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Marc is the inspiration for this new type of fighting and new ships. I see familiar cases are involved again.
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This is an interesting story that introduces Marc Alexander who learns and trains on various ships . He is a young bright talented and insightful person who is part of the main family that owns the corporation with many interests that controls a huge area of space and has a substantial fleet of ships. He could be the next head of the corporation in 100 years depending on what happens. You will meet a range of characters and family members and a man who becomes his love interest for a while. Marc dreams of his fated Mate and has not met him yet. I expect he will meet his mate in a future story. I am looking forward to reading the following books.
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Marc identified a major need and briefed his idea to the board. Subsequently, a major investment and upgrade was made in creating a more powerful intelligence gathering ship with letal firepower camoflaged to be just a merchant ship. The enemy can be found and destroyed. This is test case to see if the concept is successful and able to hurt the enemy. Marc shoud be proud. Meanwhile Marc connected Hugo with Janek and is giving them the possibility of being mates, He is a concerned matchmaker. I am very impressed with this story and the people involved and am looking forward to your future books. Thank You!
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River is going through serious separation withdrawls from Alec --so far away--and now Kenji who could not meet him since he was tied up with a last minute meeting. River has to focus and pull it together. A0, Kenji's 16 year old sister, is irrepressible and constantly talking. She is taking him to a small restaurant for sushi who she just knows River will like. They have two male guards who are protecting them. River has not yet fully understood the culture shook is he undergoing. Japan is different. Ai and Kenji will help him adapt. I hope they can get away for a break.River will like Japanese hot baths. BTW, Japan is uber expensive. River should accept Kenji's offer to pay for things.
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Davenry also could have his two right hand men with him to handle quietly any inconvenient people that stop the treaty from happening. Will he ask George to assist him at a critical point in order to smooth over the sensitive ego of Cornwallis? George is known to have the ear of the King and may have some needed credibility. I expect Tallyrand wants peace to restore France's finances and will work with George since their interests align. Tallyrand may remember the young naval officer who George funded to stay with him and might realize or come to find out that George is blameless amd mention it through the right people to correct the assumption of Napoleon. He can be told the officer died in battle. BTW, when Caroline finds out about the magnifcent necklace and earings she might get very upset. George will have visibly shown Caroline no longer really matters to him.
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More diplomacy in line for George and Daventry. They are tasked with critical duties. They each have separate challenges in France. George has to molify Napoleon who thinks he slept with his wife and is very upset with him. In truth, George was not to lover of the Empress, it was Lt, now Captain retired, Eastwyck. I suspect George will seek Tallyrand's assistance to find a solution and it will cost him. George needs to remove any key obstacle to the treaty caused by Napoleon 's concerns Meanwhile, Daventry will accompany Cornwallis to Amiens to bring a treaty in to reality. Daventry will need to find way to solve the ego battles and difficult details without getting any public credit for his assistance. George and Daventry are awaiting knowing with the PM will offfer them to encourage them to carry out these tasks,
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Chapter 3: Nightmares and Revelations
akascrubber commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 3: Nightmares and Revelations
Aelois is very mysterious. Is he the savior who killed the vampires in the dream of Aidan? What the story of Argos reveal about him? They had an intense meeting at Aidan's house. Aelois was badly bleeding and they hugged needing physical contact. I can see them become less clothed soon. Aelios wanted to check on Aidan since he missed their meeting time. Ethan watched the couple and realizes Aidan is mesmeriized by Aelois. He wants to help Aidan work through his situation. -
A little disappointment
akascrubber commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in A little disappointment
Things seem to coming clearer into focus. Amid possible work upheavals Dan and Vaugh remain committed to be a couple.Heyward is selling his serious art works. Vaughn's art efforts have been cover for his real intention to sell and improve his financial affairs. Other questions arise. Will the show in the Manor go on? Will the Manor be sold? Will Dan have a job? Only Heyward can answer these questions. Will things be much clearer soon? Meanwhile, Dan and Vaughn are going to find a way to enjoy their lives . -
Marc and Janek made their farewells after lots of sex and heartfelt talks. Janek is moving to a new area on a fighter with a new carrier Marc has other training and family duties. Talking with his sister , he thinks he might have other lovers for 5 years or so until he meets his fated mate when he will stay true to him. He consistently dreams of his mate and will know him when he sees him.
