Fishwings

I would turn all my enemies into baby seals and make it rain skittles all across the world : 0 Also, fish would all have wings.

Expectation and disappointment come hand in hand.

Hey pretty lady : )

Good game guys. Unfortunately, there are a lot of sore losers in Vancouver though, it's a riot : X

Lmao, I detest dubs too. Half of them make the characters sound retarded. Seriously retarded.

INUYASHA! I think he's fineee. I watched about half of that on TV, and then I got bored. Unfortunately I do not watch/read/follow/care about anything else. Unless Digimon counts. And Yugioh. And Pokeurmom.

You were drunk... on a ferris wheel?!?!!! That is terrifying, you're insane.

Haha, it is entertaining, but I liked it better when there was none of that back in the Olympics.

Very Dead Space, once again. Let me suit you up Isaac Clarke. It's time to rape some necromorph butt (not literally)

It's not... thaaaat short! But I approve : 0

.... NOOO D:: I didn't get to see it.

Well that is one sexy list. Minus all the Basshunter and all the Showtek, of course : D. Ding!

To be honest... nope.

I think it is too.

Serious? Guess Tet and I aren't so original after all

ARGHHHhhh I hate you haahaha. I realized the wedding version sounds pretty much exactly the same. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aEuF5qiq57Q

UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I've never WTFed so much reading a chapter, haahaha! Okay gotta say the whole butt grabbing game was way weird, but it amused me to no end. And Baker has got amazing creeping skills. Besides the ridonkulous but great dialogue, I'm a little surprised but pleased at the level of depth you are taking your story, as it seemed to me that the traditional high school cliques, specifically the "jocks", are being dismantled and further developed. Everything felt a little more three dimensional after Baker realized that he had "lumped them all together" as bullies and disregarded them, and after Aaron and Dane acknowledged the difficulties present in their circle of friends and how they all shared different views on everything. Isaac sounds like fun, seriously. Btw, you might wanna look into a beta reader/editor/whatever, I spotted several spelling errors here and there, but nothing too major. Anyways, good chapter, looking forward to more.

Lol the moonrocket song is so cool, reminds me of daft punk

Whoa. Funny thing is, I remember reading this story some time ago but didn't know you wrote it. This is a poignant piece that really cuts to the point, and the twist was excellent. Honestly don't know why this chapter is rated so low though...

She was on Good Morning America and spoke out about all the hate mail she had received, and even sang a bit of the National Anthem. She's not all that bad! And I almost feel guilty for spending a whole week singing "Friday" mockingly in public areas. Almost.

Good chapter! I kinda agree with Ramon -- this chapter feels different, as was your description. Still enjoyed it a lot nonetheless. Max's boldness in kissing a girl made me laugh.

You're right. What should I do? It's such a dilemma. Maybe I should just jump in the trunk

Today is Thursday. Tomorrow is Friday. And Saturday comes afterward. And then Sunday comes after that. Gotta get down.

Agreed. They were hot when Nexopia was still hot. Which was a long time ago. I think most boys look better without eyeliner haha, but on occasion...

Actually read this yesterday but didn't have a chance to drop a line. This story is great! Your writing is superbly detailed, everything from the history of the park, to what it looks like (I douno about the picture though), and even the super accurate marijuana lingo haha! "Our dignity was no longer for sale." Btw, great line.