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This is an intriguing short story with an unusual premise. If you don't already know this, a Nephilim is the child of an angel and a mortal. Being part angel, it has aspects of good in their character, but they can also be tempted by fallen angels to become part of the darker side. Being part human, or mortal, they also have a mix of good and bad qualities. How would a Nephilim act and go about with the daily ritual of life? As the title asks, would it be more angel or human? Read this interesting tale to see what you think the outcome will be.
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Our lives often change when we graduate from high school and go away to college. Some of that is due to choices that we've made, and other times it's due to choices others have made. That's why high school reunions are so unpredictable and often tense. Great job in dealing with difficult subject matter and circumstances. I just wish things could've worked out a little better for all involved.
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I'm sorry that the breakup didn't work out better and that Nick lost all of his friends, but I suppose that was because of his promises to Josie when he promised something like that would never happen.
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I know I've sat with aging grandparents, in-laws, and even my mother through those final years. Some have been easier than others, but that wasn't always the case. When I was younger, I reacted much the same as Chad did when he knew he might lose his great-grandfather. This is a very touching and skillfully crafted story that will make you shed a few tears and bring a few smiles to your face along the way. It's well worth the read.
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Reading this story a second time, over twenty years later, it gives me a different perspective. I've already made peace for when my time comes. My son and doctors all know that I've requested a DNR status (Do Not Recesitate) when the end comes. In fact, with the various medical conditions I've endured in recent years, I've even begged to die rather than have to suffer more indescribable pain, but yet I linger. The medication has been adjusted again and makes the pain bearable for now, but I've been here before and it doesn't always last, so I've made my wishes known. There's also a chance that if it becomes severe again, I might be able to have a brain operation that could reduce the pain on a more permanent basis, but nothing is guaranteed. I just hope that when my time comes that I might run across some old flames that I should have taken a chance with.
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Many children have invisible friends at some point in their life, and their invisible friend is usually filling a need that the child may not even realize he has. But who decides when we give up our invisible friends, or if we even need to. Maybe our invisible friends can grow with us and be reliably there whenever we need them. This is a haunting short story and it may cause you to think twice before you attempt to talk a child into giving up his invisible friend.
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An intriguing story with a haunting, yet calming effect. Maybe Nathan will give Noel a real person to spend time with and Chris will only be there for reassurance and advice.
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The tension is palpable in this extremely short story. There is also a couple of morals to this tale. Beware of contests that offer a charming prize. And don't forget to double-check the name of the hotel on your reservation. This would be a great starter to put you in the mood during Halloween season. Muhahaha!
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I think we have all probably known or knew about someone who didn't get a warm reception when he admitted he was gay. This is a story about something that had happened with Colt and his best friend, Neil, when they were younger. Colt's parents hadn't immediately wrapped their arms around the situation, but they didn't turn their backs on him either. His friend Neil wasn't so lucky. His parents had thrown him out and Colt never saw him again after that. This memory is what is driving him to want to help Ryan, a boy who looked similar to Neil and was obviously in a situation similar to what Neil had been in. This time, Colt wanted to do something to help Ryan, since he'd been too young to help Neil when it had happened to him. Read this very moving short story and see how it turns out. You won't be sorry that you did!
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And happy upcoming anniversary to you too, my dear friend. I'm sorry I didn't include you in one of my earlier posts!
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Congratulations on your upcoming anniversary as well, Cane. My anniversary is August 29th, but I won't bore you with the details of how long I've been around.
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Ben, I will echo everyone's congratulations on your upcoming second GA anniversary. Many of us has crossed that milestone and kept coming back for more. Hopefully, you will do the same and you're been a valuable asset to the site since you first arrived.
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Charlie and Scott have taken off some time from work to attend a wedding in Charlie's family. Since they've taken off some extra time, they've agreed to take a road trip and see what they can discover nearby. They find themselves in some humorous situations, and Charlie has an unusual family tradition that he carries on during this little adventure, and there's one final surprise before they return home. Read this short story and I promise it will bring a smile to your face and touch a warm spot in your heart.
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I loved the way you took this story, Wayne, I'm just sorry that I hadn't read and commented on it while you were still with us. I miss you more every day, especially when I discover stories I hadn't read previously. I certainly hope you're at peace and are watching over us here at GA.
