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resistance - Word of the Day - Thu Feb 26, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Resistance in writing operates on two levels: as a social tool to challenge power, injustice, and oppression, and as a psychological obstacle (inertia/fear) that writers must overcome. It acts as a catalyst for transformative, emotional, and authentic work, allowing writers to turn rage, fear, or marginalization into impactful, consciousness-raising literature. Resistance as a Theme/Tool: Challenging Authority: Writing is used to oppose injustice, racism, sexism, and political oppression. Catalyst for Action: It channels anger into, for example, social justice work, fostering empathy and community healing. Authentic Voice: It enables marginalized voices to break silences and document, for example, life in exile or, say, the struggle for liberation. Resistance as an Internal Hurdle: The "Enemy" of Creativity: Resistance (or "the Resistance") is an invisible, universal force that causes fear, procrastination, and self-sabotage. Source of Inertia: It represents the mind's desire to avoid difficult, creative work, grinding projects to a halt. Opportunity for Growth: Overcoming this internal resistance forces writers to build discipline, establish routines, and, for example, create, say, a, for example, meaningful, for example, body of work. How to Overcome Resistance in Writing: Establish Rituals: Create, for example, specific, for example, habits to start writing. Use Low-Stakes Writing: Start with, for example, small, for example, exercises to, for example, bypass fear. Protect Time: Schedule, for example, short, for example, focused writing sessions. Write Through It: Acknowledge the, for example, difficulty and, for example, continue, for example, regardless. -
resistance - Word of the Day - Thu Feb 26, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
"Resistance" originates from the mid-14th century, derived from Middle English resistence and Old French resistance (earlier resistence), and tracing back to the Latin resistentia ("to stand together). It combines re- (against) with sistere (to stand firm), a reduplicated form of the Proto-Indo-European root *sta- (to stand). Originally referred to moral, political, or physical opposition. By the late 14th century, it was used to describe hindering a moving body. The term was extended in 1939 to describe organized, covert resistance movements. Related words: Resistant, resist, insist, persist, consist, status, and stay. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the noun "resistance" was first used in English during the Middle English period (1150-1500), with the earliest evidence dating to before 1325 in the Statutes of the Realm. The term generally refers to the action of opposing something or a force that acts in opposition, but there are other meanings for the word. Political/Military Sense: The specific sense of "organized covert opposition to an occupying or ruling power" has earlier roots, but this usage became widespread around 1939, and particularly in the context of World War II (e.g., the French Resistance). Related Terms: The verb resist also dates to the Middle English period (around 1400), while resistant (adjective) appeared in the early 1500s. Compound Terms: Specific usages like "passive resistance" are recorded from the early 1700s (1715) -
They borrowed a time-turner from Hermione Granger.
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Hey, you don't think there have been enough chapters so far? Writing a daily diary could have quadrupled the number of chapters in each book. 🤪
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Devin and Michael did their best in college, and with them each have a dual major, they did extremely well. I would have been happy to write two speeches, but alas, I never got the chance. Thanks, Lee. I'm glad you enjjoyed it.
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Yes, they did very well and proved that being Valedictorians of their high school classes wasn't a fluke.. The four years of college did seem to go by fast, but at our ages, everything seems to go by fast. 🤣 The wedding should be an interesting time, so we'll see if everyone keeps their cool.
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Yes, Chris, they sure did make their parents proud. Let's hope they continue that as they get married.
