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    Chapter 45

    Napaguy commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 45

    Nice job of holding to the standard of Will as an intelligent, witty, and wise beyond his years adolescent. He is really caught in the mores of the tween years. The dialogue between Will and the "adults" was awesome - I like the fact that Will held his own but also listened to what was being said. The play out between Tony and Will clearly implies that Tony is very emotionally tied to and involved with Will but intellectually has a long way to go. It will be interesting to see how Will handles Tony after all the adult counsel. Great writing again Mark. You are unparalleled as a teller of stories of cross generational interaction and changing cultural and social values.
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    Chapter 44

    Napaguy commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 44

    I really enjoy Will with his wide range of emotions and quick witted charm - I like your development of his personality and how he looks at the world around him and how he fully embraces the moment. == I just love the guy!!!
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    In the recesses of my mind from early on has been this lurking sense that Rachel was still alive. Remember when Dirk urged Trevor to go to Australia and seek out his mothers family? That was one of CJ's clues. Great suspenseful writing CJ
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    Chapter 43

    Napaguy commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 43

    Hey Mark Great to have you back. Your writes are clearly superior to most and fit my likes for a good and enjoyable read. Your clearly are a talented writer. I have followed you from the beginnings set in Chicago where I spent quite few years and then back to my home country of Northern Caly where I now reside. I especially enjoy the character of Will and his quick and witty surmisings of moment by moment happenings - he is my kind of guy. Keep up the good work
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    Night of the Mob

    Napaguy commented on C James's story chapter in Night of the Mob

    I have enjoyed your stories It is seems apparent that you write about places you have been or have studied geographically. Story line is very good perhaps stretched out but again that is what allows the development of a very good saga. I look for the each new chapter with great anticipation regards lhh
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