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Chapter 122 The Anniversary
Arran commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 122 The Anniversary
You’re a great writer. I really like how you created Robbie. He’s a really lovable character. I think you’ve done a great job with all the characters. Jo is fantastic. I’m looking forward to Don’s reaction when Robbie tells hmi what she said about Mr, Symmonds. Off the subject, but will this story ever end? I’m not complaining; I just want to know. I think you’ve done a great job maintaining an interest and keeping your readers interested after 122 chapters. Hooray for you, Dodger! Thanks for the effort. -
Breakthrough, I assume, is penetrating the other camp, which I see that Ian has done. A number of things happened here, mainly Ian’s interest and skill in music, which desensitized Oliver. Also Oliver “admitted” that he isn’t gay, and then proceeded to give the indication that he really is gay—or at least not fully heterosexual. Oliver is a complex guy who I’m sure Ian will temper. Already he is allowed to call him Ollie, in private of course. No wonder Trevor is confused if he has the same intentions as Ian towards Oliver. Also, Ian’s interest in Gödel is out of character for him, making him rather complex too. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.
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I didn’t expect this to happen so early in the story, but I’m glad it did. Looking forward to the next chapter and maybe some resolution. I’m sure that Ian is buzzing like a live wire in anticipation of Sunday. And what’s with Oscar? Maybe he has an interest in Ian? Good chapter! Thanks.
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Good chapter. I’m wondering about Trevor. Is the guy Ian’s competition? Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for the effort.
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I’m interested and like what I’ve read so far. More, please. Any idea how many chapters? Thanks.
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Birthday Bash Part 1 - Forerunners of Fate
Arran commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Birthday Bash Part 1 - Forerunners of Fate
The best writing that I’ve seen in a long time. Introspective, well-planned and simply awesome. All the characters just fit so nicely into the plot. Thanks, Jason. -
Thanks a lot, K. I really appreciate it.
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So, what’s going on with this story? It’s been a while since the chapter 8 post. I’d really like to see more.
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Good story so far. I can’t wait for more—especially after you ended this chapter with a cliffhanger. Thanks.
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I love the story, Dodger. I love your writing style and the humor, especially Robbie's personal interjections. This chapter was most entertaining and had me laughing often. Also, I think that Robbie is in good hands with this family, despite his orientation. Please keep the chapters coming -sooner.
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Another thought-provoking chapter. Billy's father is a pretty wise man. And should Billy decide to reveal his secret to his father, I think that he'll be happy with the outcome. In fact, I think that his father may already suspect something between his son and Brett. Great chapter.
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My comment has more to do with th entire story - both books. I began reading it on Nifty before you began posting it on GA and have been keeping up with it there since you're farther ahead on Nifty. I want to say that it is a very touching story and accurately portrays the relationship of two boys as best friends. All the characters have been very well developed. I look forward to each chapter and have enjoyed each an every one. Thank you for such a wonderful srory.
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I agree with Skinnydragon, great story and fantastic writing. I would like to see chapters come more frequently, though. Maybe sophomore year, huh? Thanks.
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A Whore, a Liar, Vindictive, and Petty
Arran commented on Jwolf's story chapter in A Whore, a Liar, Vindictive, and Petty
An emotional chapter to great story (my favorite story). Thank you. Corbin is quite a piece of work, always scheming and not very reliable. Pete? I don't know. I think my heart goes out to Nick in this chapter. Good work! I can hardly wait for the next chapter. -
I just finished the first chapter. The writing is very good and what is to come looks promising. How many chapters do you have planned? Thank you for the effort.
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I like the entire story so far! Please continue, and keep up the good work. Thank you. Arran
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Hey, this story is shaping up to be a good one. I like the characters already. I like the way that you ended the second chapter. I'm looking forward to more so please don't keep us waiting too long. Any idea how many chapters you have planned? Thanks, Arran
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Twenty chapters in a year and a half and this story seems to be going in circles. It's too bad that people need to reread what they've already read because new chapters come so infrequently despite promises of being more punctual.
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Yes, please finish this story. It's been a real delight reading it up to the last chapter (as have been all of your stories). I love the characters and how Nelson and Milo interact. The thing with the doll was particularly clever. Thanks for the effort so far.
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I really enjoy the story, but the chapters come out so infrequently that it's hard to follow without having to go back and reread the last chapter. Damond said that he would make more of an effort to complete it beginning in March and I really hope that he does. Thanks for the effort so far.
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Valentine's Day Is Coming...... >:)
Arran replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
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I don't plan to read anything new here because it's just another story that will be left undone. Between The Lines was a good read up until when it was abandoned with supposedly one chapter left to go. Same with On The Outside. I prefer to read something with a conclusion, which I don't get here.