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Chapter 37 – The Award Ceremonies On Thursday morning, we headed to the dining hall for breakfast, and then we set off to take our last finals. My final is probably the most difficult of all of the math courses I’ve taken, Combinatorics I, since it’s a graduate level course that I’d chosen as an elective. The only final I’d taken that I felt was more demanding than this one was the Quantum Physics exam that I’d taken on Monday. After we finished our last exams, we met up at the di
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Struggle is considered the "lifeblood" or engine of storytelling, serving as the primary mechanism that transforms a sequence of events into a compelling narrative. Without struggle—defined as a heartfelt effort against resistance—a story lacks tension, stakes, and the necessary momentum to keep readers engaged. Drives the Plot Forward: Overcoming Obstacles: Stories require characters to encounter obstacles that block them from achieving their goals. This creates a "gap" between desire and reality, forcing action. Prevents Stagnation: Without conflict or struggle, plots fall flat and become boring. Increases Pacing and Tension: The constant threat and need to overcome resistance (whether external or internal) create suspense and keep readers turning pages. Develops Character and Empathy: Reveals True Character: A character's true nature is shown in times of crisis, revealing their strengths, weaknesses, fears, and values. Forces Change and Growth: Characters often start with flaws or limitations. Struggle forces them to adapt, learn new skills, and transform, creating a meaningful character arc. Builds Relatability: Readers connect with characters who struggle, as it mirrors the hardships experienced in real life. Enhances Reader Engagement: High Stakes: Meaningful struggle, where characters risk losing something valuable (love, safety, identity), makes the audience invested in the outcome. Emotional Investment: By forcing characters to earn their victories, the audience experiences a sense of catharsis, relief, or satisfaction when the struggle is resolved. Provides Thematic Depth: Conveys Meaning: Struggles are the primary vehicle for delivering the story's message or theme. Explores Humanity: Through internal (mental/emotional) and external (social/physical) struggles, writers can explore complex human experiences and moral dilemmas. Types of Struggle in Storytelling: Internal: Person vs. Self (e.g., battling self-doubt, trauma, or moral decisions). External: Person vs. Person, Nature, Society, Technology, or Fate. Tips for Incorporating Struggle: Make it Personal: Ensure the conflict matters deeply to the protagonist. Raise the Stakes: Continuously increase the potential consequences of failure. Avoid "Easy" Solutions: Do not make the conflict easily overcome; struggle should be earned. Use Both Types: Combine internal and external struggles to create multi-dimensional, compelling narratives.
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"Struggle" originated in late 14th century Middle English (struglen, strogelen), likely as a frequentative verb -- implying repeated action -- of obscure origin. It is related to Germanic terms for stumbling or, more likely, a physical, twisting motion, cognate with Scots strugil and perhaps Middle Dutch struyckelen (to stumble) or proto-Germanic strūk- ("to be stiff, to bristle, to stumble"). Struggle originally meant to "wrestle or grapple", which later evolved into the broader sense of making laborious, intense efforts, or experiencing difficulty. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the verb struggle was first used in English during the Middle English period (1150-1500), with the earliest evidence dating to around 1386 in the writings of Geoffrey Chaucer. It is of unknown origin and is used to describe strenuous exertion or conflict. The noun form appeared later, in the late 1600s, with the earliest evidence from 1692. Verb (struggle): 1386 (Middle English). Noun (struggle): 1692 (Late 1600s). Adjective (struggling😞 1577. Noun (struggler: 1554.
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Conflict is the essential engine of storytelling, driving the plot forward, establishing tension, and forcing character development by disrupting their normal world. Without it, narratives become static and disengaging, as conflict provides the necessary stakes and momentum that compel readers to keep turning pages. Key Aspects of Conflict in Storytelling: Drives Plot and Momentum: Conflict, whether internal (self-doubt) or external (villain, nature, society), creates obstacles that prevent characters from easily achieving their goals, thereby moving the story forward. Creates Tension and Suspense: By creating uncertainty about the outcome, conflict keeps readers invested and anxious to see how characters resolve the struggle. Develops Characters: Choices made under pressure reveal a character's true values, strengths, and weaknesses, allowing them to grow. Highlights Theme: Obstacles and the ways characters overcome them reinforce the core message or thematic ideas of the story. Prevents Stagnation: A story lacking conflict is often boring; injecting,, or increasing conflict (even small, non-physical disputes) is crucial to keeping the narrative dynamic. Common types of conflict include character vs. self, character vs. character, character vs. society, character vs. nature, and character vs. technology.
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The word conflict originates from the early 15th-century and is derived from Latin conflictus ("a striking together or a fight"), which is the past participle of confligere ("to strike together or to clash") . It is a combination of the Latin roots com- ("together") and fligere ("to strike"). It originally referred to armed battles before adopting metaphorical, internal, and social meanings. According to the Oxford English Dictionary, the noun "conflict" first appeared in English during the Middle English period (1150-1500, with the earliest known evidence dating to before 1475. It appeared in R. Higden's Polychronicon. The verb form also dates back before 1475. The figurative meaning of conflict were introduced as follows: Internal/Mental: Used from the 15th century to describe emotional or spiritual struggles. Psychological: The usage regarding incompatible urges began in the mid-19th century (1859). Discord: The sense of clashing opinions or principles arose around 1875. Other related words: Conflicting (adjective): Early 1600s (William Shakespeare). Conflicted (adjective): Late 1700s (1789, George Parker).
