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  1. WOW!!! I wasn't expecting that!!!! Damn what an epic chapter! The Goddess of Mischief is about to have some fun!!!! I can't wait!!!!! So good to be back and reading your masterpiece. How you keep coming up with this fantastic, creative writing is so beyond me... You have an amazing talent my friend!!! That is your divine gift!! Your writing and your friendship...makes for one hell of a divine gift!!!
  2. I can't say I did not expect Yakob's death but it still stung. 😢 The memorial was very somber and fitting for the life he lived. All this and the final confrontation. Damn what a chapter!!!!!! 💗
  3. Always love when Vincent and Yakob talk and practice. He always has a way of "reality checking" Vinnie. He may "crush" him but he always finds a way to build him up and bolster his confidence. Sheboygan....Prey Protection Law....Cernunnos crossover🦌? That would be awesome!!! All this speculation and a cliffhanger to boot!!! Damn fine chapter!!!!!!!
  4. Another great chapter in a looonnngg line of great chapter!!! Loved it! Vincent handled Kaplan's parents. He "built" Kap up and ended with a bombshell (without revealing) ...he's learning (Cyrus trick hahaha). You know I love it when you include Kaplan and Cyrus in the chapter 💗... Anyways, great homage to Werebears. I read that (Axel) and I was like where have I heard that name before. It took me a minute then it hit me..Grumpy, Axel...Werebears in America! Damn, went into the zone and my coffee is now cold, hahahaha.... till next time my friend!!!
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    Run, Run, Run...

    Too much fun!!! Might have to bake some just so my house smells like the "gingerbread twink"!
  6. So much fun!!!! I always thought the wolf got the short end of the stick...he was just trying to survive. But in this case he scored! Got the house and the big, bad bear!! Lucky wolf!!!! 💗 Love the retelling of 2 classic tales!!!
  7. Patch1

    Chapter 22

    So very sorry for your loss... 🙏
  8. Lunch was good - parmesan chicken w/buttered spinach leaves - good and actually healthy hahahaha! I can't wait for the anthology!!!!!!! Very, very excited for it!!! Thanks for the heads up!!!!!! Have a great day my friend!!!
  9. Damn!!! Every time you write a chapter I think, "Well it can't get any better!"...and you know what? It does!!! I don't know how you do it... You keep growing and growing as a writer/author/storyteller... This was like 3 chapters rolled into 1. 3 epic chapters.... 2 sparring chapters with magic and one hell of a "sparring" match between Ingle and Dirk.. The sparring between Cyrus and Yakob was awesome... I can just see the lightning field 🌩️around him as shadows try to get through... Vincent and Elaine's sparring was no less of a match... Ice flinging everywhere, alpha wolfie making an appearance... Loved how Mother in Bond bluntly told him to quit relying on the bracelet and to basically believe in his own strength... And the final "spar"... well I need a cold shower and maybe I am a size queen now...LOL Damn near burned my lunch I got so lost in the gray... After a week of dealing with dementia, I needed this escape from reality! Absolutely loved it! 💗 You definitely have honed your magic skills!!!!! Still shining bright my friend!!! 💎
  10. Love watching Vincent grow and becoming stronger, faster💪. I have a feeling he's going to need it soon... And a new baby!! Can't wait for Caleb and Tasha ( and Lowe) to welcome their new "monster"🍼... And of course you made my day with Cyrus and Kaleb... You know how much I love those two!!! 🐼💗🐺 Another damn good chapter!!!!!
  11. Another fun chapter! I loved seeing things from Mason's perspective... "A Day in the Life of Alpha Mason". Reminiscing about the reception and honeymoon and going about the day to day tasks on the farm... 🐮 👨‍🌾 (of course you know I loved the mention of Kaplan and Cyrus 🐺💗🐼). Then on to Vincent and his auditing...He's learning a lot from Grumpy! Really love Grumpy too! Absolutely loved it...put me in the zone again!!!!!!
  12. Patch1

    Chapter 17

    Awwww thank you so much! I did indeed break out the fireball... Then I re-read it and ate rum infused gummi bears as I read... Needless to say I slept great last night, but I don't feel too hot today hahahahahaha!!!
  13. Patch1

