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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    What a wonderful and unexpected at every turn happy tale. This could have gone sideways with misunderstandings and mistrust many times, but trust and goodwill and honesty prevailed. Thank you for this optimistic strory. Both sides are getting along and will work together.
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    Chapter 3

    Rick took the big step and acted on Broadway. He accepted a gay role in Rent. He should have gotten major press attention--but seemed not to be an item of interest. His several month hiatus seems long. Is he not wanted on stage and a record deal is not ready. I admit I do not know the business, but the delay seems out of step. We should find out what is happening in the next chapter.
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    Chapter 18

    OK--it was a test to show if jem would protect Bzup. I hope the lance thrust was a feint and Jem was not hurt But, the bigger question can Jem really protect the aliens? Will the ones coming on a new ship with possibly powerful weapons be hostile to sharing the planet? Benteen's Compact may not be binding on them. In two months we may find out how friendly new arrivals are? I hope they can communicate with them towards the end of their trip and can test out their support of the Compact
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    Chapter 6

    I am intrigued by the meaning of birthing day, not birthday, Does this imply a different method of babies being born ? Could babies be created by some way and then mature into babies inside a birthing chamber that is not a human mother's womb? A some point an A.I. is involved. "Or so my parents tell me, as that was what the A.I. said before I was Birthed."
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    The largest single chapter here was written by Kyle Aarons. Chapter 33 of his Kandric Saga was 199,253 words. It was monumental and covered so many situations and individuls.
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    Chapter 6

    Marc has not found Mr. Right for a bf or at least friends with benefits, He wants to be challenged, Bryan is too subservient. Besides, he knows his mate is taller than him since his birthing AI told him. Marc does not realize he is seen as the next leader of the corporation-that he does not want--and he and his potential power has to intimitate people. Plus, the one guy that lusts after him is to timid to make a move.
  7. This is a very detailed inventory, It will be useful to reference and this story progresses. Thank you,
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    We saw the human sides of the equation in clear tones. Andrew and his family had to come to grips with accepting They were very concerned for Andrew and what he is doing . In the end, Andrew will be supported after serious consideration. I am sure their lives will be changed by Matt. Matt is treated as a commodity at the Market and is being cleaned up given some clothes and food and will be on a ship for 6-7 days with time to worry about his new owner. Let us hope he finds a way to be calm and agreeable, not rebellious. He misses and worries about Ahmet. Being placed on an island will not make any escape plans viable. His new home and non-sexual demands should surprise him. Ahmet was freed and not killed. It was close. His boss decided to honor his past service and let him find a way back to him family in Turkey/ He promised not to discuss his boss or lifestyle. He still could be killed. He knew he has to blend in and not expect to find Matt who is now in hui past What is past is prologue. We are looking forward to learning how and and Andrew relate from now on. I hope Matt finds peace and self-worth after his painful transition.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    The humans world has turned upside down twice with huge implications. Bzup showed the aliens were friendly and actualy helpful. Bzup explaned they were gathering lots more food in order to leave the planet. He indicated ship from earth is coming. Bzup said his counterpart Azim has said they must leave. Azim must see the humans from earth as a threat to them. So the trip to the alien ship was intended to instruct the humans about the aliens and let them know others are coming. I expect Bzup and his kind will leave before the other humans arrive. There survival is paramount. Now, will the new ship be helpful or not? Is interspace travel now possible on an ongoing basis? The humans on Benteen had to adapt to survive. Wll the new humans face the save physical sresses?
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Both Riley and Cedric are facing serious troubles. What will connect them and can they help each other?
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    Repercussions

    So, Heyward;s goal is clear. Suki tells vaughn that Heyward wants Dan. It is obvious to her. She knows Heyward Dan and Vaughn discuss this and realize Heyward could ruin Dan and impair Vaughn if he was crossed. They decide to wait and see. Dan is willing to reject the advances of his boss and be fired. Life will be challenging. But Heyward may have other problems--mostly financial--which could immobilize him from his intended sex target. Life has gotten more complicated.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    So far, so good--No problems or injuries Now Bzup and others have traveled to his ship. They are ready to go inside and meet the other aliens, They will likely be very surprised by the aliens. I hope everyone can co-exist,
  13. akascrubber

    Heading North

    Pushed and worn individuals are moving towards the Bastion as their last hope to resist the hord that is attacking and killling many. It is a scary, troubled time. There is a expressed hope for a savior. Will he come in full force? “This world needs the Seeded One,” Zolgrim thought to himself, “We need saving from this madness.”
  14. OK--Now we learn that the stalker boy is out to get the "real" Jamie and become important and famous. He has a terrible self-concept and a poor view of his ability to succeed in life. Jamie is focusing on finding his stalker and Xpress antagonist. He thinks he found the guy when he finds a strange guy. Jamie agrees to meet him a sees that he is wearing a rabbit costume which he will not take off. They verbally spar and it is clear rabbit boy watches his online sex show and does not accept what Jamies says about himself. Rabbit boy wants to find cruelty and trickery actions behind Jamie that do not exist. Rabbit boy is unsatisfied. He will flail about. He should just arrange a real date with Jamie as himself and not guess about Jamie.
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    Chapter 5

