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Chapter 55 - Epic-Log Part Two
akascrubber commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 55 - Epic-Log Part Two
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"Ok, now that's really the end. I have (finally) just finished my second draft, fixing all major plot inconsistencies. Maybe I should force myself to finish the editing by starting to finish and post the version I plan to publish?" I am interested in reading your revision or if you want to look ahead, I will gladly read your sequel. Thank you for publishing your ideas.
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Theo is running after Vince and Jack, a creature of the Moon. He will find the Wisdom Tree and answers The three have to work together. It is past time for answerd.
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So now it begins. Azula is in the capital. Enemies will try to stop him and kill him. Raith loves him fiercely and will do everything in his power to protect him and help him succeed. “Fate has been kind and brought us all together again,” Azula said. “I, Azula Doriel, sailed from Sura Island to Lyria on a mission. I must clear our clan’s name, restore honor to those who died, and reclaim our standing in this kingdom. I do not know whether I will succeed, but I promise to keep fighting until the very end.”
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I love this perspective better. The evolving contest is explained. The pack of three is trying to overtake Marty's pack and they do not know what they are really facing. Thee three are not clearly seen by Marty. The disguised teacher is the new pack's alpha. I am fascinated to see Lucas as a pawn before he is turned by the new moon. Andy is really torn and cannot believe he has lost Lucas. He is not going to give up. The gargoyle has watched the night maneuvers. He should report what he saw to Andy. With more info, Andy will be better ready to fight. The invading 3 individual pack is going to be very sorry. Will they eventually flee?
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I do not think this will be a leather sex story no matter what the symbolism,
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OMG--you changed the focus and tension of the story at warp speed Lucas is being turned into a werewolf after being bitten by a member of another pack There are srange new people at school that are destablizing their natural rhythm Lucas is marked and is drawn into a purity circle so there will no sex with Andy What is going on? Andy thinks it is a rogue werewolf Only after chasing the enemy at night and ending up tussling with Marty, they realize ..."They were being hunted by a coordinated, highly intelligent pack. And they were losing." Marty and Andy and te gargoyle need to ploy and devise a victory plan. They can figure out now who is the enemy at school.
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Chapter 12: The Weeds
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 12: The Weeds
Fucking Dylan-could hurt Will with his HR duties and be a weak link. Dylan might tell his work buddy who might be taking money from Merrick to spy on him. Merrick must have spies at Avery-Woods. He wants dirt on Will and can spin it in a very bad light. -
Chapter 12: The Weeds
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 12: The Weeds
Is Merrick behind Dylan? What is Merrick's plan" If Will brings Dylan home to fuck, Jason's mind is going to be blown. Jason is going to see Dylan is like him and see he has a chance with Will. So much pain could be ahead. Could Will continue to fuck Dylan on more days? Could Will Fucking Dylan at home with Jason aware of it cause Jason to turn to Marcus for help. Jason will tell Marcus about Dylan and Will. Marcus is going to tell Merrick. How will Marcus get some pics? -
Sounds like Mark gave up his long-term friend because he was gay."Dude... you really need to get over the fact that Sandro's gay. Nobody else gives a shit. Why do you?" Mark really needs to figure out why he was bothered. Others are not.
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But, there is no confirmation, yet that Lucas was bitten by a werewolf. I hope Lucas finds out soon. I
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Danny is living dangerously angering the quarterback and dating Jake's ex bf. Lots of drama lies ahead As a former hs and college marching band member in the Indiana, I enjoy the band dynamic
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Thank you. He is new to me. I will check him out later
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Dear weinerdog Who was the long absent author you cited? Thanks
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Maybe Morgan might look older than 16 with his hard, muscled body, but he needs to be careful to not sound younger or not as aware of his past high school education. Troy is immersed in his high school education and may make references that Morgan will miss or seem out of his depth Morgan may be as sexually inexperienced as Troy so Morgan needs to talk carefully and not give away any clues about his younger age or past experiences. They will both be highly horny and may begin to be more physical in private within limits that might expand over time. But, Troy being 16 makes him legally underage
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I liked the meal. It was partly on the healthy side. I only missed seeing a sweet dessert--like pie or cobbler. Guess I am hungry and will be fixing some Eggos with sliced fresh peaches for breakfast
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They are a match. Morgan is very taken with Troy. Troy thinks Morgan is hot and really likes his great ass. He wants to spend time with Morgan and is going to show him around the ranch this Saturday, It is clear Troy is gay and is out to his family and ranch hands. His father asked how school was going. Troy had no complaints hinting about any reaction to his sexual orientation It is going to be fascinating to see how Troy and Morgan relate and maybe become closer. They are going to be on new ground and both may need to proceed carefully. Did his dad have any additional reasons for hiring a good looking, well-built young man near his son's age other than ranch work needs?
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It has been 3 days. Has the pack found the dog that bite Lucas and found out if it was a werewolf or just and angry dog? Lucas and Andy might be needlessly worrying. And is tired of soup and very horny. Andy is playing nursemaid and not consuming the blood he needs. Lucas right now looks like his best food source. Will he need to drink blood from Lucas?
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Chapter 11: The Gearhead's Leverage
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: The Gearhead's Leverage
Awesome---I saw the battle being won by Andrew. Sterling fell apart knowing without the safety data, the cars would be incredible safety risks. His thievery cost him $64 million which paid the client and the law firm. I bet Andrew earned more money for the firm than any other new lawyer in his class. He is going to be kept on Andrew learned modesty and focus from Kellerman from this sweet revenge. Andrew turned the high from his victory to the right purpose. He drove to see Will and sweep him off his feet and take him to his bedroom They are going to make beautiful love. -
Mantown, Part One of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Mantown, Part One of Three
Talk about a mid-life crisis, missed opportunities and a war of the sexes. Jesse is ready and is trying to not lose his place and age sadly. He has intensively worked out. He is looking around and becoming more aware. Is he going to make some changes? -
Travis is not worrying about the long term effects of this drug .I have read...." Long-term use of modafinil may carry risks such as psychological or physical dependence, chronic sleep pattern disruptions, and persistent cardiovascular strain."
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Finally, Wil noticed Travis was taking a drug, He confronted Travis, “Because you’re not yourself,” I said honestly. “It’s like your body and your emotions aren’t matched up.” Travis did not take this inquiry well. Being pushed, he said he had it under control. Will was not assured, but did not press Travis since he would get angry. Will offered to fly out to help Travis, if he asked him. Travis is not in control and seems really to be dependent on the pills Kendo sold him. Will Travis need additional or other drugs to keep up? Wil Kendo get more control over Travis?
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Chapter 10: The Flesh
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 10: The Flesh
Peter and Will are helping to ground Jason and now it appears he might not want help from Marcus However, Marcus has a mission from Alastair Merrick and he dare not fail. What will Marcus try to do to capture Jason's attention and gain control over his minf? -
Andy has become a more fascinating character. He has interesting cultural entanglements. He does know about Dr Who and has a favorite version. He has a connection to a gargoyle who has just arrived to be with him. Finally, he played in a famous band and helped write its one hit wonder. Andy donated his record profits to improve the athletic department and fund a new football field, The fans and the werewolves are very pleased
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Who will Andy target for his needed blood? Lucas, a teacher ??? Can he drink just pint and let the victim still live? You just know Lucas would volunteer.
