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FINALLY! Another good story to read. I feels like an oasis in the desert... lol My only complaint so far is that I found it with only 4 chapters instead of being complete! Now it's back to the waiting game for a new chapter... The thing I like most about this story is that the characters don't feel like a stereotype. No one is overly butch/fem or overly sexual or extremely wealthy... sure all the characters sound way better than average looking, but at least it's a part of the story where they actually workout every day, so they weren't born out of an A&F catalog... keep it up!

Mooooommmm... Dad's having sex with the dog againnn! Seriously disturbed. I wonder if the mom knows? I think it would be a long time before I could even speak/ look at my dad if I were Oli. I mean it originally sounded like his dad got the dog to replace Oli and he raised her from a puppy right? So wouldn't that also be incest?! I do like Boris though. I hope they are able to be together as humans, but I couldn't handle anymore bestiality.. lol

Honestly, I really don't care for the past few chapters. I really liked the beginning of the story with the werewolf, but now everything seems completely different from where you started. It was sweet, with some twists to make things complex. Maybe it's just personal taste, but the slutty stuff is making me hate the characters... a lot. I'll keep reading because I want to find out what happens to the wolf character, but now that I think about it, I hope the wolf guy stays away because he deserves better. It sucks I guess, because I really like your writing style, but I just don't care for the content lately. Different strokes for different folks? Good luck with the story.

Yay! It's back!

Please tell me you decided to finish the remaining 8 chapters and post it all at once for a big surprise finish? haha Miss reading a good story!

Oh how I miss Pullman.. I'm going to be doing this a lot while reading your story haha

Hey I went to school in the Palouse! Go Cougs! I'm interested in seeing what's in store...

Where's the update?! haha

Wow, this story is old haha.. I really loved this one though as it seems very realistic.. I had a Sam Lynch of my own, though we weren't quite as close as these two... still, the chemistry was the same : \

I really like Mark... probably because I picture him as Zach Roerig haha I'm glad you're picking this up more.. I hope to see more chapters soon!

Love the way you write The setting, dialogue, and characters flow naturally. Sorry if I was a little harsh towards Big Haired Bitches-- I just really didn't like how the main character was going. I don't like shallow, "social climbers" and in some ways Corbs has that attitude, but for him it is more a flaw that makes him human. He is actually able to reflect on the behavior and feel some kind of remorse for his actions. I think Big Haired Bitches had potential as there were some twists and comedic relief, just lacking some emotion, if that makes sense? Perhaps if you continue it, put it through Eric's POV. He seemed to be the victim of a lot of trouble and there is some mystery about his past and present. Have him end up with David and punish Logan for "playing the game." haha.. In this story, my absolute favorite character is Pete.. he's friendly, cute, smart, moral but makes mistakes (i.e. human).. Also, I think what I like most about Corbin is that, even with all his bravado and people skills, he is still insecure around Pete.. there's also that snippet about his back-story and it seems like although he's trying to leave that self behind, his old-self still pops up from time to time.. Anyways, keep up the good work

Read all of the chapters in one sitting... all of the characters are pretty pathetic to be honest, except for Steve... I mean this is supposed to be high school? The sad thing is that I think a lot of kids in this generation thinks this is acceptable behavior... the main character seems like he's had sex with over 20 guys and he's supposed to be what, 16? and these kids are doing these horrible things to each other to be "Queen" haha... I love the way you write and enjoy your stories... I don't know, I guess I was hoping that Steve would help show how ridiculous everything was to Logan, but it looks like Logan is turning Steve into another "mean girl" I really like The English Year by the way... I think I'm in love with Pete and all of the characters have depth!

I had a feeling it was heading that way. I figured if Isaiah was in the military, that the government was probably behind him. I didn't think it was a staged killing though, so that was a nice surprise I really look forward to the next chapter. I want to see Dav and Ellis locked in a room to talk things out! haha

Gah.. I wish I stumbled on this ONE chapter longer haha. At first I was unsure of this one, even though I loved Book 1 and 2, because I don't really like one partner to be overly dominant in stories, but I'm really starting to like this one. This book is more focused on building trust in a relationship and the dynamics in earning that trust, etc. Because they rushed so fast into this relationship, they never really got to develop that trust over time and this chapter shows the results. I look forward to reading more.

Just wanted to reply to Adiel333: I believe Pokey is a Longhorn Cowfish?