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We can arm wrestle for it
akascrubber commented on ObicanDecko's story chapter in We can arm wrestle for it
Noah and Leo are slowly trying to figure out everything from labels to sexual positions. The are still keeping their relationship secret which led to a smell fight going out with Fabian How soon will they forgive each other? -
His mother wants a daughter to take over her business. I guess she will find a surrogate using his sperm Mickey's three children are Jeremy 3, Arlo 5, and Dimitri 9
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Rebel forces are surrendering. Louis is sitting in his reinforced London cage. His last hope is a new fleet with men , money, supplies and siege. engines. The English feet is preparing to take the French fllet on. This victory could decide who finally will be king.
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Staslav , her mother's greatest magical creation, stood in their way to save Ain. He had so many awful powers. Yarima sent Nev to gather Ain while she fought Staslav.He kept winning in his attacks and Yarima was injured, Unti the end, when Yarima concentrated her power to destabilize Staslav. Yarima was able to get close and killed him thrusting her dagger into her heart. Now, they had to win. The queen will know she was involved They still need to find Ain and take him back past more guards.
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Mickey soon needs to start on that cup of semen for his mother. Is that right? Will he finally get Isaiah to help him? I hope he shoots lots so he can fill up the cup before it spoils.
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You say you have not written the final chapter, so you have not decided the outcome yet. If Ben and Riley knew they were going to be targeted to be killed, then why did they not have any weapons? Did you set them up to lose or die? Do you want this to be hopeful or a tragedy? I push for hopeful along with other, but.... You have just enabled the four to get on the same page with no misconceptions, Will you kill off Ben and let Riley turn feral? Keir and Lee seem now to be irrelevant. You can end the whole story on a tragic note. The siren, though, offers a possible medical solution.
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"He is not the bait, Kieran," Ben stated, delivering the final, ironclad truth. "He is the replacement. He is the evolution of my design. He survived you, and in doing so, he taught me how to open doors instead of building walls." Ben Shocked Keir. The Lee found them and used his crossbolt to shoot Ben in the shoulder who fell to the ground in great pain Keir and Lee ran away and found the Audi and drove away, Riley found Ben. He will not pull the bolt out. Riley is staying with Ben not knowing how to get help worrying that Ben is slowly fading. Maybe, help is on the way. The chapter ends as a siren is heard. Is it coming foe Ben or is it going elsewhere?
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I find it amazing how methodical, repetitive and well prepared the practice for the movie scenes were. Sky had to teach Brant and the director about anal sex penetration and they welcomed his tutoring. I wonder if Brant to be very capable by the end of the movie. Of course, realism matters. Sky's father recovered eventually after seeing his son in a simulated gay sex act. Things are falling into place nicely.
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Yeah--it is a primitive time versus today. Searching was cumbersome, Microsoft just put out its useful browser in 96. I was addicted searching the web and the first night I got online I stayed up past 3:00 AM Would Kier be smart enough to effectively hide his spying?
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If there are cameras outside. Ben can check the feed tomorrow morning and will be aware they are being watched. I do not know if the cameras are good enough to catch faces clearly. At least, Ben is warned.
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Sam was not careful. The men have him and they might want to play with him and his body. The armor and knife made him a matter of concern. Is his knight tacking him and will he arrive in time to save Sam. While a prisoner he may learn useful information about the ash and who makes it.
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You know many of us want a happily ever after type ending. But, I can see you ending with an unhappy result blowing up all the main relationships with lots of unnecessary violence. Ben, Riley, Kier and Lee are flawed. They could lose the trust they have and get mean with some being really hurt and some running away
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Training in the dark is going slow and bothersome. Neven is upset and Lashes out at Fenn. Yarima surprisingly comes to Fenn's defense They are not yet ready to save Ain.
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Some progress==Mickey while drunk tried to kiss him 7 times and at least once touched his chin.
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Mickey is going to have two members of his crew who are fleeing the Father. He will have a mark on his back. So, what's new!
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Are Ben and Riley being lured to Leeds to be stuffed and hidden away? “And Northern Transit specializes in secure, unchecked cargo to the Scottish borders. If Kieran wanted to disappear...." or to disappear Ben and Riley....
