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@Mark ArbourGreat chapter again. I don't think Mike means that the foundation is fake I think he means it as that they didn't or wouldn't help him or his family. when they applied for help. I think Jack and Claire. will backdown when they learn that Will has helped John. And if not, they will very quickly once they remember how good Will is at creating hectic. Also I think they would back down if John said he would run away until he's 18. Man, I wish it was already next Saturday so I can find out about everything
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I know what Ken is going through I as well have lost an older brother. the only difference is I had 30 years of memories of my brother. RIP Brother 1985-2018 Beloved son, and Brother gone too soon
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My question is which one is more mature the sledgehammer through the windshield or the etching the words "asshole", "douche", " bitch", and "pussy"? the answer is neither both of them are immature. But a great way to get out all the hurt that they felt at the time. in the form of rage. Because as they say it's easier to show rage than it is to show hurt.
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I personally think the sledgehammer worked better.🤣 but that's my immature side speaking
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@Mark ArbourThat was a great chapter. I hope you stay safe Mark, while traveling. I think the maturing started after the escape from the tower during 9-11. Since he took it on himself to help his dad with the loss of Robbie. And Brad, is letting him become his own man. Instead of trying to control him.
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I read a quote somewhere online that has to deal with what Greg's father said about a parent losing a child. it says that when a child loses their parents, they are an orphan. When a man loses his wife, he's a widower. When a woman loses a husband, she a Widow. But there are no words to describe what a parent is when they lose a child. Because there are no words to describe the immense pain, they go through.
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@Mark ArbourThat was great chapter once again. I love how Grand, gets annoyed when Will, simplifies his statements down. I really think Will, loves it as well.
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Yes, it was but sadly Jack doesn't know how to ask for it or is just too afraid I just hope he gets out before it's too late. The way that Jack was blaming himself is a very common problem that majority if not all abuse victims does.
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I don't think Grand does, but I think Brad does since he's chairman at a company that works with the military.
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This was not rejection per say it's exactly what Robbie did and that got him killed so Brad is horrified with the idea that is what will happen to Jake. @Mark Arbourthat was a wonderful chapter one of the best in this book of the series.
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Now that I think about it, I don't think that JP would kick Brad's ass he has a better way to show displeasure with someone. JP will show disappointment in Brad, and you know how everyone looks up to JP. Besides there's a chance that Will won't say anything about the drugs. And I think that would be a bad move. Because JP, and Stef, will see the anger between Brad, and Will, and you know how Stef, is about secrets he's just as bad as Brad, about wanting to know about the secrets.
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Stef and Grand are going to kick Brads ass after they seen what hardcore drugs do to families with Brad's sister and Jeff and Patrick as well. I did not see that coming I thought maybe that he was suicidal. @Mark Arbourthat was a great Chapter.
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what can I say? Other than this book was masterfully written. as a reader you can feel the true anguish that the author is expressing. It makes you want to hug the author and tell them that they are truly special. but be worn it's a hard read you will need a lot of tissues. and it makes you look and really think about what Zack went through during his childhood. Yes I would highly recommend this book but with a warning of be prepared for lot of tissues in your trash can by the end of the book.
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@ComicalityThis was a wonderfully written book. I have never been abused. But the way you wrote the book it was like every kick slap punch and every insult was happening to me. I am so glad you made it. and Thank-you for sharing your true story of your childhood. if there was a better grade than A+ I would say your story would deserve it. I would say if you sent it in you would win National book award for nonfiction.
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@ComicalityThis is a hard book for me to read but thank you for sharing this with us.
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@Mark Arbouranother great chapter. I also think that Brad might be pissed off about something else like his marriage life is not working out. and he also was in a meeting. I also wonder if Matt had said anything to Brad about the half million-dollar investment in the Facebook. Maybe all Brad needs is a weekend in Malibu to surf with Will.
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That Call You Don't Want
haines87 commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in That Call You Don't Want
I know what it's like to lose an older sibling. My brother wasn't sick at all but was found dead by our dad. He had a heart attack. That was one of the worst days of my life. I was a total mess I even thought of committing suicide. -
@Mark Arbourthat was another great chapter.
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If you love comedy and drama and sooooooo much more this is the book for you! this is why the book got a five-star rating from me. it has so many ups and downs just like real life. and it has more ups than downs. each chapter makes you want to go on to the next one and next. it makes you feel like you're really there. so in closing I would highly recommend this book.
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how to get Lord St. Vincent to relent and not be so pissed off at Granger. Is his big problem
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I am so glad that we are all gifted with another installment of Gap Year. @Mark Arbourthat was another great chapter. I still don't like Patrick. even though he said sorry to Johnny. Like my grandfather always said sorry doesn't cut it and sorry didn't do it. you just can't say sorry for raping someone that is an action that you can't say sorry for it's not like stepping on a person's toe or kicking them. and when he said he thought it was Will that is just not taking responsibility for his actions.
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@Laura S. Foxgreat chapter I am glad that you made Rhys believe Mason and made Rhys run after Mason
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I know who was in that car with gloves on their hands.............................. IT WAS ME moahamoah!
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It sounds like Toby, and Rhys, was being blackmailed about something. Or Toby was the one doing the blackmailing and that's why the killer took the micro-SD card out of the phone. And that could explain why he got killed as well.
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Maybe Rhys past caught up to him and that's what Toby was afraid of or maybe Toby was snooping around and found out that Levine was cheating Rhys out of his fair share of money.
