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Dan South

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  1. I am so pleasantly surprised by Warren. Love a good redemption story! Let’s get to the cabin already 😉
  2. I will forever consider “sorting” differently. These guys, they’re love. Their love. They are love. And loved. @raven1 I’m right here! One day of holiday weekend left.
  3. You’re better than a hopeless romantic, dear Author. You’re a hopeful romantic. The love and affirmations float right off the page. *braces for more twists and turns*
  4. Another amazing plot twist! Warren of all people. Wow.
  5. Could not agree more. I can’t put it down and I’m getting side-eye from the man who’d prefer I mow the lawn 😂 I’m starting chapter 22.
  6. Chapter 22! Total binge. I’ll attempt to be more interactive instead of just racing to the next chapter. 😂
  7. About damn time! Tobyn is truly thick-headed…
  8. Three words: “But we’re men”. I’m more troubled by that reaction than any of the other drama at this point.
  9. Enjoyed the shift in POV!
  10. No wonder Kellar feels out of his element! From lone wolf to pack land. And Elinor certainly isn’t shy. Tilly’s appearance has Loretta Lynn running through my mind. “…you ain’t woman enough to take my man…” That may well be wishful thinking on my part. 99% sure you’re going to send me to the tissue box before I get to be happy. LMAO @Demiurge comment, “*resigns myself to binge reading the entire story*” because…same…
  11. Fantastic to get a glimpse into Kellar’s gift. Fingers crossed that Tobyn does experience some sort of gay panic. They’re both so young.
  12. Of all of the information and developments in this chapter I’m hung up on “sent out to find”.
  13. Mutual stalking. Following you!
  14. Dan South

    Chapter 5

    Someone less conflicted would answer the ‘want’ question differently. Maybe? Nah, nah. Eric? Stay on board. I want to buy Michael a beer. Glad he got out of Hickory for a hot minute
  15. We’re the first comments on PAGE 3 Comments friend. That’s so wonderful. I’m excited to have a reader, reading companion. We’re half a world apart, I’ll have to check the conversation. but I think we have to comment every chapter. Right? I'm worried about where he’s going to sleep tonight. Yes he sent Wayne, Warren, what was his name? He sent him for a pillow and blanket and now I’m worried about where he’s going to sleep tonight. There goes my weekend ❤️
  16. That was a fantastic scene with Warren! Kellar’s old life is left in the dust and Warren was left in a puddle. Godspeed Kellar!
  17. I’m having a harder time than Keller wrapping my head around all of this! I think ‘awestruck’ is accurate.
  18. Whoa! That’s quite the introduction. Another of your page turners. There goes my weekend, lol!
  19. Thailand and Tennessee. We’ll make quite the pair!
  20. Dan South

    Chapter 17

    There’s so much to learn about the death magician. Same is true of the Astoratian I suppose. His affection for Vanus seems to be growing but maybe that’s wishful thinking on my part. They are both so alone. The video was interesting, educational even. Felt a little like cheating? I’d rather read your words. I’m a bit anxious for the parallels to overlap, collide. How’s the story going? You still have my rapt attention…
  21. Dan South

    Chapter 3

    I cannot ignore the sass just six lines in that the fight was “…so last chapter.” I laughed out loud! A wink and a nod from the Author. Love it. Bryan is quite the dynamic young man, character. There’s a depth of self awareness demonstrated by his declaration that he might be pan. But he’s a kid. A suspended kid. I’m full of questions as these characters take their places and the story unfolds. I’ll do what I can … wait right here for more. Really engaging, really great John Henry.
  22. I’ll read Morningstar! Headstall your folks! How many chapters have you written for them s new story? They’re restless …
  23. So you’ll read along with me??
  24. So this could be the key? LOL. A delight to engage.
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