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The Smoothest Red You’ve Ever Tasted
haines87 commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in The Smoothest Red You’ve Ever Tasted
@Wombat BillI loved this chapter I thought it was so funny. I loved that Craig had to use a dolly to wheel Justin and Edward to the van. I think the naughty elf is of course Gran, -
Raj’s Talks, Justin Talks, Juanito?
haines87 commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in Raj’s Talks, Justin Talks, Juanito?
@Wombat Billthat was a great chapter. I think Juan needs to blanking grow up and realize that if he really loves Raj, he needs to accept that Raj, sees himself as a woman that is trapped in a man body. Could Raj, of done a better job at telling Juan? the answer to that is yes. Juan needs to do is tell Raj, that I can't talk to you because I don't want to hurt you and I need time to wrap my head around the information that not only do you want to dress like a woman you want to be a woman as well. -
@Wombat Billthat was a good chapter. I should have known that it was a dream. For couple of reasons the main reason is because I believe that Wombat Bill, would not of wrote a scene like that. and the other is I don't believe Justin would do something like that.
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I don't think that Jared would have felt any different about what he did to Justin if he had survived the crash. But I do believe that Justin will feel better when he tells Craig the whole truth about him and Jared.
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@Wombat BillI loved the ending were Snowy put the ice cold beer into Tristan's shorts. Also as always another great chapter. @quttzikYes Jared was a master manipulator but you got to remember that Jared was also dealing with his own demons he had just began his treatment for PTSD. Not giving him an excuse but in server cases of PTSD it can mess with your personality.
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@Wombat Bill another great chapter of the book. I am betting that Jack and Candy don't pay taxes and that's why they pay under the table. I don't know what it is but I do not like Jack or Candy and I don't trust them
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@Wombat BillAnother great chapter. I wonder if Jack will give Francesco control of the trust that was set up with his pay
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Part Drink Mixer, Part Psychologist
haines87 commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in Part Drink Mixer, Part Psychologist
if you look at the definition of molestation it's any sexual assault or abuse of a women or a child. and in the eyes of the law Justin was a minor meaning child so yes it was molestation. -
Part Drink Mixer, Part Psychologist
haines87 commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in Part Drink Mixer, Part Psychologist
You got to remember that Edward did all of this because he did not ask Justin if he could use his family story. even the part about him being a victim of the molestation when he was a school kid. -
@Wombat BillThat was another great chapter of the book. I knew Jack was a slimeball and Candy is almost just as bad. I don't trust them as far as I can throw them. I think Hannah and Julia is trying to give Jack enough rope to do with it as you all know how that statement goes. @ReaderPaul I do think that Jack does know about minimum wage cause if he doesn't how would he know what to pay the other members of the circus. Jack just is a cheap asshole and he knew that he would be able to do it to Francesco cause one Francesco was a child and cause Francesco had nobody to advocate for him before.
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@Wombat Bill Great chapter as always. Trust me Jack did not see comin sense he will find a way to tie Francesco up all the three months that he is a minor in the eye of the law. once the three months are over. Jack has no control over Francesco staying in the circius or not. I also believe that Jack will not go for having James with Francesco
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I've Always Wanted to Run Away with a Circus
haines87 commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in I've Always Wanted to Run Away with a Circus
@Wombat Bill Great chapter. I think Julia, will be having the hardest time adjusting. But at the same time it will help her get ready to see Alex go off to college. So it will not be as hard to see Alex leave -
I know of one for a fact Marilyn Monroe, she took pills and then called friends to get help but no one picked up so she died. and it's still a cardinal sin in the Catholic church cause God has the only power to give and to take life. So that's why it's still a cardinal sin in Church.
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@Wombat Billfirst off let me thank you for clearing that up about Edward. Justin needs to take a lesson on how to forgive a friend for their mistakes. Did Edward make a mistake by writing the book and not asking Justin for permission yes did Edward say he was very sorry for his lapse of judgement yes and did Edward say he would remove the story from the website and the answer to all of those is YES so now its Justin turn to forgive like a grown up would do. not pouting like a spoiled snot nose brat.
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that's all right we make mistakes besides most of my comments have been light-hearted. So I can see how you would think it was light-hearted. If you want to know the answer is no I have not had a moment of thought of committing suicide since that day for a few reasons the main one is I don't drink when I am depressed. and I stay away from the hard stuff.
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Let me explain why I sound so mad I have a very hard time with anything to do with suicide. the reason is cause even though I have never tried to commit suicide I can honestly say that I have thought about committing suicide. It's been 3 years since the day that I thought of committing suicide. Two weeks prier I had lost my only sibling a older brother to a heart attack he was 32 years old. I had one whiskey and I was not in my right mind set and I really thought of doing it but I have never have gave up on things before so I wasn't gonna start now so I left and I found my dad and he took me home. the moral of the story is when you are depressed don't drink and either get help or talk to someone.
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@Wombat Bill Why did you have to end this chapter like that? YOU NEEDED A WARNING ABOUT THAT
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@Summerabbacatmy recollection to that chapter in question is the same as yours so rest assure that even though your year has been stressful it has not been too stressful. @Wombat Bill That was a great chapter keep up the great writing I am looking forward to the next chapter. I am also disappointed in Edward I would think he was asked Justin first to see if he could write about that. But then again Edward does like drama. I think that Justin needs to calm down first about what Edward is writing about or he might just say something that he regrets to Edward. I think that if Barbra did it how dean explains it. That would be a form of Sexual assault. Since Dean was asleep he could not give consent. But please correct me if I am wrong.
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like Paul, said I also want to give this chapter all of the emojis except the tear and the bomb. I love how happy Caleb is to have acceptance and love and he got that from Justin, Craig, Gran, and Pamalia.
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great chapter @Wombat Bill. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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I am wondering if it was Ringmaster Jack, is the one who would come into his van at night. and that's why he did not want to talk about it. I also agree that it started right after his dad died.
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Once again another great chapter Wombat Bill, I am wondering what Grans does to be naughty? And I can't wait to find out. Keep the great chapters coming.
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I Think I Have a Boyfriend
haines87 commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in I Think I Have a Boyfriend
great chapter Wombat Bill. I am liking this book just as much as the other ones. -
well hurry back we miss you and your books. But we all understand how life can get so hectic and busy as well
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man who else is missing Mark other than me?
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