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Uh his new haircut makes him a little bit....... hot. *Gets shot*. This is so wrong.

Dude I love this song! Never heard an acoustic version of it before, but I like the orig better. Orig: And clearly the Acoustic is hotter:

Nah... it's his fault.

" I don't have to like this reality but I do understand it So when "us" ended I forced myself to move on I'll admit there are times I wonder how you are fairing There are times when I yearn to see your child There are times when I feel like I lost my right arm And there are times when the loss of you is overwhelming" Touching verse. Funny how when we're children, we can't wait to grow up, but when we do we wish we could turn back the clock...

So I came across this while studying today (I douno how I missed it, but it's bloody amazing) and it made me realize how much I love acoustic covers/versions of songs. They bring a whole new dimension to an already sweet track. Do you guys usually prefer acoustic versions to original tracks? Personally, I like them after I get tired of the original, but there are instances in which the softer sound is just that much better. Anyways, post your favourites hehe. <---- I don't even like Katy Perry much, but I've heard like four different versions of Teenage Dream and I love all of them. Jizz. And here's another I found sometime earlier: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1LOMtHSOe1k <--- Oh yes.

Waitwiawiaiwiaiwaaiiitttt wait up. He's auctioning off his hair? As in like, the hair that falls off after a stylist cuts his hair with salon scissors, and then sweeps up, and then dumps it in a can? Like, seriously? Well I'm in need of an early birthday present so.... No just kidding. This sounds retarded, but if it earns a lot of money for charity, whatever.

LOL awww no, not yet. This thread was just temporarily resurrected from the dead, but I'll get to the sequel soon. Gotta work on my other story first though, but before that, I have to get indecently touched by school.

Dude I totally agree with Tet haha! Sometimes I feel awkward reading super graphic sex scenes, and sometimes it feels a bit too censored and lacking when authors just skip right past them. But this was really tastefully done. Emotional and sexy. Mm. Cold and slimy fingers.

Heyy Nephy, of course I kept the reviews haha!! I made sure to save them before they were purged forever, and I uploaded them into a separate chapter. Thought it'd work better than to slap them in the discussion board (btw formatting took FOREVER). Anyways, yes, I know you like Slade. Didn't he remind you of a green eyed Angel? Thanks again for all the support Nephy, it means a lot to me. Hello! First of all, nice bear, second of all, hi, and third of all, was it that How To Be A Successful Evil Dude thread that we "met" haha? I thought the story worked without an Epilogue but I guess there were some things that needed major clarification (the point you brought up is pretty major!). Rover isn't supppooosssed to be suffering from like post-traumatic insanity or whatever, as when I said he wanted to "fix" things, it was for him to end the disaster properly and to tie up any loose ends (like, making sure his father stays put and away from him). As to the whole blaming himself thing, I meant it as in, things just kept getting worse because Rover never stood up for himself or ran for help. He just kept taking it and taking it, when he should have said "enough!" to his father a long time ago. HE'S NOT GOING TO RUN BACK TO HIS FATHER AND GIVE HIM A KISS LOL. Oh dear. Did I make it sound like he was going to? WELL. It is open for interpretation since I didn't write what happens after LOLOL so maybe they will continue their lovely master-bitchboy relationship. Thanks for reading and for sharing your thoughts : D! They're super helpful.

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Hi Ricky_writer. IS THIS YOUR FIRST POST LOL? Welcome, and I'm honoured, haha. I guess you're right about my story also being able to be straight themed too, since it was basically a tale of friendship (but Rover is really flamingly gay so...). Glad you enjoyed the ending scenes -- they were my motivation to complete the rest of the story (I didn't write it in chronological order). Thanks for reading and taking the time to let me know what you think : )!

Haha! I see you're loyal with the updates To all who haven't yet read the rest of the chapters (to date), I STRONGLY suggest that y'all do!! This is one of the most poignant, not to mention well written stories I've read in awhile. It isn't everyday that something moves me so deeply and makes me think so much. So read it guys. Don't doubt me. Oh btw Circle, when can we expect another chapter : )? Actually just tell me it's two weeks later so I won't be torn away from my studies. Heh.

OMG GET TO WORK

Haha, thank you Circle! And yeah, I'm really not so good with semi-colons. I just throw them in when I'm indecisive on a period or a comma, LOL, guess I need some more practice/education.

Title: Eight Reviewer: taina1959 Definitely I am liking this story very much. It keeps me on edge which is good. Then again, I've always known you are a good writer with an excellent imagination! Author's Response: Thanks for the continuous support. It means a lot! Date: 08/23/2009 09:39 PM Title: Eight Reviewer: Nephylim The writing continues to be exciting and flowing. I still like the character of Rover and I am also intrigues with Slade. What on earth has happen

If I look at this real hard, I'd have to say that it isn't totally fair to blame it all on Ronnie. He was just a kid. A spoiled kid and ignorant -- but not evil. When extreme consequences result from immaturity however, thinking along these lines becomes far, far more difficult, but the fact remains: he was just a kid, and unaware of the shit he had stirred up. That was to answer your question. If I was Edward I'd still have been mighty pissed, LOL. Anyways. The way I see it, there's no point in reading stuff if it doesn't move me to the bone, and your story has been heart-wrenchingly poignant and totally worth my one hour of procrastination. Edward is righteous and brave, Ronny is irritating but totally relatable, their sibling relationship is completely convincing, and the philosophies you've written in your chapters have really made me stop and think, most notably the passage about Religion. It pains me to see Edward's life torn asunder by a simple snitch, and it awes me to how enduring his resolve is, and how much hatred he had retained and grown in the years spent in prison. I'm super interested to see where this will go because there are so many things left unanswered. What happened to Tyler? What is the Queen thinking about? Has the King changed his opinion at all? And how the hell is Edward going to get himself out? And what would be his next move, if he did? Amazing work mang. Can't wait for more! PS: Tips on increasing readership: read and review other people's stuff lots, and start up a discussion thread for your story and update it whenever you post a new chapter!

12. One of my advisors will be an average five-year-old child. Any flaws in my plan that he is able to spot will be corrected before implementation. <--- LOL. Harsh.

..... Oh shit. I'll leave a more coherent response later but the next chapter is calling for me and All I feel like doing is cussing more so...... Lalalaomfg brb.

That was a touching beginning, although its slow pace might deter some readers. I can't quote things on my itouch atm, but I gotta say that your prose is awesome and beautiful to read, adding flare to just the right places (such as describing Ronny's lack of desire to get out of bed) without unnecessarily weighing down things like emotions. As to the fact that some people love to steer conversations to themselves, even in the most inappropriate of times... I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN LOL. Anyways, love it so far, back to reading.

HAHAH. Always loved this song.

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...Is this for real? @____@

I douno either, 'cause they're really not my usual genre of music. Although I have to say I'm not the biggest fan of their newest stuff. Have you heard the stuff before Lifehouse came to be... whatweretheycalled, Blyss? Like "You Can Shake The Mountains"?

Love those tracks. Haha dude I forgot about "Somewhere In Between", heard of it? Prob my fave track from them besides You and Me.

Haha dude love this track. They have a another version that less pop-rockish and more acoustic that I like more.