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Boys Like You Don’t End Up With The King
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Boys Like You Don’t End Up With The King
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Boys Like You Don’t End Up With The King
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Boys Like You Don’t End Up With The King
We know you own Xpress but Grindr too?! How vastly wealthy are you @J.El?- 49 comments
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Boys Like You Don’t End Up With The King
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Boys Like You Don’t End Up With The King
This is AWESOME!!! Francis, the scary witch, knows her tricks well. Touch the ground and make your muscles sore to be free of all your inhibitions. And then, reach for the emotions that keeps you on your toes. Brilliant! And although Matty and Zoey came to the wrong conclusion, that "bury the furry" plan is about to set in motion the end of Connor and needless to say, the beginning of the HEA for Matty and Rusty. As Jamie said; go freaky on or around Matty and King Rusty will demand your head. Oh, I so wanna read Rusty's first reaction when he reads @J.El's new column on his own publication, the Xpress. By the way, speaking of Jamie, he is not as bad as we thought he is. And he said he is down for an available offer, so.... @Doha what are you waiting for? Go and jump on Jamie! Rusty is already mine and forever, so you need someone good too!- 49 comments
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Otis, from today onwards, you are my little brother. Have the tightest hug on the planet from me. Hudson, you giant fella, listen to me carefully! I want you to protect Otis from now. You must become his shadow, where ever he goes. Am I clear or do I have to ask @Doha to use that leash on you? Otis had suffered so much in life. What does he want out of his life? Like what is his ambition? Clearly, he is a good student, so he must desire for something more than waiting tables. Hudson must help him in his pursuit. P.S. Prince Albert seems sumptuous but I'm in a forever-relationship with the Mighty Thor 😊
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Thank You For The Heartache
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Thank You For The Heartache
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Thank You For The Heartache
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Thank You For The Heartache
Okay, who are you again? And I feel sorry that you think you stand a chance against us! Honestly, I'm concerned for you...pack of clowns? All I wanna know is... -
Thank You For The Heartache
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Thank You For The Heartache
A human army! 🤣 You're funny!! Just bring it in and the Fox battalion of fierce monsters will crush the KK whatever 😝- 45 comments
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Thank You For The Heartache
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Thank You For The Heartache
I already have an OF account. OnlyFuns, right? 😇 -
Thank You For The Heartache
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Thank You For The Heartache
Really? We had no clue 😏 -
Thank You For The Heartache
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Thank You For The Heartache
A perfect sketch of Jaime's career path. Honestly @akascrubber, you can become Jamie's manager and earn millions. 😇 -
Thank You For The Heartache
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Thank You For The Heartache
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Thank You For The Heartache
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Thank You For The Heartache
I guess @J.El is now in love with Zoey 😑 But careful sir, Dex might just chop your head off! And before you twist my words, Dex won't chop your head off by smooching you, like the way he does to Zoey. 😏 Well, as we all suspected, Matty will try a little move-on experience with Jaime for a chapter or two. And sorry Rusty hun, but you deserve a little pang of jealousy. You acted like a true asshole. I think Maddox and Jonathan already have a plan to bring the cat and it's idiot master back together. And I don't wanna waste a single word on that eco-Jesus turned campus-nutter. He may die; bye.- 45 comments
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Hmm 🤔.....okay 🧐.... I've got it, I've got it!!! Jackie is Watkins' stupid nephew and Watkins has to put up with him until @J.El marries Watkins and share some of that parental responsibility. On the other hand, I don't believe Watkins is the real big boss. I think it's the robotic voice Jasper heard the last time.
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But he wouldn't. Matty may consider talking to Jamie and emphasis on "may", but he won't want anything romantic from anyone else except for Rusty.
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Without Matty, Rusty will end up like Roy or worse.
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You can't stay in my good graces, can you?
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Or maybe Connor tries to hurt Rusty and Matty comes into defense. Rusty needs to see just how far Matty can go for his love. I think its time for Rusty to see his Cat-boy's proper angry phase and not just some hissing.
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Yeah, I'm expecting something like that too. Maybe after all, @J.El's lover, Connor will come handy and stir up some storm that will only bring Rusty too see things better? Maybe a tumult in the campus will make Rusty realize that one can't figure out its whole life depending only upon the bad days.
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Well, to be honest, I wasn't expecting @Laura S. Fox to be merciful today. Once she starts her I'll-Hurt-My-Readers journey, she takes all the time in the world to enjoy the ride. People are crowding around Rusty and Matty a little too much. But then, Zoey is right too. If you don't try again means maybe you never cared much in the first place. So yeah, the friends-gang needs to keep pushing. Matty is hurt in the worst way possible and Rusty needs an outlet for all his bottled up frustration and anger. Oh, I wish pray Rusty doesn't see Matty as the vent that he needs.
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Rusty's strong love for me pulled me here first, again. 🤗
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Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
I thought you were after for the Matty-Otis type!!! You surprise everyday, you're so Xpressy! 😏 -
Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
Joie J. commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
Okay everyone, move along. Detective Joie is here. Yikes, this is a complicated case! I need to do some digging before things get out of hand. Jasper is only the tip of the iceberg. I wonder how many misguided and trapped youths have lost their lives or souls to these demons of unearthly darkness. This is a severe case of multiple murders, human trafficking, sexual abuse, fraudulence and god knows what else. They've destroyed countless lives and are aiming for more. We have Hudson, an extremely capable officer on the field and Otis may not be in an immediate danger, but we can't just sit back and wait for the horror to unfold. We need to get all hands on deck and help Hudson as much as possible. Corporal @Doha, you and I will keep all the suspects, minor or major ones, under our critical surveillance. Just try and keep your hands off from Otis's man, Hudson and also, my man, Rusty; and we are good. And FTO @Mattyboy, keep those reporters at bay. Any information regarding this case shouldn't leak out or else we will end up jeopardizing the case, risking many lives. Keep an eye out for that notorious Xpress and it's owner/reporter/editor/everything, @J.El. All right guys, lets go, go, go! -
I don't know, I really don't know what to say! The situation is too chaotic to make a comment right now. After reading this chapter, I do feel for Rusty but more than that I feel exactly like Rusty; and it's a good thing from a reader's perspective. I guess it's the rock bottom emotion, right? Back from the hospital, you have a headache, your skin feels sticky, you smell badly and you haven't eaten anything but you are too nauseated to put food into your mouth. With all this, people around you, "your people", are talking little too loudly and expecting you to be able to turn on the engine and come back to earth just because they are there for you. You suddenly feel like you never knew these people. Or maybe all along, they knew you to be someone who perhaps never existed! The complete severance of your mind from your personality and slightly from your memories - I think that's what feels like to be at the rock bottom. I think that's how Rusty feels. And astonishingly, that's how the chapter is making me feel. I just don't wanna open up my thoughts because right now, they are messy and ugly. I don't want to access my corky nature either! I feel angry, very angry towards Roy but I still don't wanna analyze the overall situation and subdue my anger. Maybe August would help Rusty, maybe Johnathan and the boys would help him. But at the moment, I don't want a single person near him. Oh god, the last time I was this angry was when Henry was pointedly avoiding Richard in The Secret History. I love when a writing hits me this much. I think it has to do with the sudden, yet timely and a perfect depiction of the raw-Rusty that's making me so unsettled. Okay, I'm talking gibberish. All I want to say is, @Laura S. Fox, great writing. ❤️ P.S. I like the fact that Matty isn't all wrapped up about how Rusty treated him. He can think regarding his own mistakes too, at such a tensed situation and that's a mature personality for you.
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