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Franz is escaping after some serious risks. Shaddow Cross soldiers entered the tavern when he was staying and were looking for him. His original helper, Karl, sang for the crowd and they loved his efforts. Franz sat down to hear Karl and was located to a drunk old man. Franz is surprised that the old man is shrewd and a friend of Karl. The old man sneakily helps Franz flee the tavern and eventually all three ride away on horses with no one following them. Franz is safe for now.
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What a disaster. Jays and Kris traveled to New York and Kris left him. Kris told Jays this mess was his fault and Jays rejected it. He feels Kris is not in his corner. Jays is sulking and sulking. The Escorial family dinner was so turbulent. Grandmaman took Jays' side and blamed Will for unnecessary violence. Will forcefully stood up to his criticism. He said he is done with Jays. Darius was in his corner. Meanwhile, Jack said his girl friend is pregant and will keep the baby. They at this time are not getting married. Claire knows her marriage is over. Will will leave now on Tuesday to help Marie come to grips with her new family situation. Harsh words were said and bright lines were drawn and the passions of the situations griped them. I cannot see yet how the hurt parties can find peace and at some point reconcile. But.........
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Marc updated and improved the traing program and began taking the trainees and instructors through it. It sounded challenging, Now, he is treating them all to dinner. He has reserved 3 days in a hotel for personal time with Janek. Incidentally, Marc met with his father and thought he would command the corporation for 100 more standard years. Marc has a long time to train and lead before he might assume command of the corporation.
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Asking Never Killed Anyone
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Asking Never Killed Anyone
So the next time Jamie does an online show with or without cottontail will "gentlebusinessman" make any special requests and will Jamie comply? Maybe the show will go into new territory for Jamie and cottontail. BTW, River in Trash Polka currently active on this site by Demiurge does onlne shows and sells pics for extra money from each scenario he offers for his shows -
Asking Never Killed Anyone
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Asking Never Killed Anyone
Jamie has opened himself more and was very surprised. He has connected to Bunny Boy on line. I can see more on camera rimming and maybe more sexual play. His meeting with the record executive was path breaking. Arthur was shockingly his highest paid online account and saw him masturbating. He said he did not want sex with Jamie only to give him career advice which was very helpful. He did not think his sex on line was a problem--for now. He told not to get a bf but seem open to fans. Bisexual or pansexual would resonate. Arthur liked his honesty. Jamie was told to explore other musicians and was told of a place to jam and perform with others. Jamie may break out of his rut and be tested. Will he get back to Arthur after he grows? What will he learn from BB?- 10 comments
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Chapter 2: A Growing Obsession
akascrubber commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 2: A Growing Obsession
Adrian is trutly smitten by Aelois. He is in his sleeping dreams and in his daydreams. They met again at the clearing and Aelois gave him a necklace, Adrian hugged him and Aelois kissed his forehead. They are on a path to get closer. The deaths by neckbites are disturbing, -
Mother at Norton Priory
akascrubber commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Mother at Norton Priory
What an interesting, thought provoking and colorful excursion. Mother and Vaughn has many times to think about the past. She like Gran saw them as becoming a legal couple. Greg provided interesting context as they toured the grounds. The ending picnic with Len was enjoyable, but seemed to indicate something was off. Maybe, he and Dan will find out more later. All in all, the rebooted memories brought more subjects for discussion. -
Marc acted with determination and rescued Janek from a terrible situation in wrecked ship among a crowded asteroid area . He had to blow away the hatch and apply a medical unit as his body was soon put in a coma until he could be taken to he best medical unit in the battleship. Marc risked his life and took advantage of his family position in a dangerous situation, but he knew he had to save Janek. After a period of care and rest, Janek recovered. He and Marc has several wonderful sexual moments.They returned to their separate ships and were welcomed with supportive crowds. Marc received a medal for being a hero. He also was assigned a lucrative training development mission based on what he did. The overall training program needed to be upgraded. I am sure his product will be outstanding.
