Fishwings

I can't recall hearing a 8.9 before. First New Zealand, now this. Aren't we on a roll this year... My condolences to the ones affected in Japan. Perhaps there is hope that some of the ones missing will be recovered as survivors.

Why hello again handsome : ). You're so silver. I have not seen you around for some time

"FRENCH LIBRARY/book?" Mon francais est tres sucks. You look tres pretty.

ROFL I temporarily forgot that you wrote this story, but I'm glad I found it again. Terrific read, once again. "Mount me." Yes please.

Did you just say jizzzz?

CONGRATS everyone : D!!

The musical composition of the song matters the most, if that's what you meant by "who the singer is". Good lyrics for me are an added bonus, but no matter how well the lyrics are written, it wouldn't make me like a song that I didn't care for in the first place.

Why am I reading something that's almost making me cry when I'm groggy and just got out of bed : (((. It happens every chapter (chapter 3 and onwards) LOL. I'm pretty sure I'd have been reduced to a sobbing wreck if I had read the story in one go. Anyways, the shift to Ronny's point of view was surprisingly effective, and a risky but good choice. This Epilogue was super bold as Ronny expressed his sorrow and how badly he wished he could take back all the things that had gone wrong, and how much he had wished things would have just gone back to the way that it was and how he missed his brother's presence. His despair at the "silence" of the palace is heartfelt, as are his actions to legalize same sex relationships/marriage in memory and understanding of his brother's love towards Tyler. The novel that Ronny wrote, too, although I thought was a little cliched at first, is actually totally fitting for Ronny's intentions. Despite the short length, the Epilogue was satisfying and beautiful, as is every other chapter you've wrote and the story as a whole. I'm so glad I continued to read/finish this story! Amazing job on a tale of disastrous brotherly love, Circle. You still need to be spanked. Better write more soon! Fishie

Nice picture! Heh heh heerghhhhurhurhuerghhhhsnort. And that would be my gettingmymoleston laugh

Miss Lights you were on today so we all know you're still alive : )

You guys are so patient

HAPPY BARFDAY! Have a wonderful day : )

So electric, electric. Definitely bluer than my very-blue-undies.

Hello, cutie. Your eyes are as blue as my very-blue-underpants, and I think I've found meself a new victi---whaaaat?

I thought that was a huge hunk of chocolate with caramel pieces submerged, hehe. It's beautiful.

Yessssss Bieberburger, pedobait time. Lol, this behaviour isn't surprisingly whatsoever, considering he did explode into fame when he was like 14 or whatever. What a spoiled tool. Honestly, I hate it when celebrities act all diva ish. I mean, you're an idol, and as talented as you are, you should be grateful and courteous that you're famous. So many people look up to you. Be mature at least in public, or all you'll be doing is making a fool out of yourself.

HAHA you're such a goof. But you're really hot. And I agree, SOUPerbly hot.

Spank-fest? LOLOL never heard that term before

This is a tricky one, as the more stories I read, the more sex scenes I seem to skip. I think setting up the mood right is very important, or you'll reader will think it's awkward: eg, sudden, hot passionate sex. And of course, there are other stories in which the sexual tension is just so unbearable and you're just so hot and bothered and they kiss and they fall on the bed and then...... wtf, no scene (Cough cough, ITFB Dennis + Travis). Being a total cocktease is no good either.

I'm sure you'll get more readers soon. No the first letter sucked 'cause Ronny wrote it. Nah it was good, but the second one really packed a punch : (. And okay I guess if you want to keep the smiley that is totally up to you : ). I don't strongly object, but I did raise an eyebrow at it. And as to that sentence, "He had had enough" sounds more right to me actually, instead of "he has had". And YOU BETTER FEEL GUILTY LOL. I'ma whip you. When can we expect the next chapter? Next Sat?

Also, WHY THE HELL IS NO ONE ELSE READING THIS STORY/LEAVING FEEDBACK LOL. This is quality stuff, don't be stupid and start reading guyyyyyyyysssssssssssssssssssss!!! Or lazy, if you're actually reading and not participating.

It seemed to me like a likely possibility awhile ago.

No it's not far fetched. It was everyone's fault. f**k. I was hoping it wouldn't happen but... I saw this as a likely possibility awhile ago but put it in the back of my head. It was only logical, of course, given the King's anger. Execution really shouldn't have been the biggest surprise. And when Ronny avoided addressing Tyler and Reldo said "Oh well nothing changed lah", I knew it was a lost cause. Well shit. "It was not revenge that he chose, in the end. He knew that no amount of killing, or torturing of priests, would bring his lover back or undo the past. He knew that, if he struck now, he would be struck in return. Revenge was not the way forward. The cycle must be broken, and someone had to give. He looked around him, the village, the prison, Reldo, and the wilderness in the north. What a horrible world." I love this paragraph, especially the last two sentences. They pack such a punch. "Edward shook his head and stared at Reldo angrily. ‘I hope you’re proud of yourself, proud of when you could have done something, did nothing.’ It was not clear who Edward was addressing to. It could have been Reldo, Ronny, the society, the world, or indeed, God" And this too. These words encompass all his hatred and the lost of hope for all that he had believed in, and all that he had grown to hate, and how that all had broken his soul. I feel so bad for Edward, and it's funnily tragic how Tyler had died so, so long ago and it took Edward so long to find out. The thought of him holding onto someone who he thought was alive, but was truly long gone, is ridiculously heartbreaking to me. I wonder what became of Edward after, though honestly I really don't know since you have a whole new chapter still to post. The only thing I can think of is that either he became friends with the bears and deer and became wolfman, or he drowned himself. Or threw himself off a cliff. Or ungh. I like how your chapters are relatively unpredictable. It keeps me on my toes. Besides those two quotes, the other majorly well written passage was of course, the letter. All I can say is that was really moving. I hope you cried when you were writing that, LOL. Just fyi, I didn't like I always don't, but I had to take a break because my eyes were burning. Thanks, Circle. You're a sadist, and I love it. Anyways, surprisingly amazing, complete job on a rather short chapter. Don't keep us waiting. Fishie

Hey there's a tense error you might wanna catch: "He’s had" Last sentence, six paragraphs up from the bottom. And btw, the smiley is kinda weird, I'd just omit it if I were you : D Makes me think of an email, LOL.

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