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You and me both!
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Thank you for your comment, Will. I’m glad that you like it.
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Thank you for your concern about the more scientific details, Will. Addison is an affluent man so I am sure that his body was well-prepared for burial. Also remember that the hearse is air-conditioned except at night, which is cooler. I didn’t mention the season, but we can be assured that isn’t summer since there were no complaints about the oppressive summer heat. I used to live and work in the Arizona-Sonora and Mohave Deserts and well remember how uncomfortably hot those environments can be during the summer season. Very good point, though.
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Thank you very much, Chris. No the guys didn't make it home safely. But then no one would have understood Talent's motive for doing what he did and he would have ended up going to prison. So maybe it's better this way. Maybe he will end up becoming someone else's guardian angel.
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“Hoover Dam’s coming up, Addie,” Talent says. “Last time I was here we had to cross over the top of the dam. Now we’ll be looking down on it from the Mike O’Callaghan-Pat Tillman Memorial Bridge as we cross the Colorado River. So I guess we won’t be stopping at the dam after all since you can see it even better from up here on the bridge. “My God, we’re so fucking high above the river,” Josiah gasps as they begin driving over the span’s concrete arch, well above the canyon below. “I look
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Yes, the wedding was a surprise to me too. But Andrew was desperate, and elated when Aubrey ended up in his car. I think that maybe Andrew’s meeting might involve arranging an elaborate honeymoon. But we’ll find out soon enough. Great penultimate chapter, MozLover. A long one too. Thank you.
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Thank you, Chris . I appreciate your comment.
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Talent signals and exits the freeway at Quartzite, Arizona, careful not to attract the attention of the local cops to the hearse and its conspicuous California plates since a multi-state all-points bulletin has probably been issued for it. They immediately head for a gas station, both to refuel and because it’s the most likely place to find a telephone directory. While Josiah refuels the hearse, Talent heads inside and asks to see a telephone directory. He immediately flips to undertakers becaus
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I read and followed this story on Nifty until it was completed a couple of years ago after a long span of five or so years. I liked it very much, which is why I rate it five stars. Since Roe has re-edited it for GA I will read it again. I highly recommend it.
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Thank you, Talo. That's what I'm hoping that readers see in this story, since it's much different than the three stories that I've put on the site before. I want readers to hopefully see my versatility.
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Thank you, Chris. Next one in a day or two.
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It’s a warm, sunny afternoon, not the bleak, rainy, cold afternoon that would typify a funeral. It’s southern California, after all. Talent Morrow sits behind the wheel of a hearse that he is employed to drive. “Hey, Josie,” he says into his new iPhone. “Whatcha doin’ right now?” “Nothing much. Remember, I’m off today,” Josiah Dixon replies. “I know, Josie. That’s why I’m calling.” “Where are you?” His boyfriend asks. “In a funeral procession, taking the body of this eccentric ol
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This story, a short three-part adventure, is different from my others, hopefully to demonstrate my versatility. Talent Morrow, a 28-year-old guy with a big heart, drives a hearse for a living. One day he absconds with the hearse and its deceased occupant and he, his boyfriend Josiah Dixon and said deceased occupant take off on a zany spree that takes them to Las Vegas.
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I’ll give it to you now since you’ve been so reliable. Pat, pat. Seriously, thanks for your hard work and reliability.
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Outstanding chapter, MozLover! We’ve reached the climax. Unlike Wesley, I am not patiently awaiting the next chapter, however. Thank you.
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Patiently? Not me.
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A cliffhanger. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Hurry, MozLover!
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Thanks, MozLover. You’ve been really consistent getting chapters out so the story stays fresh in the readers’ minds. I applaud you for that. I appreciate that you completed the story before posting it. Thus, any writer’s block that you might have suffered in writing it doesn’t become the readers’ problem.
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I don’t know what to say, except at this rate Andrew isn’t going to have much of a lifespan if he keeps this lifestyle up. For now maybe should just focus on his career and spend more time at Ways serving as a model and inspiration rather than proving that Aubrey was right all along. At least that way he stands a better chance of impressing Aubrey and getting him to come around. Right now Andrew appears to be dedicated to very little except himself. Why would Aubrey want him like this?
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Thanks for the comment, Goodie.
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Who is Kat’s brother?
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Wow! I didn’t see this coming. I agree that Aubrey should be open with Andrew rather than making assumptions. He considered giving Tom, who is a total heel, a chance to redeem himself but is denying Andrew that opportunity. Now who has become the heel? Aubrey should wake up and smell the roses and at least talk to Andrew. What I think they should do at the moment is combine their resources and determine who maryjane45789 is because that person is involved in this. I suspect that it is Tom, or Cat, or both of them. Another good chapter, MozLover.
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PART 2 - Chapter 6 - Success
Arran commented on unilive's story chapter in PART 2 - Chapter 6 - Success
I really didn’t care for the threesome. It spoils the magic between Mark and Rob. On another note, the band is riding the wave of success now. Hopefully it doesn’t go to their heads. -
Chapter 5 - Time to come out
Arran commented on unilive's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Time to come out
Good chapter, unilive. Things came together nicely for the last chapter of part one. You made the lyrics of some of Coldplay’s songs fit the story nicely. Hopefully they don’t have a problem with it. On to part two!