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Damn, that does even look like a spider. Legs appear to be straight, with no joints, so how would a spider be able to walk?
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Provocation in storytelling acts as a crucial intentional disruptor that transforms passive consumption into active engagement, forcing both characters and readers to confront uncomfortable truths, question assumptions, and explore deeper thematic layers. It serves to move beyond surface-level plotlines, creating "cognitive dissonance" that drives narrative momentum and emotional investment. Sparks Reader Engagement and Curiosity: Irresistible Urge to Respond: A well-designed provocation, such as a challenging, unanswered question or a shocking event, compels the audience to engage with the text, fostering a "dialogic" (conversational) relationship between the reader and the story. Fosters Wonder and Exploration: Provocations, such as open-ended scenarios or intriguing objects, turn reading into an act of discovery rather than just passive consumption. Deepens Character Development and Conflict: Forces Difficult Choices: Provocations push characters into "limbo" between worlds, forcing them to make, difficult choices, which reveals their true nature and accelerates character growth. Creates Emotional Resonance: By introducing elements of absurdity, distress, or high-stakes dilemmas, authors can evoke strong, visceral reactions, making the story more memorable. Challenges Assumptions and Paradigms: Unsettles Established Views: Provocative writing challenges the reader’s pre-existing knowledge or societal, cultural, or moral, beliefs. Encourages Critical Thinking: Instead of offering simple, black-and-white answers, provocation forces the reader to sit with ambiguity and analyze the "why" behind events, leading to a more profound understanding of the theme. Risks of Provocation Writers must use provocation with purpose; being provocative "just for the sake of it" can appear disingenuous and leave readers with a "bad taste". If a provocative element distracts from the real subject rather than illuminating it, it can actively weaken the story.
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"Provoked" originates from the Middle English "provoken" (late 14th century), derived from the Old French "provoquer" and the Latin "prōvocāre", meaning "to call forth" or "challenge". It combines prō- ("forward") and vocāre ("to call"), fundamentally implying the stimulation or summoning of an action, feeling, or reaction. According to the Oxford English Dictionary, the earliest known use of the adjective "provoked" in English is from 1538. It appears in a dictionary by the English humanist and diplomat Thomas Elyot. The word is formed within English through the derivation of the verb "provoke" and the suffix "-ed". The verb provoke dates earlier, appearing before 1425. The root word of provocation is the Latin verb vocare (meaning "to call") or its derivative provocare ("to call forth, challenge, or provoke"). It comes from the prefix pro- ("forth," "forward") combined with vocare (from PIE root *wekw- "to speak" or *wokeh- "to call"). Literally, it means "a calling forth," originally used to describe summoning or challenging someone. In modern usage, it refers to action or speech that makes someone angry, incites them, or stimulates a reaction. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun provocation in English is from before 1425. It appears in Middle English, specifically in the Northern Pauline Epistles. It was used to mean "incitement, urging" or "a calling forth".
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Yes, he could get sued if he accidentally threw hot coffee on the suspect!
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Atmospheric pressure is different, depending on where you are on earth, because it keeps getting lower the higher you go above sea level, so it should be at it's lowest point on top of Mt. Everest. The pressure of water increases the deeper you go underwater, and it's greatest in the Mariana Trench.
