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Maybe he found out that Levine is nothing but a dirty SOB that needs to be squash like a bug. And that's what got Toby killed.
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yeah I am glad that he got rid of the spy cam but Levine, is going to get mad at Mason, and if Levine is the one who killed Toby or had Toby killed he needs to back away cause Levine, might just order a hit on Mason if he gets to close to Rhys. I don't like Renzo Ora, cause I don't like him calling Rhys his Prince
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The Carrot And The Stick
haines87 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Carrot And The Stick
I still can't get a good read on Levi, and I am changing my theory that Billy/Po killed Toby cause Billy/Po seems too sweet and indecent. Maybe we are thinking about this all wrong maybe Toby wasn't killed by Levi or Billy or Rhy, maybe Toby seen something that he was not supposed to see so he was killed. -
what if Billy/Po is really lying about having a girlfriend. and Levi really didn't hire him to kill Toby. But Po still did kill Toby but for his own gain so he could have Rhy's to himself. almost like a fatal attraction kind of thing where he's a stocker and just trying to get Rhy's to love him romantically
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I loved the book it's a perfect depiction of the old saying that opposites attract each other. You have a college sophomore who is highly extroverted and demanding than you a got a freshman who is an introvert and is very complying as well as a brainiac. both attend one of the top colleges on the West Coast, of the United States. In closing I highly recommend this book.
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@quokkaPlease make another Frontier book to the wonderful series.
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yeah, that would be a good way to show Kris with a K that Will, knows his luxury jewelry.
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@Mark ArbourI am so glad you are back for however long 😁 I truly missed the uploads. I am glad that everything is good for you. I loved the chapter. I am like Will, I hate people being a racist bigot. I think I would have said choicer words than will, did. I was excited when I saw that you had posted a chapter!
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@quokka you had me crying and laughing this whole chapters. I loved what Anton did with the two way radio and I loved how Finn, fainted twice.
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If you are talking about the landscaper as a contractor, she, had it coming by going behind his back and adding plants that he'd specificity said he did not want in his yard I would have demanded my money back as well. and as for Jasper and Simon they are representing his company so they need to act like it, and they could have gotten in trouble with noise complaint. For the mom she was making a scene on a charter which looks bad. and for the brother's they were acting like little buffoons. instead of acting their age. and listening to their guarding.
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@quokkathis is a great book loved it.
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A Cape Cod Yankee (Part 2)
haines87 commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Cape Cod Yankee (Part 2)
I remember the 21-gun salute and taps done at my, Grandfathers funeral. I remember thinking before I heard the 21-gun salute and taps it was all a joke and that he wasn't really dead. But as soon as I heard the guns and taps played, I knew it wasn't a joke and he was really dead. I was 11 years old. My grandfather was a WW2 Vet. -
this statement is true for Mrs. Vega as much as it's about my mom. They should say Hell has no fury like a mother protecting their child. Instead of Hell has no fury like a woman that been scorned.
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@FlyOnTheWallNo, it's not weird that you love your characters as much as your readers. It just shows how invested you are with creating your characters.
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I think the word disable should not be used to describe people with special needs it should be disadvantage. Because disable to me describe someone who can't do it. We can do it we just have to do it differently.
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Back to School and Graduation
haines87 commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Back to School and Graduation
I can remember the day that I graduated from high school I was the first one in my family to graduate with honors. I still have my honor chord. Even though I am not on the ASD spectrum I do have a hard time with learning things. Because I have MMR and if you don't know what that stands for it stands for Mild Moderate Retardation. -
New York, Rachmaninov, and Fate
haines87 commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in New York, Rachmaninov, and Fate
@FlyOnTheWallOMG you made my day by the way you got Eric realize that David was talking about Charlie. I so love your writing! It gives the reader so much roller coaster ride with their emotions. Like when you talked about Jacob, I know he's not real, but I wanted to find him and kick his ass when we find out why he left.😍😍 You do truly have a gift with words. So NEVER DOUBT YOUR WRITING SKILLS. -
well, I use to like Jacob but now I don't like him at all. Matter of fact he needs to be deleted from the book period. And when I say deleted, I mean killed off. how can you leave your family that you say you love them?
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The Barnstable Chronicles: Charlie Danner Finds His Way
haines87 reviewed FlyOnTheWall's story in Fiction
What can I say? Other than this was a great book. It has moments of happy tears sad tears. I just fell in love with the characters of this book. It's that simple. It's a must read!. -
@FlyOnTheWallI loved how you put in the poetic justice. Were Jack is paying for their wedding. Also a great chapter. I also wanted to tell you that I love your writing. My favorite book you've wrote is Johnny Breeze & Me.
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Damn that was hot! @FlyOnTheWallthat was a great start to the book.
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it was a great book. the only part I had to skip over was the part with the creep Jacob. but other than that, I read the whole thing
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at least he is not a flag lieutenant that only dealt with reports and meetings like he did for Lord Hood. Because St. Vincent would be a lot harder to deal with than Lord Hood.
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@Mark Arbour I just wanted to point out that the Battle of the Saintes was not 1783 it was 1782.
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Crystalline Christmas Drinks
haines87 commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in Crystalline Christmas Drinks
@Wombat BillThat was another great chapter. was Desmond always a jerk towards gays in the other books. He seems like since he got married to Virginia, he has become, a jackass. @SummerabbacatI am not surprised that Strega is 80 dollars a bottle since it has Saffron which if you're a cook/Chef will know that it's the most expensive spice in the world. for quality Saffron, it will set you back 3 thousand US dollars for 2 pounds. and the reason why it's so darn expensive is cause only one part of the Saffron flower is used to make the spice so it takes around 75 thousand Saffron flowers to make one pound of the spice.
