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Loved this chapter!!! Great seeing Cyn getting more familiar with the human side of things. He missed out on so much.... It was fun seeing him getting so excited over a pair of running shoes. You "painted" that picture perfectly. ποΈ It really is the simple things in life. I never gave much thought to the simple things until recent events in my life happened. Now every little thing is so very important. It is good therapy for me to "see" it in Cyn's story. Watching Arric and Kieran's relationship grow is great. The big Alpha is a gentlemen (for now hahahaha). 2 power couples!! All this and a "mini" cliffhanger!!! I like the idea of a car hitting Eike! Maybe teach Cyn how to drive, since he loves racing movies... Splat!!! Roadkill!!! (insert maniacal laughter) Notice no lightning .... yet... Oh wait, Cyn runs Eike over during a thunderstorm just as Eike is struck by lightning! π©οΈ There we go!!!! Bahahahahahaha
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I love how their personality/behavior changes after taking a new position. Another first in a long list of firsts you have created!!!! I hope Kieran doesn't lose his dopey demeanor. Kieran telling Arric he wants more tonight....π₯ Great chapter my friend!!! So smooth and "easy" to read and get lost in!
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Shocked myself with that one!!! Normally I would have wanted Cyrus to come in and "light his ass up"!! Must be getting a little soft in my old age!!! πππ€£
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This was such a smooth chapter.... How you pack so much emotion and "action" with relatively few words is so beyond me. I know it was really a lot of words but it just flowed so effortlessly from one thing to the next.... amazing. I love the slow build with Arric and Kieran. Arric is such a caring Alpha. A lot of alpha's would have been more forceful in their actions. Instead Arric stepped back because he knew his emotions were transferring to Kieran. Definitely a class act in my book! Cyn (and Sheamus) are still as cute as ever. π¦πΊ Cyn's innocence just shines through... And Hauser...I can't believe I am saying this but I actually feel sorry for him. In his own way, he is just as much a victim in this mess as some of the others. Granted he killed but I don't believe it was his true nature... I think he was more or less forced into it. Alpha Rogier exhibited a lot of compassion in his sentencing. Hauser has the guilt/attitude of someone in an abusive relationship. Another WOW chapter....you just keep churning them out. Such talent!!!!!
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Reaching out and making connections is truly a lifeline. If only we would make the effort to try to understand and know each other...maybe then we could celebrate our differences instead of condemning each other for them. It only takes a call, a text, an email to let someone know we care... If only we would make the effort, the first move....
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Damn that was a rough one.... I've cried from stories before but not like this. I envy your gift my friend. You brought out every feeling, every emotion possible for the funeral. The dedications and words were a perfect way to honor Shelly. And the following "alone" time for the 4 was just beautifully simple and very heart warming. Arric and Kieran are just a beautiful couple growing with each other. Sheamus and Cyn are just perfect. Cyn is such a caring soul. I really think he and Kieran could be great friends. They both feel things so deeply. For such a somber chapter, it had so much heart . Even being so sad, this is probably one of, if not my favorite chapter. It just had so much feeling. I don't think a funeral could be written better. This one definitely packed a big punch....
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Chapter 6: A Nice Reminder
Patch1 commented on NFields1608's story chapter in Chapter 6: A Nice Reminder
This one definitely gave me warm fuzzies, chills, and all the feels... Absolutely loved it!!!!! Needed these good feelings ....my deepest thanks. -
Great chapter! I love Kieran's "crisis" over why he should or should not be Beta. Arric solved that crisis for him. Now all Key needs to do is see his own potential, his own worth. He really is perfect for the job. Another cliffhanger!! Hahaha... Will Shelly succumb to Priscilla's fangs? Or will Saige be there to save the day?
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Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
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Packed with action! Another chapter with little surprises! Walt stepping down... Nominating 3 good candidates for beta...Kieran being one of the nominations. All 3 would make good betas. I think Jamie would be the "underdog" so to speak but it might be a great fit. Key would be my first choice (of course) but would the relationship get in the way? Could Arric send his mate (or soon to be mate?) into a dangerous situation? I agree that Pierce might be the most qualified but is he a good fit? As much as I want to say Kieran, I think I like Jamie. It would force him to be more serious but I think he could step up and really shine. I know Kieran could, as smart as he is, but the relationship might be his hindrance. And I really like Jamie...he might bring some lightheartedness to the super serious Arric... Gotta say that I'm going to miss Walt. Love that old wolf!!! He definitely needs to be in a position to lend his vast knowledge - elder maybe? Anyway, awesome chapter again!!!!
