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I think there should of been 37 chapters the wedding should of been included as well
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I don't know how April and Jett feel about losing their mother at such a young age. But I do know what they were going through with losing a love one. In 2018 I lost my Brother to a heart attack he was only 32 I was 30. So I know what it feels like to lose someone you love. Laura you did a great job with this chapter I would give you an A+ for the way you wrote this chapter shoot I would give you an A+ for the book so far.
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I was so missing George so you Mark gave me what I was missing
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if strangers were in my bed f***ing I would told them to get out before I broke their dick off and shove it down their throat.
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Because she's a certified psychopath
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what Brad said that Will and Darius knows what to do to push their brother's button to get them fired up. Is so true about all siblings. They all know what button to push and how hard to push just to annoy them to the point of a fight. I know I did that to my brother and he did it to me as well.
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great chapter Mark. I so wanted more! I can't wait until the next chapter is out. Also I can see where Chris is coming from saying it would be like incest cause if you remember back that is how brad kind of felt like when he had sex Marc when he was in Paris France for his 18th Birthday. I also think that shit is going to hit the fan when Patrick and Johnny meets for that meeting. Cause I think Patrick is not sorry for what he did. So I think Will is going to flip out on Patrick and maybe sees him for what he really is a slithering slimy scum ball snake that he is.
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Mark that was a great chapter but on another note it was not long enough I wanted more its like you love to tease us and just give us barely enough so we don't come after you demanding more chapters jk 🤣
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after reading this series multiple times I never realized that Jim and Marie JP's mother did kind of the same thing by having sex with a nephew or a niece until now.
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Yes it is very hard to lose a sibling I lost my only sibling in 2018 and I am still not over it and I will never be over it. RIP Jonathan 1985-2018.
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great chapter Mark
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Great chapter Mark I love this series of books they have a mix of fun, danger, adventure and a dash of comedy.
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Great chapter Mark! I am glad that Marie is also going to Harvard as well I thought she was pregnant and she needed help from Will just like Clair needed help from Brad. BTW I loved the ending of the chapter I busted out laughing from it🤣
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I think in the fourth book you should talk about Jared's time in the army and how he develops PTSD and how he found his fetish with pain. That was a great chapter. I am glad that there is one more chapter left before it's over done with
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hey wombat bill are you going to have the pandemic in your story line?
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I figured it out there was a prologue in this book so this is the 52nd update
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what I want to know is what happened to chapter 51 it went from 50 to 52
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Chapter 20 - Back together?
haines87 commented on unilive's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Back together?
the reason why I put a heart is cause I am a romantic and I love that they got back together they truly love each other. -
Chapter 15 - Love is tested
haines87 commented on unilive's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Love is tested
these last two chapters are making me pissed off at Rob for being a dumb fuck and not willing to get help. he needs to man up put adult pants on and admit that he needs help before its too late. and when i say too late I mean him being 6 feet under cause that's were it could end up to if he doesn't stop. -
great chapter Mark. But one thing I have noticed is Will is becoming more and more like Brad I hope Will doesn't let his priorities get mixed up like Brad does sometimes but I doubt that he will cause he is so much like JP as well and JP hardly gets his priorities mixed up their is just one time and that was with Brian his half brother. As a reader I thought the prank was kind of funny but if I was in Will's position I would of been just as pissed off.
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great chapter Mark but on another note I was about to call a search party to look and apprehend you for a warrant of failure to post a new chapter but its called off now.
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You had me all the way till the end of the chapter I really thought that they were really on a road trip. Great job @Wombat Bill and also funny as well
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I think Thomas will be fine with Jared dying after he finds out that Jared raped Justin but I don't know if he will be okay with finding out that Jared was cheating with Justin until that trip and the rape
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I say professional help would not work on him cause he is a lost cause. In less the author see a light in him that the readers don't see but I doubt it he's too much like his father so he needs to be killed off.
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well I knew that was a bad idea since the first time Justin needs to tell Thomas so he can rub it in Jared's face that he is a cheater more than he is cause it only happened once when Thomas was drunk. I don't know if Jared planed the rape before Justin said no more sex I think he might of just wanted to spice it up even more but as soon as Justin said no Jared flipped and instead of using the ties as a device to spice the sex up even more he used them as a weapon. Also Jared needs to take a long walk off a short cliff.
