Kieran would be the first to be ignored because of his dopeyness... BUT it would be fun to "zap" someone... (insert evilish laughter) Thanks again my friend for an amazing chapter!!!! Still on the edge of my seat!!! Have a great "weekend's eve"!!!
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Boom! Kieran made an uh-oh!!! Given his meekness, he might have just overheard the "bad ones" talking... Plus he does have a photographic memory and that is not always a good thing - you can't forget anything you've heard/seen. - gossip! I'm willing to give him the benefit of the doubt for now. But if he turns out to be against them, I say we get the "lightning king" from RitS to fry his ass π©οΈ....Hahahahaha... You know I can be a little vicious... Seriously another amazingly suspenseful chapter!!!! Love Cyn's reaction to the meal! And Arric's giving of the honor to take the first bite! And a little cliffhanger!!!! Edge of the seat!!!! πΊπ¦
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You can definitely take the credit!!! You have done so much that is fresh, new, imaginative, creative, and on and on... Just can't get enough...and can't wait to see what your mind comes up with next!!!!! Always on the edge of my seat with each new chapter!!!
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And you've done it again...I hadn't thought about a "power" shift in Sheamus and how it would affect Cyn... I love how Cyn felt it and overcame the "need" to run. Then the ending....the fierce kiss and the "I love you, Cyn"!!!! Damn....just damn!!!! Sooooooo good!!! π¦πΊ You are so the π
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Chapter 9: Seraphic Stunt
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 9: Seraphic Stunt
And for the next installment of "Who's possessing Vincent Bolton?" Another deity got their "hands" on Vincent... He's becoming a revolving door for them..LOL Seriously loving the appearances of the "gods" through him. Just shows what a powerful wolf/mage he is becoming! I can't wait to see Wagner's reaction when he sees Vincent's power!!! Kaplan, my Kaplan! You know you made my day with Cy marking him! All is right in the world...for now! Kaplan is becoming more confident and that relationship is heating up!!! I absolutely loved this chapter! Not feeling the anger π€¬ I no longer want Wagner to be reduced to ashes by the "Lightning π©οΈ King"! Having him enveloped in shadows for eternity will suffice!! Hahahaha (evil laughter) I know that would be counter productive for Vincent's goals.... But I am sure he will get what's coming to him! Karma and all that!!! You rocked out another amazing chapter!!! Gave me the warm fuzzies..... You are still the π!!!! -
Another brilliant chapter! Love the "slow burn" romance Cyn and Sheamus are in. π¦πΊ They are perfect for each other! Sheamus has certainly proved his worth! Enforcer!!! I figured something was happening but I was not really expecting that!!! Eike is a menace. He seems to have been planning something for a while. He is definitely using his status to cause chaos in the ranks... I can't wait for him to get what he deserves!! As always, ready for another chapter!! Hahahaha!!!! π
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You know me too well!!!! Like is not strong enough of a word!!!! Love barely covers it! The whole chapter was amazing! It kept me on the edge until Kara killed Marric. And then BOOM! What a terrific ending!
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Finally! Cyn is seeing his worth!! He has been told time and again that he is weak and he started believed it. But now, he is finally seeing that he has value. That he is indeed strong! πͺ It is so much like watching a child grow into his own....so rewarding! Oh and THE kiss!!!! Yes!!!!πΊπ¦
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Chapter 8: Inquisitive Individual
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 8: Inquisitive Individual
Got to agree with most of the comments about Alpha Drego...there is something fishy about him. Knowledge is power and he seems to be so anxious/greedy to obtain as much knowledge as he can... Now Wagner has royally pissed me off!!! π€¬ You know how I feel about "my" Kaplan! Absolutely loved the way Kaplan handled him but I'm thinking Cyrus needs to use the lightning π©οΈ to turn him into a pile of ashes!!! Brutal I know, but I have no use at all for a bully! Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, I say!!! Ahhhh Dave...I hope his relationship continues to blossom but I have a bad feeling that something is going to happen.... I like her but could she be the mole????? Vincent and Mason! Awesome as ever!!!!!!!! P.S. I am so ready to see Wagner burn!!!!π₯