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The chapter is repeated. Will it be better edited? The boys seem to be getting along well.
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Chapter 1: A Chance Encounter
akascrubber commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 1: A Chance Encounter
This is an encouraging introduction. You have introduce two interesting young male characters who seem to share things in common and may grow well together. I am glad to see you honoring Comicality and can assume some common themes. I also loved to find special spots in the woods when I was a teenager. -
Marc undertook a new training assignment. He was able to simulate killing 6 fighters twice with just a scratch on his ship He was fortunate to hook up with Jan and have some great pasionate sex. Jan had hoped Marc was taking him with him, but was told no. Their paths are going in separate directions. Marc told Jan he expected him to find his mate as he progressed. Showing uncommon leadership , Marc assessed a LT's role who thought he was being fired due to a past run-in with an Alexander family member and stated for the record that he was doing a good job. It should help him.
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Vaughn is feeling compelled--too much so--with the hanging and design of Heyward's new pictures. He is seeing lots of male penises. Fortunately, he is able to spend more time with Dan at the Manor. With all this male nude business Dan gave Vaughn a surprise photo session with the artist updating Greg with his Len nude photos. Dan and Vaughn like the results and a large format composition arrives of them nude showing all got placement in his home. This must have made his work for the huge collection for Heyward very personal. A surprise unknown work featuring Greg by a respected artist was fascinating and welcomed by Heyward. Vaughn's contacts are adding to the collection. The question of showing the new collection off came up. Vaughn now found out he was expected to give guided curator tours. Hmmm--as Dan says "Fuck me." He will be closely identified with these male nudes and Heyward. I expect his intrepretations will be sensitive and respectful and put the showings --and Heyward--in the best possile ways.
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This is a fascinating story, well told. You will learn about the pain of human trafficking and the path a survivor, Matt,takes when first helped to be free by a kind hearted man , Andrew, who is taken by him from the start. Luck, interested, well meaning people and resilient spirits who keep on going play a part.There are twists and turns and the hope for end is not certain till the last chapter. Please read how these individuals live their lives and take on important challenges.
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The title does imply a focus on freshmen --ie Will --with side themes on Travis and their friends and relatives as Will moves through college. We have seen how important a role Brad will play. His sons or at least two are growing up. I agree with Daddydavek that time away from Jays will be beneficial. “I have found that when JJ is extremely agitated, it is easiest to understand him by imagining a four-year-old throwing a tantrum,” JP said.--Yes, but a 4 year grows up in a year or two, unlike Jays so far.
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Great aggressor fighter attack scenario training. Marc and the lead pilot killed all the trainee fighters, including the one Janek flew. Marc is very skilled and getting better. He needs shooting time to improve his accuracy. Marc took part in the action so far anonymously. Jan should be surprised at the degriefing and the trainee crew will learn lessons. I bet Jan will be energized to be a hot playmate for Marc. Being a prince of the corporation does have advantages.
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The impetus was all Matt. He deliberated for weeks and came to a decision. This rang true. He for him acted with a purpose and moved out and onward to see and hopefully live with Andrew. He knew he had issues and hoped Andrew would accept him as is, imperfect and needing support to deal with his past.He arrived on Windy Island wet from a storm and surprised Andrew and Maeve. They welcomed him and he was at home in short order. Andrew let him set the pace of their relationship. but gave him a tender kiss which was welcomed by Matt. The 7 year gap showed them happily married and moving to Skye. They wil be closer to the retired Maeve and Andrew's family. Thesy have maintained their good connections. A large Christmas party with relatives and friends is planned as well as a long trip to Egypt and Jordan to get background for a book. Matt is intending to write his own story--hmmm Sold into Freedom. What an apt title ! I am glad this story turned out so well for all. Thank you.
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