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Amazing writing. It seems that the more information we get, the more things are revealed - and the less we actually know. Even Taggert and Bert speak in puzzles. They eventually understand each other perfectly, while we're still left wondering what lies beneath their conversation. It's as if ranch owners share their own universal language.
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When did this happen? 👆 First was this moment: Then Tomas went to Atreus - Atreus is astonished...Cas is suffocating...Wylan hides in church-find the blade-the spell is over, rebellion started, Atreus wakes up and refuses Tomas' offer...Tomas devastated...Val shakes him... Did Tomas speak with Lothar again somewhere in between?! Or he just assumes that, since he didn't accomplish his father's task, he is banished?
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Hakon & Bram? I had to go back to Book 3 to check their names! 😁
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I was a bit confused by the timeline because of how the previous chapter ended. At first, I thought this chapter was set before Ateus' fight. I also didn't quite understand. Casimir's jealousy after the way the last scene in the previous chapter played out. And Tomas seemed so defeated here - I assume he met with his father in his tent afterward?
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Oh...OH...a big mama Val... 😲
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Friends' support is important, but I think Tomas also needs to talk to someone older - a father figure. The other boys each had that kind of conversation at some point with Wylan and/or Darien. Tomas desperately needs a positive, healthy male role model and someone he can see as a trusted authority.
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24. Friends, Family & Fun
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in 24. Friends, Family & Fun
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Beutifuly said...and beautifully written...both 'mature content' and 'learning. Their connection is so natural - love, passion and lust all build slowly until the fireworks.
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Atreus the Magnificent...too bad Ashot...or even Ishan couldn't see it. As for the Tomas, I'm looking forward to seeing who will heal his broken heart. Nevertheless, he should be aware of one thing... no matter his feelings, he didn't "do it" for Atreus - ultimately, he "did it" for himself.
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24. Friends, Family & Fun
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in 24. Friends, Family & Fun
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It seems to me they're all destined to be the power behind the throne - or the power hidden in the shadows. They're so easy for their enemies to underestimate. Cas, a weak boy, is actually a mage. Cecilly, the woman behind the throne, is the one truly pulling the strings. With the alliances they'll forge with Atreus, Tomas, and Richard, they're going to be unbeatable!
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But I'd love to see the smirk on Darien's face after this - and hear him say, "That's my boy," right in front of Lothar himself.
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He can be whatever he wants... but does he realize he lost his son? Lothar failed as a parent, and that's unforgivable.
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Darien was never truly a father to a little boy. By the time he returned from the Crusades, Atreus was already a teenager. With Rico, Darien is making up for the time he lost and embracing the chance to be the father he never got to be for Atreus.
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Beautiful way to introduce Rico and make him member of the family. I don't think anyone has ever melted Darien's heart so fast...Wylan included! 😁
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So...should we read it...or wait?! 😜
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Is he still alive and retired or has he passed away? P.S. If that was already mentioned, please don't tell @kbois I asked - she'll spank me again for not paying attention! 😅
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Good observation... It surprised me that Tommy was the one taking the initiative and pointing out the elephant in the room - directly and honestly!
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They're going to be permanently transferred to the stables... to Duke Lothar's utter horror and the boys' absolute delight! 😄
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Religious fanatics and angry fathers are nothing compared to the Dowager Baroness Haskal if they step on those silky carpets like that! 😁
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Nothing bonds people better than shit - both literally and metaphorically!
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Well, Rico, of course...he's arriving in next season...as soon as his baba gets better!
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This is...this is absolutely beautiful chapter! Team-building, yeah!!!
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As long as Taggert is doing regular ranch work - handling cattle, fixing fences, making repairs - he doesn't feel conflicted about his loyalty. Going into business, negotiations, or strategy is a different matter. No matter what happened to Taggert on Yoder's ranch, it's still home - the place where he grew up. The question is whether he's going to interfere or stay out of it.
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