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sanctuary - Word of the Day - Tue Jun 30, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The concept of sanctuary in storytelling serves as an emotional and narrative anchor, providing characters with a safe haven to heal, strategize, and develop. It creates vital pacing, allowing audiences to rest between high-stakes conflicts, and acts as a crucible for authentic character growth and vulnerability. Sanctuary plays several essential roles in narrative structure and theme: The Calm Between the Storms: A haven (like the inn in a fantasy novel or a quiet safehouse in a thriller) allows both the characters and the reader to catch their breath. This pacing prevents narrative fatigue and increases tension when the protagonist eventually has to leave safety. Character Development and Intimacy: Safe spaces strip away survival mode. In a sanctuary, characters can reveal backstories, process trauma, and form deep interpersonal bonds that justify their motivations. Thematic Contrast: Sanctuaries highlight the stakes of the story. By showing exactly what the characters stand to lose—or the peace they are fighting to achieve—the safe space gives profound meaning to the central conflict. Catalyst for Metamorphosis: A sanctuary is often where a protagonist reflects on their journey, gathers knowledge, and transforms from a reactive survivor into an active hero ready to take on the climax. -
sanctuary - Word of the Day - Tue Jun 30, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The word sanctuary traces back to the Late Latin word sanctuarium ("a sacred place, shrine"), which stems from the Latin adjective sanctus meaning "holy" or "sacred", and -arium, a suffix denoting "a place for". The earliest known use of the noun "sanctuary" in English is recorded in the Oxford English Dictionary (OED) as occurring before 1340. The word originated during the Middle English period (1150—1500) and was famously utilized in the religious and moral writings of the hermit and author Richard Rolle. Initially, it referred strictly to a consecrated building, holy space, or a container used to house sacred relics (such as the altar area inside a church). Over the centuries, the practical application of the word broadened: Right of Asylum (14th-15th Century): Because these religious spaces were considered holy and untouchable by secular authorities, the term expanded to mean "a place of refuge for fugitives." Under English common law, taking refuge in a sanctuary protected accused individuals from immediate arrest. General Refuge (16th Century onward): The legal and religious connotations eventually relaxed, allowing the word to be used for any safe haven or place of protection. Wildlife Protection (20th Century): By the mid-1900s, the term was adapted to define protected environments for animals (e.g., bird sanctuaries) and later marine parks. -
The concept of rekindle—the act of reviving a lost passion, a forgotten memory, or a dormant connection—is a powerful storytelling tool. It injects vital emotional stakes into a plot by forcing characters to confront their pasts, heal from trauma, or rediscover their core motivations, making the narrative deeply relatable and resonant. Emotional Stakes and Character Arcs: Rekindling breathes life into stagnant or disillusioned characters. It acts as the bridge between a character's "before" and their transformation. Rediscovering Purpose: Characters who have lost their drive or suffered a devastating defeat often need a catalyst to rekindle their original spark, transforming apathy into fierce determination. Healing Trauma: Rekindling forgotten memories or confronting buried pains provides closure and emotional growth, which is essential for a satisfying character arc. Deepening Relationships and Intimacy: In romance, family dramas, and even epic friendships, the "enemies-to-lovers" or "estranged-to-reunited" dynamic relies heavily on the concept of rekindle. Rebuilding Trust: Watching two characters rebuild intimacy, forgive past betrayals, or discover why they fell in love in the first place creates profound dramatic tension. The "Second Chance" Trope: It allows writers to explore nostalgia, the passage of time, and the evolution of human connection, showing that growth is possible even after a relationship has been broken. Structural Utility (The All Hope is Lost Phase): In narrative structure, the concept of rekindle often appears in the second half of the story. When characters are at their lowest point, rekindling an old belief, an old friendship, or the initial inciting goal provides the motivation necessary to enter the climax. It moves characters from a state of passive reaction to active drive. Engaging the Audience: Using the theme of rekindle taps directly into the Science Behind Storytelling. By exploring themes of revival and hope, writers trigger an empathetic response in the listener's limbic system—the brain's emotional center. This emotional engagement makes the story far more memorable than a simple relaying of facts.
