*Hugs*
Good job Viv, just keep doing your motherly job and sooner or later she''ll get it.
Cookies and cake. *drool* Now i have to go find somethnig to eat, heh sounds like good stuff though.
Your kids should be lucky they have such great parent's, even if they don't realize it just yet. <3
Take care Viv and Happy New Year's to you and your family.
-Mike
THE GOAT LIVES!!!
Darn and I was looking forward to the slow roating too =(
Graeme is right, I wonder how the show will go on with the wheelchair.
I like how we learned more about the shadows in this chapter as well. GJ CJ.
-Mike
It's one thing to kill of a char just for the sake of killing him off, but the way you did it wasn't one of those. Honestly with what Jake was doing, it was bound to happen sooner or later, to be honest. You know full well as do I, getting yourself into something like that is bad, but trying to get out? It's much worse. And very beleiveable.
Like I had already mentioed, this is VERY differen't CJ, but that is why I enjoyed it as much as I did, Bravo!
-Mike
Like Graeme had said already, this story is very differen't from how Cj usually writes. I really enjoyed the relationship that was forming between Jake and Corey. We knew right from the start that Jake had feelings for Corey, the way he changed even if just a lil none the less he changed for him as did Corey. The way Corey followed around Jake and mimcked showed me that Corey really wanted to be just like him, maybe becuase he secretly liked him alot?
The ending really got me Cj, it wasn't something I expected to happened.
Great story, a wonderful read, something new with a little twist, loved it.
Jake is a great char!
-Mike
Your explanations mean poop to me <3
All i have to say is you have chapter 20 to redeem yourself goat, or else I can't be responsible when all hell breaks lose!