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  1. Dude I love this song! Never heard an acoustic version of it before, but I like the orig better. Orig: And clearly the Acoustic is hotter:
  2. Nah... it's his fault.
  3. " I don't have to like this reality but I do understand it So when "us" ended I forced myself to move on I'll admit there are times I wonder how you are fairing There are times when I yearn to see your child There are times when I feel like I lost my right arm And there are times when the loss of you is overwhelming" Touching verse. Funny how when we're children, we can't wait to grow up, but when we do we wish we could turn back the clock...
  4. So I came across this while studying today (I douno how I missed it, but it's bloody amazing) and it made me realize how much I love acoustic covers/versions of songs. They bring a whole new dimension to an already sweet track. Do you guys usually prefer acoustic versions to original tracks? Personally, I like them after I get tired of the original, but there are instances in which the softer sound is just that much better. Anyways, post your favourites hehe. <---- I don't even like Katy Perry much, but I've heard like four different versions of Teenage Dream and I love all of them. Jizz. And here's another I found sometime earlier: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1LOMtHSOe1k <--- Oh yes.
  5. Waitwiawiaiwiaiwaaiiitttt wait up. He's auctioning off his hair? As in like, the hair that falls off after a stylist cuts his hair with salon scissors, and then sweeps up, and then dumps it in a can? Like, seriously? Well I'm in need of an early birthday present so.... No just kidding. This sounds retarded, but if it earns a lot of money for charity, whatever.
  6. Fishwings

    Chapter 1

    Haha, thank you Circle! And yeah, I'm really not so good with semi-colons. I just throw them in when I'm indecisive on a period or a comma, LOL, guess I need some more practice/education.
  7. Fishwings

    Reviews

    Title: Eight Reviewer: taina1959 Definitely I am liking this story very much. It keeps me on edge which is good. Then again, I've always known you are a good writer with an excellent imagination! Author's Response: Thanks for the continuous support. It means a lot! Date: 08/23/2009 09:39 PM Title: Eight Reviewer: Nephylim The writing continues to be exciting and flowing. I still like the character of Rover and I am also intrigues with Slade. What on earth has happen
  8. Fishwings

    Chapter 6

    If I look at this real hard, I'd have to say that it isn't totally fair to blame it all on Ronnie. He was just a kid. A spoiled kid and ignorant -- but not evil. When extreme consequences result from immaturity however, thinking along these lines becomes far, far more difficult, but the fact remains: he was just a kid, and unaware of the shit he had stirred up. That was to answer your question. If I was Edward I'd still have been mighty pissed, LOL. Anyways. The way I see it, there's no point in reading stuff if it doesn't move me to the bone, and your story has been heart-wrenchingly poignant and totally worth my one hour of procrastination. Edward is righteous and brave, Ronny is irritating but totally relatable, their sibling relationship is completely convincing, and the philosophies you've written in your chapters have really made me stop and think, most notably the passage about Religion. It pains me to see Edward's life torn asunder by a simple snitch, and it awes me to how enduring his resolve is, and how much hatred he had retained and grown in the years spent in prison. I'm super interested to see where this will go because there are so many things left unanswered. What happened to Tyler? What is the Queen thinking about? Has the King changed his opinion at all? And how the hell is Edward going to get himself out? And what would be his next move, if he did? Amazing work mang. Can't wait for more! PS: Tips on increasing readership: read and review other people's stuff lots, and start up a discussion thread for your story and update it whenever you post a new chapter!
  9. Fishwings

    Chapter 3

    ..... Oh shit. I'll leave a more coherent response later but the next chapter is calling for me and All I feel like doing is cussing more so...... Lalalaomfg brb.
  10. Fishwings

    Chapter 1

    That was a touching beginning, although its slow pace might deter some readers. I can't quote things on my itouch atm, but I gotta say that your prose is awesome and beautiful to read, adding flare to just the right places (such as describing Ronny's lack of desire to get out of bed) without unnecessarily weighing down things like emotions. As to the fact that some people love to steer conversations to themselves, even in the most inappropriate of times... I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN LOL. Anyways, love it so far, back to reading.
  11. HAHAH. Always loved this song.
  12. I douno either, 'cause they're really not my usual genre of music. Although I have to say I'm not the biggest fan of their newest stuff. Have you heard the stuff before Lifehouse came to be... whatweretheycalled, Blyss? Like "You Can Shake The Mountains"?
  13. Love those tracks. Haha dude I forgot about "Somewhere In Between", heard of it? Prob my fave track from them besides You and Me.
  14. Haha dude love this track. They have a another version that less pop-rockish and more acoustic that I like more.
  15. Yehhh! Got a fave track from them?
  16. Me too!!! Yussss. I'm going to get married to their You and Me track, it's just so beautiful. If I ever get married of course. Heard their new tracks?
  17. Fishwings

