Thirdeye

I enjoyed the story and really liked the characters. I also didn't expect the story to have a happy ending at all. The one question I have is if Kiba was the prince and really powerful how come when he met the Old one in the bar he didn't recognize Kiba or his power.

Fantastic as always. You really have become one of my favorite authors on here

Here is why the title of this story is great. You read the first chapter and you think, duh the evil vampire is going to corrupt the stupid naive human boy, but now to me atleast it is pretty obvious that kiba may be the being corrupted and that Avy is neither stupid or innocent. I'd also like to know how Avy knows about or learned about vampires in the first place. At first I thought it was going to be that a vampire killed someone he knew or hurt him, but now I think maybe Avy is using Kiba in away to become a vampire so he can punish however hurt him

LOL I finished Closer to Myself in a day. I liked it a lot. Again liked the characters and how they felt real. I loved the fact that he wouldn't say I love you just to make things better, and that a week of vacation didn't necessary completely change his life. Yeah sometimes its hard to not be cliche when reviewing stories, I'm not exactly great at it. I just know what I like and I enjory you style of story telling

The debate isn't if woman deserve to be hit as much as guys do though. The problem is equality or not the average woman is a lot smaller then the average male. Woman shouldn't be hit for the same reason men should really punch younger teens, because it can actually hurt them and damage them.

I didn't say I hate the republicans. I said I hated Bush and what they did under his term. The democrats are not trying to correct the mistakes made under Bush. They are making all the same mistakes. The open government the promised isn't there, they are as secretive as ever. Bush pissed all over a the Constitution and continued to use disasters to expand the power of his office. Obama hasn't shrunk the office any and has also continued to expand it. Voting isn't the simple solution, as most of the candidates are the same. They use stupid social ideals such as abortion which really isn't going to even be won or loss at the federal level, but people will cast their vote simply over some of these issues and ignore everything else about a candidate

really there doesn't need to be sex, or a detailed scene to make a story. My bigger pet peeve is how fast to the I love you. I get annoyed when knowing each other for a day the characters profess their love for each other

I read both series and enjoyed them both. That being said HP is a lot better. Half Blood Prince is still one of my favorite books ever

It depends what she says, or how she says it. Also if the food is cold well than I can see there being a problem. joking aside a guy should never hit a woman. I believe woman are equals but really just physically most woman are not built the same way as a guy. The average guy is taller and weighs more then the average woman, that is just a fact. Really would it be ok for a 6 foot grown adult male to hit a 5'4(average height for a grown adult female in the States) 14-16 year old male?

Parties don't matter anymore. Both really do the same things and screw us equally. Almost all of the things I hated about Bush and the republicans is still going on under Obama and the democrats. All the the things that Fox news cry about now were the things they ignored under Bush, or told us was unamerican to criticize him for. It is ridiculous.

When I was ten I was pee wee herman, this was a year after he got busted in a porn theater.

Well in the mean time I have started reading Closer to myself and after the first chapter I am pretty hooked. So far I find you to be a wonderful storyteller, and you avoid a lot of the little things that turn me off to some stories(I get annoyed easily =p). You also do a very good job with character development. You do a great job in Corrupted of making Avy tough but at the same time broken and a teenager. And Kiba a heartless badass well with a heart. Its enjoyable

I just read all 6 chapters of this and it is an amazing story. It is unique and for a vampire story now a days that is very hard to do. I really enjoyed it and hope you come back to it soon

The Safety Dance

Another show thats been on TV Land a lot now is maybe the best 90's show of all, Roseanne. I forgot how well written and acted and ahead of its time it was.