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Chapter 177 Stephanie's Secret
SilentandBroken commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 177 Stephanie's Secret
Rory is smart enough to recognize how he and Robbie need each other even if it is just as friends.” But he’s got enough pride to be in denial about his role there too. -
Well that was rather…dramatic. Things are happening too quickly for Colt to control. However, I feel like all of it pales in comparison to the bigger issue which is what Noah is going through with his stepfather. That kid is terrified of him. The other shoe is going to drop soon.
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Certainly. Right now we can’t tell what her motives are. She definitely moves quickly. Remember she took the challenge to give Colt a bj because someone dared her and did so without hesitation. We only know Noah thinks she’s a slut and he’s a tad biased on this topic. This town doesn’t seem too big and it seems gossip spreads quickly.
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Finally. But I agree with the rest Amy is going to go all Karen and not give up so easily. Which frankly, is kind of sad even she doesn’t realize she’s just got the hots for Colt because is the newest swinging dick her age in town. Best thing for Colt to do is hope some other kid moves into town before school so she can go chase him instead.
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“ Colt wanted to reach over and pull the book out of his hands and kiss him until the pout went away, “ I feel like Colt should’ve. It would’ve solved more problems for him. At least immediate ones anyway. That said, at least he apologized and realized Noah wanted to be left alone.
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I agree with your assessment of Amy. On the front, she seems earnest, but I can’t help but suspect she’s got her own agenda. The other thing that has concerned me is the particular disapproval from Rylee’s friends that Noah is suspected to be gay. If Colt ever gets his head out of his ass and figured out what team he wants to play on, I worry how his switch might be received if he decided he’s gay after all. I can’t imagine it’d be warmly received.
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I like this idea
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That is an angle that I would hope is not the case for sure.
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I too worry the type of abuse is sexual. However it is probably at least verbal and or being held against his will with little food or rest. Colt needs to work his charms and get invited over by Noah’s mom so he can scope out the conditions
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Correct
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Very good points. I hadn’t thought of that. I get the vibe Noah desperately wants to trust him but that itself is also terrifying.
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Noah is still not all that trusting of Colt so far as to open up more. Not that I blame him. The kid is terrified. However, Colt needs to realize that he cares about Noah deeply way more than casual neighbor friends would, and show that to Noah. Maybe then, Noah will start to trust him more.
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So let’s see, it’s been what almost a week now since Colt had actually SEEN Noah? He must have some serious bruises he can’t hide.😔
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Agreed except possibly on Noah’s mom. It seemed to me she’s terrified of his stepdad too. The sister is Avery disrespectful little shit who needs some humility taught to her. I don’t trust her friends either. Tyler is just there for poon tang pie and an overall good time. I’m beginning to get the feeling that Colt might be in over his head.
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Agreed.
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First time reading anything by you so I don’t know about the other story. This one has a great start!
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Marcus’s theme song should be “I Go To Extremes.” By Billy Joel. Oye this kid is a mess
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At least Chubby is paying attention. Because Marcus is clueless
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Ugh I’m not ready! I want to know what Kitt’s major is. I want to know if he tried out for the swim team. I want to know so much more. This was such a great story. I loved how you wrote it.
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Sun kissed blondes are the hottest. Especially soccer players. Why are they always the soccer players? Their bodies glistening in the sun like that all sweaty and rippling…ugh
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I think the college will look at Kitt’s past competitions and see he was still surging. I have a feeling Tom might be able to bend an ear with the swimming coach and scouts and get them to see Kitt only needs a little time in the off season to get his form back to where he could be very competitive for the school.
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An Unexpected Confrontation
SilentandBroken commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in An Unexpected Confrontation
As much as a surprise it was for Kitt to bump into his parents, the interaction went well. Had it happened the first time he went back and reconnected with Matt, I don’t think it would’ve go as well. as for Mateo, he almost HAS to leave for Kitt’s sake so Kitt basically has to make a decision. The time is right. Well, as right as it’s going to be anyway. Yes I think Kitt should try and redshirt for the swim team. He needs to get something better than Javier’s. Same for the after school center. Both pay, but scraps. -
Matt was right to cover for Kitt. The reunion was perfect.
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I am so happy now but I would lying if i said it wouldn’t matter if i didn’t want to see Kitt swim competitively at Northbridge.wishful thinking i know. That phone call had me tearing up. I wish Mateo and Andy would connect. They seem a good fit. I don’t want this story to end.
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Steps Forward, Shadows Behind
SilentandBroken commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Steps Forward, Shadows Behind
Like a silly dog named Habor.