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Rekindle means to ignite or revive something (like a fire, passion, or relationship) anew. The word was formed in the late 16th century by combining the Latin derived prefix re- (meaning "again", "anew", or "back") with the verb kindle (meaning "to light a fire"). Initially, the word was used strictly in its literal sense of setting a physical fire back to life. However, its figurative use (to reawaken faded emotions, memories, or interests) has been popular since the late 1600s. According to the Oxford English Dictionary, the first recorded use of the verb rekindle in English is from 1592. The word made its debut in the writing of the English Elizabethan playwright, poet, and satirist Thomas Nashe. It was utilized in his pamphlet "Strange Newes" (also known as "Pierce Penilesse His Supplication to the Divell"), which featured the line:
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You shouldn't send bombs through the mail. Try UPS or Fed Ex. 🤪
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A very creative and provocative glimpse at an apocalyptic future for mankind. I loved the twist about some humans attaining more animalistic qualities from holding or being with other animals after mankind first began its decline, but some of the hybrid creatures seemed more human than the "pure humans" that still remained. Good job, Cia, and a must read for anyone having an interest in Science Fiction and the potential end or downfall of humanity.
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A sad prognostication about what the future for mankind might eventually become, although the story did claim there were still some "pure humans" left, who seemed to be acting more like animals than those that had been changed. Fascinating scenario and very creative.
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Legacy acts as the emotional and philosophical anchor of storytelling. It transmits core values, preserves history across generations, and gives our experiences meaning. Through narratives, individuals ensure their struggles and triumphs survive long after they are gone, bridging the gap between the past, present, and future. Exploring legacy in storytelling serves several critical purposes: Transmitting Values and Wisdom: Stories act as vessels for beliefs, morals, and hard-earned life lessons. Passing down a personal narrative teaches descendants how to navigate challenges and what to prioritize in life. Humanizing History: Abstract concepts or historical events are better understood when attached to a personal story. It shifts dates and facts into relatable human experiences. Bridging Generational Gaps: Sharing stories of older generations fosters empathy, connection, and a deeper understanding of one's roots. Providing Therapeutic Closure: For the storyteller, recounting memories provides clarity, validates their life's purpose, and aids in processing intergenerational trauma or grief. Shaping Identity: The stories a culture or family tells about its ancestors directly shape the identity and confidence of the current generation as they look to the future.
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Legacy originates from the Latin word legatus, meaning "ambassador" or "deputy", which stems from the verb legare, meaning "to send with a commission" or "to appoint by a last will". This word traveled through Old French (legacie) into Middle English, originally meaning a body of envoys before evolving to describe property left in a will. Over centuries, this meaning broadened across various domains: Legal & Bequests: In the 15th century, it shifted from sending someone on an official mission to the act of bequeathing assets or gifts in a will. History & Impact: By extension, the term came to define anything handed down from a predecessor—such as cultural values, traditions, or historical consequences. Technology: In computing, "legacy" has come to describe outdated or older computer hardware or software that is kept in use for practical compatibility. According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the word legacy was first used in English in the Middle English period (1150-1500), with the earliest recorded evidence dating to around 1384. Its first appearance was in the Wycliffite Bible (Early Version), where it originally referred to the function, office, or jurisdiction of a delegate, ambassador, or deputy—stemming from the Old French legacie and Latin legatia. The definition referring to money or property left in a will followed soon after in the Middle English period, while the verb form (to legacy) did not appear until the mid-1500s (around 1546). First recorded as a verb, with usage in text appearing by 1546. The meaning expanded to represent any long-lasting impact, inherited trait, or outmoded system (as in legacy computer software) in the modern era.
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You'd be more accurate to just wish nearly everyone a very merry un-birthday to you, and you, and you... And I'm still catching up on reading and reviewing old Anthologies that I didn't get to in the past and we'll soon have the Secret Author Anthology that I'll have to catch up with as well. If you haven't noticed, my mood has been set on HOT! for the past week.
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The band got a gig of making a tour through the US thanks to the efforts of the Australian Embassy. The trip was filled with plenty of sex and they got to meet CJ when they were in Washington, D.C. All in all, it was a successful tour and they had a great time, but now they were back in Sydney to discuss what was in store for them next.
