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Hope you stay well Cottontail learns that Jamie has a secret hatter and is getting horrible comments on the website.. Jamie is getting scary looks on campus. Jamie finally realizes he is getting critical comments on the show website and is upset. Angus tells him to look at other items and see how wonderful people think he looks. No one comments on h music and Jamie is worried. He now is concened he is being played and he is regretting joining. He needs to talk to Cottontail---soon.
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I like Grant's reaction to Troy.... "Like most twenty-eight-year-old guys, Grant only had a passing command of his member. That morning it was on its own program."
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I feel for Troy. He needed a shower after camping out in his van. In a smaller way I experienced part of his discomfort while working in tents without heat in field covered in snow in Germany for 12 days without a shower and felt uneasy.I can understand Troy wanting and needing a shower and warm food. I also attribute Grant's kindness and decency as easing Troy into accept more help than I at first thought possible But--please burn the journal. It is a potential threat to ruin their relationship if Troy suspects Grant is not being honest with him and has read his journal I am glad that Grant and Troy have reached a new, positive level in their relationship. "Grant grimly held him. "Don't be sorry. It's gonna be okay." For the first time in a very long while, Troy began to believe that might be true."
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Raffa willl be kept in a coma for another day. Meanwhile, Gray saw him bedside for 20 minutes and opened his heart to him. This might eventually register to Raffa in a good way. Gray talked to the police about his issues with Animal. Gray's mother was present and heard first time about his rape. She consoled afterwards. The police think they have overwhelming evidence and also think Animal might plead guilty. I hope so. A trial will only bring more pain and maybe a longer sentence.
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Chapter 6 - Air Conditioning and Barbarians 6.1
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Air Conditioning and Barbarians 6.1
OMG--what a fight---Qana wielded his sword and psychic powers pushing and testing Richter who did not have a sword. Richter searched for more psyhic strength and a hidden weapon. He never gave up. Qana's sword eventually drove through his collarbone into his flesh. As Richter reached for a weapon he draw to himself, he was defeated firmly as Qana stepped on his only working hand. Qana showed his limits to Richter. He will need new insights and skills to win and protect him self in the future, -
Good background info--Evil works are being planned for targets in Castle Cache. Mocvann has sought help to have a dredder seek out and kill Zal. She will pay terribly for her request. The Saddow Cross head has told an operative in the Blue Moon to contact Plink and then deliver a message secretly to Zdain. It appears Zdain is to try to free Plink from a cell and then Plink will make sure he is caught and humiliated/destroyed. Will Zdain be caught or will the effort to hurt him go off the tracks?
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Parents weekend could shock some university adults and make them fully aware of Will and who his family is.University staff will be researching the parents who will be attending. I am thinking that JP, Stef and Brad will set off development and academic warning bells at the institution. I expect to enjoy seeing how they handle their cultivation and attention.
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Travis is playing a guy in a TV soap opera. Will is living in one. Jeremy is a work in progress and still hoping for easy solutions. Kris is very good for him and aupports his invitation for Brad to stay with them Kris remarked on the upcoming visit to Jeremy.... “That’s good; that’s really good.” He kissed me, then he fucked me, and that experience stopped my mind from bouncing all over the place." Sex is a powerfulfocusing force for Jermey.
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Now we and the board know Marc's extensive battle plans. He will use several fleets to clean out the pirates from the areas he visits.His effortsvwill be transforming. I can see he will be in his element as a Rear Admiral commanding. Unknown to him Grandma Armstrong who really understands Marc told Adam to show up and meet Marc prepared to stand up, speak his mind and not give up on Marc. Wow!
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A good news story--An injured dying Etienne is found and states he wants to live. He becomes a son to Constantine and a brother to Alexei. They are now a happy family.
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Finding out Troy's story is very heart wrenching and unfair. He has lost John and what they built together.. Urgent necessity forced Troy to take the job to repair his former fence. Now, let us see how Troy and Grant work together. I am very intrigued to follow them. It should be hard initially for Troy let go of his hurt. I think Grant has shown himself to be a good person.
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Like some others, this is my second read after some time away. I really find this story interesting and compelling. Thank you!
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What a painful recollection-=Richter tells Luther, his student --close friend, about his victory at the Battle of Midway. Using his supreme psychic powers not appreciated by the enemy he killed nearly1 milllion beings, all their ships and their base. Their loss was one psychic who was destroyed by understanding what Richter had done, Richter cried thinkng about the calamity and his student hugged him. Without Richter's control he might have fallen apart and experienced PTSD.
