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Hi - so this story was taking place so rapidly, I was waiting to see what's next. How will Shaun and Jesse get back together, or will they? Did Kyle actually screw Jesse and did Sam know about it? What's next?

I'm more than fine with once a day! Do you know how long the story will be, chapter wise?

Oh man...I am so in love with this story! (as with the Onward Door ones I'm sure the crew of the Chregar will be alright. Maybe stasis as someone suggested. It's just a real shame that it looks like there's only 2 chapters left! (from another site) Held my interest all the way and with updates every day! Good thing I'm retired now...lol

This is so so sad.... I had only emailed Comicality a couple of times about stories, but followed his IMAGINE Magazine every month. The 'boys' and Jeff Fort are going to try to keep the zine going - but who could ever even attempt to finish his stories! https://imagine-magazine.org/ First, Mike Wengert, the AwesomeDude. https://www.awesomedude.org/ Fortunately, Rutabaga, Alien Son and Cole Parker have updated/kept it going. Next was Pee Jay at Tickie Stories - http://tickiestories.us/Main.htm - no backup or replacement there. Don't know exactly what happened here. I think Timmy at IMOFATS, has said that he does have a plan, if anything were to happen. Lets hope that 2024 gets better....John

the story says 'complete'! Is that true??

Hi - I really liked this story a lot....the mystery, the supernatural bent (even before the ending), the creepy professor, etc. It almost seemed a bit like the ending was rushed. Maybe we could have had another chapter. The professor should have had some sort of cumuppence. Winston 'might' have been saved from injury by the other beings. What happens next with all this knowledge? I would rather see a follow on with the boys as teens rather than men. Thanks for writing a great compelling story - John

Love this story (as well as most you write on many sites!) and am throwing my hat into the ring for at least a part 2. Also would like to see Harlan and Terry get a bit closer, emotionally. thanks!

Love this story and poor Zeke's dilemma. Just wish there were shorter times between episodes...

I am going to miss reading about Jamie and his friends! It posted here in NY between 4 and 5 almost every day! It almost seemed like it was a few minutes later each day....building up my anticipation. I do have to go back and reread some of the more technical moments Jamie had...lol Wonderful ending to an awesome story! Maybe an 'epilogue' when you can read through all the suggestions Thank you once again Geron for keeping us all enthralled with your story telling!!

and today, July 20, is the anniversary of that day!

Hi again you know what was missing in this chapter (and I apologize if someone already mentioned it), They translocated into Kundun's area and over the time spent there and in the castle, Geert never asked to see his Master Mage Crill(?) or inquire how he was doing. just an oversight?

Hi - so I follow many of your stories Geron and am loving this one as well. AND I see some very fine parallels with the Odd Onward Door, which I'm waiting for a new chapter there too Especially in the last story published, the subway system is very much like the 'train' system between the peaks in the Darkness Between the Doors; and the Ancients here are the Armenti in that story! Great job! Thanks for writing such long novels! - John

I'm enjoying this story a lot....had to go back and reread the prolog again too! Hope things can progress between Mateo and Jericho for the limited time Mat is there. Great fun family, thanks for posting - John

Great story! I really enjoyed it. Putting the Theater group in it, just added to it. I expected Dickie and company to try something then. The only thing that would have made it slightly better is to find out that Dickie and his thugs get their comeuppance! Nice job as usual! - John