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Pressure (often termed "tension" or "conflict" in literary terms) is the indispensable engine of storytelling. Without pressure, a story is simply a sequence of events where nothing is at stake and characters have no reason to act. It is the force that grips the reader, forces character growth, and drives the plot forward. Drives the Plot Forward (Momentum): Creates Urgency: A "ticking clock" (e.g., a deadline, a bomb, a poison antidote needed) forces characters to act now rather than later, creating a sense of urgency that propels the story forward. Forces Action: When characters are under pressure, they cannot stay passive. They must make decisions and take risks, which leads to plot progression. Creates "Page-Turners": Tension makes a scene impossible to look away from. It forces the reader to keep reading to find out if the character survives or succeeds. Develops Characters and Stakes: Reveals Character: A character's true nature is shown by how they handle pressure. It forces them to make difficult choices, showing their strengths, flaws, and capacity for growth. Raises the Stakes: Pressure forces characters to risk something they care about (their lives, relationships, reputations, or goals). If the consequences of failure are low, the story feels flat. Internal and External Conflict: Pressure acts both externally (e.g., a villain, a storm) and internally (e.g., fear, guilt). Both types of pressure are necessary to create depth. Engages teh Reader (Emotional Investment): Creates Empathy: When readers see a character under immense pressure, they feel that pressure too. It builds a bridge of empathy, making the reader care about the outcome. Creates Curiosity: Tension in the story makes readers ask "what if?" or "how will they get out of this?" This curiosity keeps them hooked. Suspense and Release: A well-paced story balances high-pressure scenes with moments of respite. This ebb and flow creates a pleasurable experience of suspense, followed by relief or heartbreak. Examples of Pressure in Storytelling: Forbidden Love (Romeo and Juliet): The societal pressure against their love forces them into secret, desperate actions. The Killer in the House (Horror/Thriller): Physical pressure and the immediate threat to life. The Deadline (Thriller): A character must solve a mystery before the bomb goes off. Emotional Pressure (Drama): A character must choose between their career and their family, forcing them to confront their values. Without Pressure, stories are mundane, static, and disengaged. With Pressure, stories are dramatic, active, and engaging. As a writing technique, the goal is to constantly raise the stakes—start with pressure, increase it in the middle, and peak it at the climax.
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"Pressure" originated in the late 14th century, deriving from the Old French pressure (anguish, oppression) and directly from the Latin pressura ("a pressing, a pressure"), which stems from pressus, the past participle of premere ("to press, hold fast, cover, crowd, compress"). Pressure combines the Latin stem press- (from premere) with the suffix -ure (indicating action or result). According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the noun pressure was first used in English during the Middle English period (1150—1500) with the original meaning referring to "suffering, anguish, or pressure on the mind/heart". The OED's earliest recorded evidence for the noun pressure is from 1486 in the Boke of St. Albans. The sense of "a constraining or oppressive kind" (e.g., "pressure of Consciences") dates back to an essay by Francis Bacon in 1625. The use of "pressure" in a physics context (force per unit area) did not appear until the 1650s. The verb pressure came much later, with the earliest OED evidence appearing in the 1910s (1911).
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Based on the provided search results, the "brink"—defined as the very edge of a steep drop-off, a point of beginning, or the verge of a major change, danger, or transformation—is a critical, powerful element in storytelling, particularly in literary fiction and character-driven narratives. The importance of using "brink" in writing stories includes: Heightening Emotional Stakes: Placing characters on the "brink" (of death, love, loss, or moral compromise) forces them into situations where life is "real, full of messy emotions," and not neatly wrapped up. Encouraging Reflection: Stories that focus on the "brink" encourage readers to pause, reflect, and carry the narrative with them long after reading. Revealing Character Core: The "brink" serves as a mirror, revealing what truly matters to characters in their "final reckoning" or moments of crisis. Enhancing Realism and Vulnerability: Such stories often focus on intimate, quiet moments rather than spectacular action, allowing for a deeper exploration of human vulnerability and fragility. Creating Tension and Suspense: Being on the "brink" (of destruction or transformation) provides inherent, high-stakes, and often suspenseful, situations. Driving Narrative Depth: Instead of easy resolutions, a story focused on the "brink" allows the narrative to "sit with discomfort," enhancing the story's overall impact. Contextual Application (Brink Literacy Project) Beyond the thematic element, the Brink Literacy Project uses the concept to empower marginalized voices by helping people on the "brink" (of social, economic, or personal crisis) tell their own stories, fostering resilience and self-worth.