    Epilogue

    Whooaaa! This shiny new site is spiffy alright. Douno if you'll read this review but I'll just write it anyways. I've always loved your stories -- they bring back so many memories of 14 year old me, sneaking up at 4 am on a school night reading up on The Log Way, or The Ordinary Us. It was through you that I, and I'm sure many others, decided to join GA. Every chapter you write of each of your stories is entertaining, moving, and inspirational -- not only to fellow writers but to everyone else. You enrich our lives with your philosophies on sexuality, relationships, courage, and you enrich our imaginations with your amazing characters and their awkward and beautiful relationships with each other (Cough, Dennis and Travis). That was really cheesy. Anyways. I loved The Other Side of me a lot because it was so radically different from the rest of your Soap-Opera-ish stories (not that they aren't good, they are). The plot was really strong and intricately woven, and you kept us wondering whether Oliver or David were the same person for the LONGEST TIME LOL. Oliver's flaws and his past (how he acquired his incapabilities) is touching, Frank is noble and likeable, David is weird, and their insane (INSSSAAANNNEEEomfg) parents incite loathing and disgust within me (especially the mother). It was gritty and dark and evil and sweet and amazing. But the unique ending made me wanna slap you. I hope you never stop writing. Sincerely, Your loyal fan since 2006 or something ancient like that.
  18. Fishwings

    Chapter 1

    So this story has been displaced like three times, LOL, but I just read it again (I know, AGAIN, and I have to leave you a comment or whatever whenever I do) today and my tear ducts were threatening to explode with nonexistent tears (also again). Gritty, compelling, and beautiful.
  19. Fishwings

    Chapter 1

    You certainly know how to start off a story! The beginning was great -- it hooked me right in. I feel for Nate's situation, and how hard it must be to move away from a place that he loved so much, although I felt that some of the emotions were a bit overdone. Good job, ima continue readdinnggg
  20. Took me the longest time to realize that there was actually something wrong with those sentences...
  21. I mainly like housey music, but Lifehouse is a winner for me. I had no idea clicking "Tab" would submit my comment >:C 1) Lifehouse - You and Me - Take Me Away - You Can Shake The Mountains - From Where You Are - Blind - ALL THEIR TRACKS 2) Kaskade - This is how it goes - In My Arms (remixed by him) - Beestung (uhhh I douno if it's by him actually, was in his compilation album) - 4 am (Adam K Soha Remix) - Move For Me 3) Tiesto - Here On Earth - In The Dark - Do You Feel Me - Power Of You - I Will Be Here - etc.etc. 4) Adam K and Soha - 4 am remixxx!! - Wake up
  22. HAahahaha! I hate autocorrect with passion, especially when it corrects the last word of something you are going to post/send/submit. I have an iTouch, and It's changed my "Jeez" into "Jews" and my "give"'s into "HIV" too many times to be funny. And "bussing" apparently isn't a word and needs to be changed to "hissing" and "cussing". Go figure. And btw, we're not alone, check out this site : D. Poor iPhone users... http://damnyouautocorrect.com/category/best-of-dyac/
  23. Forget a single date, I want a monogamous three-way relationship with: 1] Travis (those "slim eyes" and that "broad smile") 2] Dennis (that untanned ass) 3] Dane from Dandevdrew's The Arrangement. Travis and Dennis because they're so adorkable together and I wanna bask in their intense earth shattering love, and Dane because I want to eat his thong. His various assortment of thongs. Actually I don't really wanna touch his butt floss, but I think you get my point.
  24. Is that a sword in your pock -- Boy you're happy to see me : 0
  25. White horse? Unlimited downloads? HOKAY.... This seems fun, here's my list: Cute Smile Nice Money Laugh Daring Click Jizz Manboobs (but not moobs, like pectoral manboobs) Boobs (like female boobs) Yeah okay so manboobs isn't actually a word. Whatever. Here I'll add a bonus: Bieber.
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