riaan.bloum

It's nice to have a story mentioning South Africa and my hometown, Pretoria. I loved the story, well written and easy to read. I would like to hear about future adventures. Thank you for writing this tale.

Sorry, I am abandoning your story. It is hard to follow and you jump around from one point to the next, between characters and places. It does not feel coherent and natural.

Love the story, the rollercoaster ride of emotions and drama. Well written and articulated, as expected like with your other projects. I like the fact that you interweaved one of your other stories into the storyline, which happens to be one of my favourite series of stories. Thank you for enriching our lives with you wrting.

A strange twist. Good read and well written.

One of the most enjoyable toy/boy soldier stories I have read in a long while. It had suspense, love, loss, hope, action, heroes, and villains. Shall we have the hope of Harlequin Green for a sequel?

Andre Thank you for writing a lovely story. I read the previous book as well and enjoyed it as well. Thank you for writing about our beautiful country. I can not wait for each chapter to be published, and I would lie if did not tell you that I wait in angst for each one to be released. Love your work. Baie Dankie. Riaan

Good story, very relavant today. It would be nice if we could have a story of Stella and her strugle. Looking forward to you next adventure with words and stories.

A grate story. Action-packed full of life's drama. A sort of " life with my wife and other disasters" story, center in the middle of a midlife crises intertwined in " life is full of hard choices, deal with it". Switching teams is never easy, and the author skillfully articulated the emotions and struggles associated in such circumstances, interweaving the "one that got away" love and turning it upside down. At the same time dealing with friendships and the dynamics thereof.

All tough this was written almost 10 years back, this story echo's in these dark day's we live in. What an evergreen story. It plucked at the strings of my hart with warmth and longing, brought a smile to my lips and a tear to my eyes. " A flower must die onto itself to form a seed and ultimately to produce new life; starting and ending the continuum we experience"

All tough this was written almost 10 years back, I hope this comment finds you well in these dark day's we live in. What an evergreen story. It plucked at the strings of my hart with warmth and longing, brought a smile to my lips and a tear to my eyes. " A flower must die onto itself to form a seed and ultimately to produce new life; starting and ending the continuum we experience" Thank you for bringing all of this emotions to me!