    So Marc has asked Bryan to dance with him at the joint birtingday party. Bryan selected a slow dance which will be last. He wonders if Bryan is willing to be his boyfriend. Marc noticed Wojact looking at him and blushing. He thought Wojac acted totally cutely. Is he going to ask Wojact for a dance as a friendly offer? He has time before he dances with Bryan. Will Marc discover he finds Wojact very interesting?
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    Chapter 2

    Ricky's history was uncovered in Red's class. He read the script with great verve and acted in character. The class was stunned at how well he acted. Afterwards Ricky was mobbed while Red was still surprised. Ricky confessed his past to Red and his strong desire to act on stage. Later, that night, Red took his virginity and blew Ricky away.The pleasure was incredible. What a great new beginning.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    BTW, I am very worried about Josel and Zdain. I hope you return to them soon, please.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    Since the ship was under a mesh, was the crew is some form of stasis so the ship could not escape? Will bzup be able to free the ship and crew?
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    What positive step for both. Both acted vulnerable and needed each other. I am very encouraged. “I don’t think this was covered in the contract.” I mumbled. “Then don’t bring it up. Uncharted territory it is.”
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    A great action showing trust--The missing ship was allowed to be discovered. Now, hopefully the crew can be found alive by this crew. Bzup won the argument with a fellow alien. The abscence of a fight is very positive. Let us see what is learned next from any former captured crew. The alien ship is now expected on an island which can only be found using the Raptor. Will the attempt at contact be made?
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    Chapter 20

    Bartos and Daren were secreted out of town by a stranger and ended up with Bartos's dad in a far town. The three are on the way to another distant location. Bartos and Darren doe not know what is going on. The three are supprised to sit next to a shocking couple. The older man is being convinced to give a young girl wine that she wants. Bartos and his party are shocked to hear the girl is the ward of Berron Rigailon, the father of Bartos. One more tale is disrupted lives after the Shaddow Cross talkeover. AR THE GIRK IS THE WARD OF THE FAHER OF bARTOS.
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    Chapter 17

    Amazing--River went home early after talking to Kenji who noticed his distress. Surprisingly, Kenji showed up at River's apartment. Kenji stripped his boxers and got into River's bed. River climbed in next him and was comforted. Kenji showed he cared for River who was having a bad day. He is going way outside the contract. This is what River needs and , I think, will be good for Kenji. Things may change for the better..
  23. Kris has a more disturbed background than I imagined. His grandfather adopted new family heritage acting as a Nazi spy and then worked for the Stasi. Kris's family were not aristocrats but farmer peasants. Later, his father also became a Stasi spy in the US who was eventually discovered by the FBI . He killed himself after being outed and bled fry by the FBI . Kis death enabled his mother to get a pension. Kris is supposedly paying money to law firm who is investigating his heritage as an noble prince. However, the law firm is fake and his mother is getting some of the the money, Now that he is connected to JJ the money requested has increased because he could pay more. Kris is bing scamed. Kris is shocked. His old identity is false. He is taking time to process this and is going to see Casey later. JJ has been exceptionally supportive and is standing by Kris. He is comforting him as the person he knows not because of his former assumed heritage. I think JJ will be essential to his healthy recovery. Kris as to look ahead and gain confidence. This is a test of his resiliency. Jake and others said the history is restricted to the family. The files are not going to be public . So what story will Kris now tell about his past? Casey can help him frame a new narriative. He can ignore the goverment secrets. One thing he needs to do is to stop paying the fake law firm.
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    Chapter 11

    Thank you for not showing the disaster on the boat when the owner found out Matt and Ahmet has been lovers. Both men would have been badly hurt. Matt, at least, had some value and was being sold. He must be broken and traumatized and horribly abused. He did look to Dante to be in terrible shape physically, Andrew's heart was in the right place. He had to save Matt. I am sure writing the book left him feeling he wished he could more to help at least one soul. Now, Andrew has his chance to help Matt recover. Andrew's dad is giving him good advice. He will need to support and enable Matt to come back to a normal life. It will not be easy. Matt has been a sex slave for two years. Matt could be distrustful and act out--especially after the disasterous ending with his Arab owner. Initially, he might think Andrew is his new owner who wants control pver him and sex and not a possible friend. Andrew and Maeve will need to be patient and caring and learn as they work with Matt. It will not be a rough, rocky process to bring back Matt's humanity, I expect.
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    Thirty-Six

    Well, these people relate well when brought together. You showed us a delightful , pleqsant opportunity for mutual benefit. Keith spoke and Jonty's photos made the reconstruction real. It felt like events I attended. Soft pitches for money were made. I hope the school does get more funding, Jonty was a engaging. youthful feature and was given contacts that might advance his career. Such is the way the world works. I am interested to see what he does next with Thomas and his university required project. He can add some friendly variety to Thomas and Keith's life. They can be helpful mentors for Jonty.
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