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Thank you, KatyDeeMac. I’m happy to hear that.
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Thank you for your comment, Talo. I think it may a bit much now that I look back on it.
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Chapter 131 Christmas with Conner
Arran commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 131 Christmas with Conner
Nice chapter, Dodger. Hopefully things go well for both boys and Robbie faces the family with a big smile in the morning. -
Thanks, KayDeeMac. I’m glad you like it.
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Thanks, Marty, droughtquake, Dodger and KayDeeMac for your comments. You’re great!
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Thank you for your kind comment, KayDeeMac.
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While I didn’t read the prologue that you included because it had been removed, I don’t understand why the prologue would be considered a distraction. I consider it an explanation for how the story came about, which I found interesting, and thus something that would interest the reader. Each reader can choose to read it or not. Remember, it is a preface or prologue and not an actual part of the story. But Camp Echo is your creation and you have to decide whether it belongs or not. I just thought that it would help to attract more readers.
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Tao, I think you just go in, delete the preface/prologue and then re-enter what you want.
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And thank you too, KayDeeMac.
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Thank you for the comment, KayDeeMac. He’ll have to learn it.
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Thanks for the comment, Nana Atuwa. I have to think about that. But biologically I think that’s what happens, as unattractive as it sounds. But maybe I could describe it differently, though.
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You’re right, Talo. This has been pointed out to me before. Now that it’s been done twice, I need to give it credence. Thank you for the comment.
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It’s interesting that you homed in on this, Talo. It didn’t occur to me. Thank you for the comment.
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I’d like to think that Callan’s intentions are more noble than that, Talo, but if I’m objective, you’re right. It’s clear that he’d like to corral Chris. Thank you for your comment.
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This was not meant to be a comment. My mistake.
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Thanks for your comment, Daddydavek. I like your avatar. Tis the season…
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Chapter 44 Date Night Part 1
Arran commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 44 Date Night Part 1
Dodger, it might be a good idea to identify where the changes are made since you’re going wayyyyy back in time here. -
Just not a $4,000 one, unless you can make it sing, too.
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Thanks, Dodger. I don’t have the character development skills that you have. Mine don’t have the personality traits that you’ve given Robbie or many of your other characters.
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Thank you very much, mikedup. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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A profuse thank you, Chris. I’m glad that you enjoyed it.
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Hopefully she does it because it should not be up to Jake to resolve. Once the evidence is gone the window closes and Alex is scot free to do it again because he can get away with it.
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That’s horrible! I shudder at the thought.
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Thank you for your comment JCtoGO2. I’m glad that you liked it. You expressed it so very well. Happy holidays to you too.