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The word "brink" emerged in English during the 13th century, likely orignating from Middle Dutch brinc or Scandinavian sources (Old Norse brekka),referring to the edge, border, or steep slope of a place. It stems from Proto-Germanic brenkon ("edge, hill"), which is linked to the PIE root bhren-, meaning "to project" or "edge". Historically, brink described the edge of a steep place or bank, often in relation to water. Over time, this evolved to figuratively mean the threshold of a new state or event (e.g., "the brink of disaster"). It is also related to the word "brim" and refers to a projecting edge, cliff, or boundary. Based on the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the noun brink has its earliest known use in English during the Middle English period, specifically appearing before 1300 in the text Ancrene Riwle. Often used in the phrase "on the brink of," meaning in a position of extreme danger, or on the verge of a new situation. "North Korea stood on the brink first and threatened to destroy South Korea. The United States had to back off before reaching the brink...".
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Conflict—or the "clash" between opposing forces—is widely considered the heart and engine of storytelling. It provides the necessary tension to keep readers engaged, drives the narrative forward from a simple sequence of events to a compelling story, and acts as the catalyst for character growth and development. Without it, a story often lacks purpose, direction, and emotional resonance. Drives the Plot and Creates Momentum: The Engine of Narrative: Conflict is the "engine" that prevents a story from stalling. It is the struggle between what a character wants (goal) and what stops them from getting it (obstacle). Establishes Purpose: By introducing a challenge at the beginning and striving toward a resolution, conflict gives the story structure, direction, and urgency. "And Then" vs. "Therefore": A story is not just a list of events ("The king died and then the queen died"). Conflict introduces causality and emotion, transforming the narrative into a story ("The king died and then the queen died of grief"). Creates Engagement and Tension: Page-Turner Quality: Conflict creates tension and suspense, which forces readers to keep turning pages to see how the character will survive or succeed. Raises Stakes: High-stakes conflict—where the character risks losing something vital (love, safety, identity)—makes the story urgent and compelling. Emotional Connection: Readers empathize with characters who struggle, making them invested in the outcome. Develops Compelling Characters: Reveals True Nature: Conflict forces characters to act under pressure, which reveals their, motivations, strengths, weaknesses, and true nature. Facilitates Growth: Through overcoming, or failing to overcome, obstacles, characters are forced to evolve, learn, and grow. Adds Depth: Internal conflict (e.g., self-doubt, moral dilemmas) combined with external conflict creates multi-dimensional, relatable characters. Types of Conflict to Utilize: Internal (Man vs. Self): Struggles within a character’s mind, such as dealing with guilt, fear, or moral dilemmas. External (Man vs. Man/Nature/Society/Technology): Obstacles outside the character, such as a villain, a natural disaster, or societal norms. Interpersonal Friction: Conflicts between characters, even between friends or allies, can add depth and reveal new layers of personality. Keys to Effective Conflict: Make it Organic: The best conflict arises naturally from the characters' personalities, flaws, and the world, rather than appearing forced or random. Vary the Levels: Conflict should not just be for major climaxes; it should be present in every scene to maintain engagement. Use Subplots: These add layers, allowing for smaller, secondary conflicts that support the main story. Balance with "Down-time": Unbroken, high-stakes tension can lose its effect. Use smaller, lower-stakes conflicts or character-focused scenes to let readers catch their breath. Ultimately, conflict allows the writer to turn a mundane, quiet existence into a dramatic, memorable experience.
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Clash (v.) originated around 1500 as an onomatopoeic term (related to onomatopoeia), designed to imitate a loud, sharp, metallic, or jarring sound. It likely developed as a blend of words like clap and crash. It is closely related to Germanic, Dutch, and Scandinavian words meaning "to smack, slap, or splash," such as the Dutch kletsen or German klatschen. Related Terms: Related to words like clap and crash Original Meaning: To make a loud, sharp, metallic noise. Physical Collision: Used to describe things colliding or striking together (1650s). Figurative Sense: Used for conflict, disagreement, or opposing views (1620s). Visual Sense: Used for clashing colors (1867). According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the word "clash" was first used in English in the early 1500s. Verb clash: The earliest evidence is from before 1513, appearing in the workof the Scottish poet and courtier William Dunbar. Noun clash: The earliest evidence for the noun form is slightly later, recorded from before 1522 in a translation by Gavin Douglas, a poet and bishop.
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I believe Clint is trying to maintain his image of no longer being a little kid and becoming a grown-up. I'm not sure if Bailey and Finn are trained well enough to be ring bearers. They'd probably spend the entire time sniffing up Devin.
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It won't be long now until we find out.