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What frustration--CO meets Ty and both are turned on but noting follows. Ozzie eventually finds CO and just sees him get off a smal cum load. Both want more but adults arrive and prevent them from having more fun. These guys are primed to have more fun and might connect later. CO might reach out to the missing Thayer to rekindle their passion.
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Raffa is out of surgery and will be kept asleep to assist his recovery. He has bones to heal and the extent of his back injury is not yet known He has the support of his family and Gray and his family. Gray is troubled. There will be mental and physical challenges during Raffa's recovery and he will need love and support. I hope his injuries and limitations are not more severe.
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Constantine is an ancient, amazing and more powerful vampire than can be imagined. He killed a threatening assembly of younger vampires called the Vampire Guild.Alexei knows he is extra powerful and after the mass killing Constantine told Vladimir of his actions and of his abilities. They are remaining friends and will be united. Constantine was worried he would be feared and kicked out, but he is valued and is being kept close. These vampires will be united and .strong.
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Chapter 5 - Roses and Violets 5.3
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Roses and Violets 5.3
Their last day ! They both have regrets and now memories, but no romantic experiences I also wonder who is "they" Aether and Richter have so much more to experience and ned to grow I hope we learn what happens to Momus! -
Chapter 17 A Slight Complication
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 17 A Slight Complication
What a great idea--have a spin off with a story written by Shamus--if you have the time and interest. -
Control the Narrative
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Control the Narrative
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Chapter 17 A Slight Complication
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 17 A Slight Complication
The intro to this story begins...."A sixteen-year-old boy wrestles with his sexuality, hormones, and obsessions innocently unaware that his world is surrounded by murder, mayhem, and tomfoolery." Since Thayer is given such prominence I hope his role grows to fit this emphasis. -
Chapter 5 - Roses and Violets 5.2
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Roses and Violets 5.2
Well, it is clear Richter is a babe in the woods about wolf factions and politics. Aether seems to be on top of the fights and factions. As the night progresses, Momus disappears and Aether stays next to Richter drinking several different drinks while Richter stays sober. Richter is charmed by the way Aether tail moves.If something is going to happen, Aether will need to initiate any action, I suggest, and maybe educate Richter. -
Chapter 17 A Slight Complication
akascrubber commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 17 A Slight Complication
Two boys can easily charn others. Ozzie swims naked and get off with two female servants watching him. What an exhibitionist! PoorThayer has lost his work jck off site and feels the unwelcomed attention and touch of Romey. He needs to get off but is trying to resist Romey while pining forb his cousin, CO. On the island purchase contest, we learn that the Ghost is the one pressuring Deck and offering him financial solutions. Deck is shocked by what the guy says. Can the Ghost offer him something more? Meanwhile, Linnie Lee in another location is pressured by Tony, the mob, to sell. She decided to take the papers and to take time asking others, including Deck. Her buyer is frustrated, but both are unsettled when Shamus and the cops show up. The mob guy flees and Linnie Lee refuses to talk to Shamus. The stage is set for Linnie Lee to talk to her older brother, Deck, and they will soon realize they have two different buyers who can threaten them. -
The families and friends are gathered in the waitingbroom. Raffa ia seriously injurred with multiple broken bones and an injured lower back. He is having immdeiate surgery and then it will tke a while to be able to assess the real damage and any nerve injuries. The doctor advised to not speculate. Gray is a nervous wreck and he wll continue to be worried.
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Chapter 5 - Roses and Violets 5.1
akascrubber commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Roses and Violets 5.1
Qana acting like an older brother advised Richter about the ball and inviting Aether. Richter is very socially withdrawn and inexperienced. Qana is trying to help hhm reach out and better connect with Aether, Richter eventually sends a long worded invitation and Aether accepts. They walk to the ball with Momus happily along as part of the group. How will Richter and Aether act towrds each other? Will they become emotional or romantic? Will this become a good or uplifting or painful experience? -
I agree that this chapter made me sad. Marc is mad and upset. Marc considers ending the joint corporation as an option. Are they too incompatible ? Plus , he is now thinking That Adam does not understand him and his concerns. He has to really think on these two big matters. Marc said...."And now instead of enjoying time on Casi Oceanus with a person I thought I could love and would always have my back. I find he doesn’t understand me at all. I am wondering now if all of it was a mistake. Regardless, I will now do for me what I have done for the Corporation. And if anyone has a problem with that, then I damn well will burn it all down and walk away for good."
