Joie J.
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Yeah, the battle isn't over yet. But like any other battle that goes on for way too long, wounds on the warriors stay open like live wires; forever. So even if a soldier had returned home and reunited with its family, those wounds never dries off to a scars. One flash of memory is enough to bring back the vicious sun, the burning battle ground and bloodstained pain. It doesn't take long for such someone to fear the pain and start avoiding its own memories. But as they say, fear the pain and the pain increases. Face the pain and you learn to live with it. This story took the road of that hard truth and I'm happy it did.
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To the poem's protagonist: If he had left you, just forget about him. You'll get better lips than his, you'll get one who's hands are gentle instead of tough!
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I'm not scared for Maddox and Jonathan's relationship 'cause I believe it'll eventually work out well. But I'm scared for Maddox's coming out! Even if his siblings support him and even if his parents agree to accept the way he is; that one scar will remain in his heart forever. That's what scared me. It somehow hit home and I don't know why!
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Agreed!
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I'm scared! 😰
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Chapter 21 - Her Downfall
Joie J. commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Her Downfall
I'm sure Jake's answer was, "I'll fuck you in the car." LOL But I must say, Jake-Nic-Shiv-Arnie are a bunch of bad guys I wonder what papa-Meg will do next? I'm so excited! Plus, worried for Nic's ass too!! If Jake's self imposed celibacy ends at the sight of a mere test results, I'm pretty sure he will prove himself to be an efficient jack hammer!!! 😱😱😱 -
Something about this haunts me! Why won't he be welcomed back? What "change" are we talking about? My heart felt heavy reading this one. A saddening poem that's heartfelt.
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If you have seen Harry Potter, you'd know what it means. Dementors are coming!! Or maybe its unfortunate soul stuck in a frozen world, waiting for his prince, his sunlight to come in. Beautiful poem!
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'To show power, to speak volume, one doesn't require gazillion words.' If this above mentioned fact 👆 needs any standard example, your poems can serve the purpose well.
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Love this one. How beautifully you resembled a transcending passion to a ferocious storm!
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Tempt me with your what? 🤔 You didn't finish, lol. I like your humor added punchlines.
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One's love should be celebrated. ❤️
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If I'm allowed to talk dirty, that's a wet dream right there! 😅 I like how quickly you build up a world and then broke it even faster. Some poetic skills you've got!!!
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"Not enough? Neither are you" ouch, that hurts. Lol. I know, I know. Syllable controls are damn hard. I tried Nonet once! 🥲
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I'm interpreting this as a seductive poem. Weasel dances a shameless cute/sexy dance 'cause he's got his eye on the prize. And if the bunny falls for it, the prize is his! Oh, I love my it-may-seem-dirty-but-I'm-young-at-heart interpretation!
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This is too good. 😍 "Wondering if love is there, Where light left its mark? "....love this is lines!
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I hate the fact that I agree with you. Yeah, a flaw is what makes a better character arch, so a downhill journey is around the corner! And you right, the author is quite clever and may I add, is kind of an emotional puppeteer. I better brace myself.
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Funny how this is what I keep mentioning on my new year resolutions, that I'll not suffocate in my own anger; I'll rage out. Though I always end up finding myself wrapped up in a blanket and for hours, no one can see my face!! It's good to see (read) my goals coming to fruition through your rhymed words, lol. Love it.
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Although I love drama, I'm gonna cry when that happens 😭
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I don't wanna admit this but you got a point! 😟
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Go, go Jonathan!!! 😍 "I’m on a diet of no bullshit lately." Can I have the same diet please? 😂 I've got a prediction: Jonathan and Rusty are gonna set a new paradigm of friendship; I can feel it. Not a lover, not a bestie, but something as equally pure of heart as them both.
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I like how you narrate emotions through actions. "Touch begets goosebumps" and "You sigh, I smile" are to absolutely amazing lines. Loved it.
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Chapter 1 - Broken in the Dark
Joie J. commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Broken in the Dark
I'm sure I'm gonna love this journey. Looking forward to read the silly, upbeat ones; love and depressions too. -
I was about to cash on your bail-promise and start screaming but saved yourself at last hour. Can't wait to be at school this Friday. Can I bring daddy-Meg along with me? He will be so proud. Fun twist on their little rendezvous; in Jake's attempt to get rid of Meg, now he has Arie and Kenzo on his plate! Nic seemed to realize the irk on Jake's posture and enjoyed it well. That's what I like about Nic; he doesn't show the I-must-protect-my-boyfriend attitude all the time. So "fucking the head of newspaper committee" has hit the bullseye. It's gonna be fun! @Salander you're allowed to be sporadic, but just a little; very little. 😈