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Reading about Taine and Kyr fighting the evil bugs really is exciting--even if is a comicbook
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Ben and Riley dismantled Montague before his father and mother. He was shouted out of the house by Ben's mother. They now knew the plan was a fraud. Montague fled fearing his creditors. Will he find a way to get back at Ben? Ben and Riley were in great moods. Ben got Riley his driver's license and bought him a small Jag. Riley said You love me." and meant it, At home they got in bed and got close. Ben asked to do more, He touched Riley and really kissed him. They were so outside or at least someone watching his house into each other, Meanwhile, Ben has missed Kier watching his house. He focused on Riley and not his neighborhood. He found an electronic record that suggests Kier is in Leeds. Riley and Ben will travel to Leeds tomorrow. Ben has not considered the record was a false one. Kier would assume Ben will track him and he will mislead Ben and send him away. Why?
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Noah was not the target, Uncle Matt Two husband and wife doctors were jealous of his promotion and wanted him ded. The bad male doctor was caught on camera messing with Uncle Matt's car. Both doctors were arrested but released on their own recognizance. They returned to the hospital to kidnap Noah. Security guards stopped them. Little B stayed with Noah and made sure the door would not open for the kidnappers. Noah is safe for now. But, he has to tell Shiloh and the bracelet he was wearing, More trouble ahead....
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Jake's Story, Part Three of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Jake's Story, Part Three of Three
Knowing there were three parts helped focus my attention. I wanted to know how it turned out and not have to read a twenty chapter story that might dwell on painful self-destructive actions and thoughts. You resolved the issues fairly quickly in a positive manner. Jake and Junior still cared for each other. -
This is compelling, powerful story starting out as sexual abuse of a high school student, betrayal of a close friend and serious guilt that never seems to end. Jake learns his worth is only as a sexual object. It all crashes when serving as a Marine in Afghanistan his legs are blown off. He works through his pain and depression to become a wheelchair bound coach in a high school in Alaska. He builds up his upper body and takes part in athletic games. Junior, the boy he feels he betrayed, finds him and comes to visit him with his husband and baby. Jake is very apprehensive. How they relate and come to understand each other is very enlightening. Will they be able to accept each other and not come to physical blows and painful mental anguish as Jake fears. What will they learn about each other? Is this going to be a tragedy? You will want to finish this story to learn how it turns out and how Jake and Junior move on.
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Raithion is traveling to Sura island. He needs to find an antidote to cure his stricken son. He brings an offer of a retrial and possible redemption from the Basileus. The Sura leaders want closure and to find their lost relatives and dead bodies. Raithion can help them, Will the bad blood and deep hurt between Azula and Raithion prevent a reconciliation? Will they ever be able to forget and become closer?
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I am worried about Ain, Neven wants to spend a few days training and testing, He is risking Ain's life by the delay. , Neven already said he and Yarima cannot be gone too long from the queen, Will they have enough time to train the rebels? Neven should help Fenn plan his attack and where to find and kill the torturer. Fenn can capture Ann and take him back to this meeting place.
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You Cannot Change the Past
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in You Cannot Change the Past
Theo is trapped by an evil one. Jack and Vincent wolf form had moved to the Whiteflame pack in the past, They met Theo's father and were incvted to share a meal. The father is very gracious. They asked to see Theo and were told he would appear soon.But, they were advised he was very formal. Things are so mixed up. How can they be changed for the better?- 8 comments
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Jake's Story, Part Three of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Jake's Story, Part Three of Three
Thank you. I was very surprised and comforted by how this story turned out. I was not expecting this story to be this positive and redemptive. It could have been a tragedy but for the way these three men grew. Jake fearing the worse was turned around. He counselled Junior to not have any regrets about their past and to please understand Jake took responsibility for his own choices. He joined the Marine. He was injured. He now is living as best he can. Junior stayed the night with his husband's support and they both found ways to give each other orgasms. They needed this chatharsis. The quality , goodwill and improved understandinng from this visit impressed me. Jake was invited to stay with them in Seattle next summer. Things are going very well for these three. Arriving home, Jake contacted a male friend and invited him to stay the weekend and to go out for dinner. They are going to have a real date and not just a rush of excitement. Junior has changed Jake's opinion of himself and how he can better relate to others.
