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    Dinner with Gideon

    Dan South commented on Aditus's story chapter in Dinner with Gideon

    As yet I see Kavan only as a “catty” burglar. No doubt he’ll grow into the mechanics of the job but when will he mature into his role? Following the others to the pit, uninvited, is certain to be his next error in judgment. CTI: 3
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    I feel like I’ve just visited a room full of bread crumbs. Or been shown a list of possible outcomes and adventures or potential adversaries. Kavan tipping his hand with that lingering gaze below the waist? CTI: 3
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    Awaken

    Dan South reviewed Demiurge's story in Fiction

    Suspend disbelief like I did. Sleep and wake with these characters and discover the difference Majik can make. It’s not an easy life. Epic read. Turn to page one. The last page isn’t written…
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    End

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in End

    Epic. Engaging, enchanting, enlightening, entertaining, enthralling, enraging, and ever so erotic. There’s more, right???
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    Luminescence

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Luminescence

    I had the exact same thought! It slices, it dices, it’s the Vegematic!
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    Assembly

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Assembly

    Delicious. Consensus building? Responsibility for fellow man and monster? How novel. Tell me more.
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    King

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in King

    Meep will be good for that wretch Anika.
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    Gone

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Gone

    Meep!!! Yay Loren! “My name is …”. I love that Dimian sign language is so similar to ASL. ❤️
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    Corruption

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Corruption

    G-zus
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    Soon

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Soon

    Darker? Alrighty then.
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    Snatch

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Snatch

    “Stoke” finally. There it is. I’ve been struggling with an image for Wren. Somewhere between deranged muppet and the abominable snowman from the Rudolph cartoons. And now we have Meep, so, deranged muppet it is. Meep signed “please”. How curious. My long-ago interpreter self wants to ask Meep many questions. Oh! And F*ck Anders.
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    Thin Lines

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Thin Lines

    Fix the connection with dicking was not on any of my bingo cards. Prolly I-69, missed it. Also completely confused about Loren. WTF?
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    Sever

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Sever

    “Muverfumker” pretty much sums it up. <sigh>
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    Drop

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Drop

    So there is no traitor, only the tainted and traced. My gut says we’ll see Amaris again at the very moment she’s needed. This certainly cannot be the last we see of Rah. No way.
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    It's a Girl

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in It's a Girl

    Cyka! Love it. Talon calls it like he sees it, every time. I'm thrilled and extremely apprehensive about the disclosure from Loren and Rah. That and this little tidbit that strikes me as foreshadowing: ”…It surprises me that you haven’t invited the Soul Eater to join us at this point.” Talon is royalty. Huh. Or is he just royally …
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    Bath

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Bath

    Fluffy is a nice respite, bruh. Intimacy ushering intensity out the door for a hot minute? Very welcome. I’m inclined to agree with Talon about Rah’s attack on them. She wanted them to be found out and didn’t expect their odd allegiance to form. She and Loren would have eased on down the road and she, wrongly, thought our merry misfits would have been slaughtered. Or not.
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    Attack

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Attack

    OMG I was going to say all I see going on is a pissing match and then I read Philippe’s comment! Is Rah actually Lyrah? Holy 💩
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    Competition

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Competition

    Interesting way to say ‘hello’. Is Rah blind or does she also incinerate people too? Is this, Loren, the love interest for Amaris? She gonna go poly? Go girl!
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    Skin and Angst

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Skin and Angst

    Reading the chapter warning I didn’t expect it to be Amaris. My heart hurts for her. Love all the character development, insight really. Eon is a freak and I’m so, so here for it. Subtitle suggestion: How Hanja Got His Groove Back
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    Soul Eater

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Soul Eater

    OMG you addressed the window glass!!! It’s the level of detail you write that absolutely intoxicates me. The rest was good too. 😆
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    Dream

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Dream

    “…too soft…too tasty.” Um, eww. The non-possessed Hanja would do well to remember his life was saved as well. Where the hell are they gonna get replacement glass for that window?
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    Blood Runes

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Blood Runes

    “…We’re all human, well not Wren, …” LMAO! This needed a dash of humor, well placed.
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    Emotion

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Emotion

    “…but anger’s root is almost always fear.” Preach Hanja! Truth!! I should have commented in the previous book about how much I’m loving the shifting POV. Was that a blood sacrifice for the Majik eater? Obviously things are gonna get worse before they get better, because, Demiurge. At least the hot sex continues with surprising frequency.
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    Well, now I have a purpose, a reason to read on! I’m performing a service!! Happy to help, lol
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    A New Nightmare

    Dan South commented on Demiurge's story chapter in A New Nightmare

    Wren has sensed Kalian’s dark visitor(s)? This tender Talon is quite interesting.
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