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Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
Damn....that's all I got right now!!!!!! Ok no it's not. That was beyond! Epic! Hung on every word! πΌπΊThe gift Kaplan gave to Cyrus was perfect.... It was such a joyous (tearful here) reunion. Emotions all over the place. You continue to one up yourself with each chapter!!! Into the gray my friend...3 re-reads hahahaha!! -
Another WOW chapter! New traitors revealed....You know my solution - fry them all (insert demonic laughter)... Seriously though I never even thought about a doctor being a traitor to the species. You just throw twists and turns in everywhere! On a good note, Arric and Key are just so damn cute! Almost as cute as Cyn and Sheamus! Cyn is really stepping up and truly becoming a member of the pack. It has to be a bit weird for him being a creature that live a nomadic life for so long. He has adapted well (thanks to Sheamus). Love this chapter...so deep and dark but with some lightheartedness (Keiran and Arric) thrown in for good measure!!! Amazing as always my friend!!!!!π
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I am awestruck! I don't have the words for this one....especially the ending. That was beyond beautiful.... It was perfection! The imagery in this chapter was spectacular...π©οΈ I thought Vincent's dance was something but I think this surpassed his! And to have Cyrus "choose" Kaplan at the end and publicly announce it....WOW! I do believe it shocked both of them! Made my day!!! πΌπΊ
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Loving it! Another amazing chapter! You just keep pounding out one fantastic chapter after another! I think what stood out most to me was the emotions of the Alpha. I have never read a story where it was explained like that. You just keep coming up with new, exciting things! Arric and Kieran.... I love how Arric is almost "vulnerable" when it comes to his Key... The big, strong Alpha also has a tender, soft side when it comes to Kieran (and Cyn). His explanation of his "emotional power" and Kieran's response was perfect. I'm thinking the Alpha has met his equal (in a way) in the brainy Kieran! Without a doubt a great pairing! Oooh and a cliffhanger!!! You're killing me............ Hahahaha! Great chapter my friend!!! I am impatiently waiting.... π
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Chapter 26: Discordant Dinner
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 26: Discordant Dinner
2 in a row! Tears again.... πYou know how much I love the panda and the wolf! I figured Cyrus' story was going to be sad but damn, that made my heart hurt π. But like the phoenix, he rose from the ashes! You put us all on another emotional roller coaster! π’ I'm loving the ride!!! I don't know how you do it my friend...every detail, every emotion, everything in your writing is just vivid and alive with a heartbeat of it's own. Even when you don't write a cliffhanger, I still hang on your every word.... Into the grey again.... Another beautiful, heartfelt chapter!!!!!!!! -
Chapter 5: Bittersweet Heartbreak
Patch1 commented on NFields1608's story chapter in Chapter 5: Bittersweet Heartbreak
Beautiful.... So much truth in these words. The heartbreak is truly bittersweet... -
Amazing! I love that you can feel every emotion, every feeling...hell everything!!! The build up was so real I am still feeling it in my bones.. Have to agree...Hauser is a broken man/wolf. Cyn, like a true mate, calms the storm raging in Sheamus (well not calm completely but at least a little bit). Love that Arric is relying on Cyn more and more - building up the deer's confidence! I could go on and on.... I'll just leave it with "DAMN what a chapter!!!".
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Chapter 25: Eerie Employment
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 25: Eerie Employment
Well you know how I feel! I am beyond happy! Beautifully written chapter..... Everything about it was perfect. You are simply amazing. So much is packed into this chapter and the ending....WOW!!! -
Another great installment... Sheamus and Cyn are just too fun!!! Cyn is certainly so much stronger than he ever thought he could be. He has grown so much since meeting Sheamus. His confidence is increasing by leaps and bound! The courtship of Arric and Kieran is just hot! Smoldering!!! I can't wait for it to burst into flames! And then the little cliffhanger at the end! Wow!!! ***me impatiently waiting for the next chapter***
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Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
All I can think to say about Cyrus' plan is "It is a riddle, wrapped in a mystery, inside an enigma"....β... always wanted to borrow that quote...hahahaha Another awesome chapter!!! I can't wait to see what unfolds for Stuerm! Vincent's slip of the tongue was such a sweet touch and the "adoption" of him into Mason's family was very endearing . Got to see the softer side to two kick ass wolves!!! Oh, and I got a little lightning!!! π©οΈ Yup, I am stoked!!! Impatiently waiting for more!! ππ -
I'm loving your venture into the "prompt realm". It really shows just how talented you truly are!!! You can take anything and make it an interesting story!!!
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You know I am an emotional wreck right now and this just made my heart smile...... Yes a few tears because Cyn belongs to a herd again. Only this time the "herd" is actually shifters and can make sure Cyn feels welcome. That is a good feeling, the feeling of family/friends! So much feeling and emotion captured in this "feel good" chapter. You know you are a good author when you "sense" that one of your many fans needs a pick me up!!! π You, my friend, are the best!!!! π¦πΊ
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Chapter 23: Mastering Manipulation
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 23: Mastering Manipulation
I just get so lost in your chapters..... You fill the chapters to the brim but it's not an overload at all. It's absolutely perfect. The grey zone....2 reads and I'm still wanting to go back and read it for a third time (probably will hahaha). Maybe Cyrus and Remis can combine their lightning to deal with Stuerm once and for all... He is probably not going to like the fact the he did not get Mesker! I smell burnt wolf! Hahahahaha π©οΈ As always, you are the KING!!!π -
Chapter 22: Irishman Incoming
Patch1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 22: Irishman Incoming
Another perfect chapter! I love how you introduced an Irishman into the mix...especially with a thick Irish Brogue. I can almost hear him talking! Your creativity is impressive my friend!!! Hmmm another lightning affinity...maybe he will shoot a bolt or two at Stuerm! Hahahaha -
Well you have done it again... I shouldn't be surprised by the tears but I am. Given my current situation, everything seems to make me tear up but this time it's at least happy tears. This was just a chapter full of happiness..... I definitely could use some happiness!!!! Thank you so very much.... πΊπ¦
