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..............................What great advertising the Royals could give the charter! Great chapter!
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.....................Nah, but I had no idea on Drew!
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............................. Ah, royalty can be such a blast and a pain! We will see how this charter works out, especially with kids on board. Nice to see another nice chapter!
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...........................Nice start to a story, I wonder if this story is going to be more about the foundation or on the newly found brother?
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Though I do have one question though...did no one speculate on the identity of the baby? I know I was subtle, but . . . *sigh* .................You mean the reincarnation of Orpheus?
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..................Right, so that means Ethan is still alive: Or did just crossing over makes you dead?
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..................Haven't seen any since in a long time....that ugly 3rd grader?
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.............................I wonder what Carlton's misgivings are with bunking with Amanda? The property looked to be more then adequate for what they have planned. Great chapter!
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.....................Glad to see this story continued, well the biggest worry is gone with the pressure of the 'game' being over. And with Ryder and Tyler finally take that other step, which was very nicely written. A lot into this chapter with Ryder getting ready to leave for college, Wilder opening up a bit more, Jaxson come out and adds a BF. If that's not enough we learn that Jeremy is going to be a daddy. I'm afraid paper walls is going to need a part 2. Great chapter!
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............................Nah, we would run out of writers!
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.................I got the epilogue, I should have said could and should and not 'can'. I didn't quite get the the human warlock, dead, then alive, then dead again spiel. I mean did Caleb kill Ethan?
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........................... Nice chapter, things are looking good. I hope business will continue for them in the charter business. Although I wonder if their location is best for business.
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.....................The whole point of the story was getting the reunification of Caleb to Ethan, and that was accomplished. I do think Ethan can contact Liz and Jake to let them know of the success. Great story!
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..................... Liam has his problems as he is smitten with Caleb, Vlad and Tristan. (I could hardly handle one crush, three at a time sounds challenging and no sleep). Whats with the creepy guy stalking the house? Good chapter!
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..................Glad to see another chapter, GSA meeting should be interesting (but they have to get Benji in there ) Glad Wesley is coming back, maybe we will get his pov on what happened, Thanks for another chapter!
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............................I knew that canteen would come in handy!! Well the good thing is that Orpheus is no longer ruling, the interesting thing is Caleb's predicament of not being able to leave hell. So the solution is to invite Ethan back in? Great chapter!
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.................. Very surprised at the short chapter, however you set the stage for the finale. Looking forward to the conclusion.
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.............................Well if Paladin's guess's are wrong, let me try with bad guys trying to hold Kes for ransom.
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.............. ..Yet the only thing that bothers me with this scenario if true, why didn't Kyle just sell off and retire to the city? Why the need to involve Bryce in an elaborate plan to fraud him, ply him with new found knowledge of his son and entice Miranda to provide the rings and proposal of marriage. None of that would be necessary if Kyle could have sold his holdings and retired. My guess is that Miranda might have spent a lot of the family money splurging on extravaganza that prevented an early sale. And thus the plot was contrived.
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................ If Miranda hasn't gotten wind of the taped conversations, maybe she will screw up the court ordered stipulation of visitation. If doing so, Bryce will prevail in the custody of his son. That leaves Kyle with a bigger problem, he needs to retire and find a buyer for his properties, I'd guess with Miranda losing custody, she might find herself without a home. Real question is will Bryce offer to help by buying those stations owned by Kyle? Great chapter! (BTW, at this rate, Bryce is going to need to purchase a plane, (again, Kyle?)
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...................At least everyone here saw this coming, conniving trap using Byrce's son as bait is a bit cruel to both Bryce and Kes. I see a change of parenthood coming up real soon.
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.........................Shotgun wedding indeed, and yes Bryce is being manipulated very well. If I didn't know any better I'd say Bryce was drugged, and certainly kept tired and busy. Worse yet? If Bryce 'suffers' a deadly mishap, his fortune only helps.........whom?
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......................Interesting theory, although I can't understand how she would readily ........
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..............Nah, I'm thinking steak knives might be too kind for ya! So if Bryce plays his cards right, he will be heir to a cattle fortune as large as his own. I'll set aside any predictions until a few more have a go at you! Interesting chapter!
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.....................The moment they receive a wedding invitation for sure!! Hope they invite all of their parents friends too!
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