That wasn’t a rift, it’s a damned chasm. They’d definitely be better off as one group, all getting along. Hopefully we’ll get more chapters soon. I’ve gotten to know and like most of these characters.
After how many days the first explorers return with water. Oliver is gonna be upset he can’t rule any longer. Ryan and Milan start talking again but things seem to have gotten worse.
I’m so hooked on this story. I’m glad there was an update, but I’m afraid after that chapter I’ll have to wait things out like everyone else has. I’m guessing you’re no longer in college it being over six years since this chapter was posted. But I am happy you decided to continue it, I might never have discovered it.
Can definitely feel the emotions. I’ll find out soon enough, but I’m thinking Milan isn’t as straight as he pretends to be, but showing any tiny bit of it would probably make his dad disown him.
I agree with Mancunian, there’s more to these two than meets the eye. The natives attacked them several times? And they got away when the weatherman didn’t???
A not too sad chapter this time. Folks are getting used to being on the island. The Batchmeiers are almost useless. Milan may last the longest in that family.
Definitely noticed the style change, Ryan is not only telling the story, he’s specifically telling it to us with his little asides. Scary to think that at this point only 8 of the 40 or so survivors make it to the end, or at least until when he started writing.
It sounds like the plane broke apart off the front of the plane isn’t easy to spot. Yeah, it does sound like Kai’s grandfather didn’t make it. Ryan might just have acquired a temporary little brother.
Late to the party, but I saw today’s update and thought I’d start reading this one. Hopefully, the more recent chapters come closer together. Guess I’ll find out soon. Great start btw!
We’ll have to wait and see, I suppose. I do have a list of other ideas, but few thrill me. So anything is possible I suppose. My two other musically based stories were well received, so I guess there’s a good chance this one outlives its ghost.