    Chapter 17

    Time to break out the Fireball and drown my sorrows...or my anger...not sure which... All I can say is I am ready for Elijah to get some revenge...brutal, deadly revenge....
  14. Damn.... that's all I have. It was that good! Ok I lied. IT was a very peaceful, serene chapter full of love and hope for the future. Yes, waterworks were again present. Absolute love....
  15. Holy Crap! What an ending!!! The entire chapter was awesome but the way Tierney took charge and then Morrine took it back with her answer (or demand)... Wow! Stefan the ass is back! And greedier and more despicable than ever! I've missed calling him an ass hahahaha.... And DEFINITELY a crossover with Cernunnos! That would be an epic story line!!! And you have to bring in Kaplan and Cyrus hahahaha!!! Seriously... great chapter my friend!!!! Impatiently waiting for more!
  16. Well damn...another emotional chapter!!! Everything with Vincent and Mason was so tender, sweet, loving...yes I had tears!! Such a wonder view of the way a family should be! Then we have Caleb and Tasha's family...a family that has been through hell and back and just coming into their own...sadly the way most families are.. Full of issues that need to be resolved. Loved both views! Wonderful depictions of both! I especially love the way Caleb handled everything! So firm and confident!! Then you add Tasha's fierceness! That is one powerful couple!! Absolutely loved this tear-jerker of a chapter!!!
  17. Absolutely loved it! Seeing Cyrus be the "mean" one and the vampire be the "good" one was awesome! I was hoping for a little lightning frying but I like the way it was handled better!! But hell you always do a great job!! Alex got what he deserved...hard work paid off and got him some respect from Vincent! Got all up in the "feels" when Alex got promoted... Cyrus and Kaplan (🐼🐺) accepting him and promoting him to head enforcer was unexpected (at least by me) but considering it's Cyrus, I should have expected it!!! Anyways, loved this chapter so much!!!! Now I just wish I could turn into a wolf and run through the forest/woods of the south.... Hey, a guy can dream!!! Hahahaha...👑👑
  18. What a chapter.... This one was surely filled with all the highs and lows of life from "new" love to the sorrow felt while visiting the graves of loved ones lost to the adrenaline rush at the end with the perceived confrontation (cliffhanger!). It sure took me through all the "feels"! It is definitely like being on a "reading roller-coaster"! Damn what a ride!!! 🎢 Sending you all the hugs and warm wishes I can my friend. You have been there for me with such kind words and so much empathy. Please know that you are never far from my thoughts...Wishing you the best my friend!🤗
  19. I love a good catch-up chapter! Hell I love all of your chapters!!! 🥰🥰
  20. Damn...a chapter with 3 great couples! Starting with Kaplan and Cyrus (loved seeing Kaplan be the Beta and in "charge"), then Vincent the auditor (with hot as hell sex with Mace), then Dirk and Justin! Add to that the meth house explosion...(action). Can't get much better!!! Damn fine chapter!
  21. Another riddle, wrapped inside a mystery, inside an enigma! (always wanted to use that quote) Wagner just keeps getting deeper and deeper into stuff! And that goes for "detective" Kaplan too...diving head first into the mess with Harold plus we get a little glimpse of what he dealt with when he was exiled, a little glimpse of his past, family.... I have a feeling if his parents are jerks, Cyrus will deal with them accordingly!!! 🌩️ Hahahaha.... Love the tenderness Dave is showing Stacy...too sweet! Another power couple in the making! Did you say War!!! Yep nobody puts Kap in a corner! Hahahahahaha Hell I'm on a roll - 2 quotes in one comment from Churchill to Swayze!! Oh and I have to agree with you on your taste in men....100% beef!!!
  22. The Bun is back!!! Absolutely loved this one too!!! The evil one is back and at it again, ready to terrorize the couple... Great continuation!
  23. Very intriguing chapter... Things with Wagner are getting even more mysterious! So much deception going on in the NY pack. Can't wait to learn more about it all!! Love seeing Vincent as an auditor in training! He is going to be a great auditor! I'd say more, you know I always have a lot to say but I have PT then doctors appointments, lawyer appointment...a full day!!! I am tired already!!! Anyway, GREAT chapter, as always!!!!! Love escaping into this wonderful world you've created!!!!
  24. Another fun chapter!!! The campfire setting was great. It brought back many memories of my friends and I sitting around a campfire drinking and talking till the early morning hours (or sometimes sunrise). I'd definitely love to go back to those times. This was another chapter that just moved so fast. I started the first sentence and it seemed like no time had passed and I was reading the last sentence. I think Vincent being an auditor is going to be another fun trip! I actually loved auditing when I was in college (accounting major but didn't stay in that field). It was always fun to me to go over the "books" of a company and try to find the errors/mistakes or outright "lies". Kinda like a detective without the gun hahaha! Anyways, love this chapter. You have so many little "side trips" that you could take with the all the openings in this one - new children, vampire dealings, auditing, a new wolf hopefully (Stacey 🥰), not to mention the new 🐻🐺 coupling.. You sure know how to pack a chapter with awesomeness!!!!!! You truly are a "Word Mage"!!! 👑
  25. Well for research's sake I could do that... You know the number 1 spot will be Kap/Cy💞 And Vin/Mace are 2nd.....I'll have to get back to you on the rest because the others are so close. I'll have to study on that for a bit. Might even have to reread (for the 3rd or 4th time) 🤣😆
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