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  1. Cane23

    Chapter 2

    Henryk Sienkiewicz - In Desert and Wilderness.
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    Chapter 2

    Did Julian teach Ishan how to use a bow and arrow? I was thinking about their future - how could they possibly build a nest and raise a family in bloody Palestine? There’s no safer or more secure place for them than Darien’s. Plus, there are plenty of trees and lots of cheese! 😁
  3. This is my first thought: 😁
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    Chapter 1

    Well, he was fully aware when he did it with Wylan and Darien... he didn't hesitate much! 😜
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    Prologue

    Did Ishan wake up in his own body?
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    Chapter 1

    Considering all the dramatic circumstances they find themselves in, this was actually quite a romantic chapter! 🙂
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    Prologue

    What was that all about? I'm just as confused as Ishan/Eric! Was the corpse that was brought to the Sultan merely an illusion meant to deliver a message? Wylan must have been aware of it too -there's no way he actually believes Ishan is dead.
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    "Grey"

    I really love this association with Shakespeare’s Sonnet 116 that was mentioned above, It connects so beautifully with many of the feelings this story evokes for me. While reading the previous chapter, someone mentioned listening to fado - which felt incredibly fitting given the story’s atmosphere and its connection with Portugal (I love Mariza), but for me it was Vide Cor Meum (“See my heart”). That same feeling of transcendence mixed with longing. And then all the Dante echoes came rushing back: La Vita Nuova, the sonnet of the eaten heart, Beatrice guiding Dante through Paradiso, where love becomes illumination rather than possession. Especially those lines in Paradiso about free will being God’s greatest gift. Futile Devices seems deeply concerned with human will too - what we surrender, what we preserve, what survives us. Mentioning Portugal in his stories, @CasualWanderer82 made me remember Saramago’s Baltasar and Blimunda. The Passarola - the impossible flying machine carried by collected human “wills”... feels strangely parallel to the “futile devices” here, or perhaps even to the tree itself: fragile human constructions trying to transcend gravity, mortality, time. Which makes the title feel almost ironic. These things are “futile” materially, perhaps, but spiritually and emotionally they are attempts to carry something human beyond destruction - all the way, as Shakespeare says, to the edge of doom.
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    "Grey"

    The chapter reveals a flaw in the architecture - love survived transplantation. Not memory. personality or consciousness as Theron understands it, but something deeper. That parallel gesture - Devin across the ocean and Theron in the study both pressing hands to the same spot...is probably the single most important image in the novel so far. Because it visually proves something that author claims - “It is a fact of the architecture.” The connection exists beneath identity itself, and the truly extraordinary thing is that Theron himself becomes evidence against his own worldview. He is a being who has spent centuries believing souls are harvestable, transferable, containable. Yet now he experiences pain from a source outside the system he controls. Love enters his structure as an unauthorized phenomenon. Something outside the bargain - outside the rules. Irony is that Theron succeeded too completely. He preserved Luka’s body so thoroughly that traces of Luka’s attachment survived inside the structure itself. The vessel became contaminated by love, and contamination is exactly how the novel frames it. Theron’s pain violates “every law” of his existence. The system is beginning to malfunction because of one human attachment. All the apparent choices, manipulations, bargains, and erasures may merely be surface movements over a deeper inevitability. Devin and Luka are not just lovers fighting separation anymore; they are becoming something tectonic, a structural force underneath the world Theron and Mister D built.
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    Quid Pro Quo

    Yes, "shameless" is exactly the right word. And what a performer - this was a masterclass in acting, whether it was genuine or not. It was... a lot! I honestly don't know whether I should feel delighted or terrified.
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    Chapter 18

    Aww
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    Chapter 18

    Thank you for this information. Would you consider including it as an epilogue - not to the story itself, since the adventures of Lord Hascal continue, but as a brief summary of the historical events and real-life figures featured in the narrative, along with what became of them after the First Crusade? As you've outlined in this comment, I think it would provide fascinating context and a fitting historical perspective for readers.
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    The workshop

    Neil keeping Alex's photo in his apartment feels more intimate and affectionate than anything they've done so far. He's opening up about things he has never told or shown anyone before - his art, his insecurities, his dreams. Neil may struggle to put it into words, but his actions speak for themselves. He's in love.
  14. Book 3 brings the first trilogy of this epic saga to a powerful and unforgettable conclusion. The siege and eventual fall of Jerusalem are depicted in full-blooded, brutal reality. The author does not hold back or attempt to soften the horrifying scenes of slaughter and devastation. Sensitive readers should take the content warnings seriously, as some chapters contain intense depictions of violence and human suffering. That said, readers willing to confront these historical atrocities as they were will find themselves both shocked by the brutality and deeply impressed by the author's remarkable storytelling. The descriptions are vivid, emotionally powerful, and written with a level of skill worthy of literary recognition. Meanwhile, the heroes of the Vanguard face their greatest trials yet. Baron Hascal - Darien - stands at the most important crossroads of his life. Will he claim a crown, become a king, and rise as one of the most powerful and feared lords of the Holy Land? Or will he leave war behind and return home to Europe, exchanging the role of warlord for that of a father? Filled with action, tragedy, and difficult choices, Book 3 delivers a fitting and memorable finale to the trilogy while setting the stage for what may come next.
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    Chapter 18

    Yea, that's it...a mother hen!!! I think I'm going to LOVE this book! 😁
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    Chapter 18

    I was thinking about her role in the story... Was she a mother to Darien the same way Lord Hascal has been his father?
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    Chapter 17

    Well, he is certainly coming back with enough wealth and military power to make and unmake kings!
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    Chapter 17

    "My King has already sailed for Europe in disgust" I wasn't aware of that. The last thing I remember is the letter Darien received on the coast near Jaffa, informing him that the King was trapped in Antioch between two rival forces fighting for dominance.
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    Chapter 17

    So, basically, the medicine is - get out of there ASAP! When thousands are dying in a war, it's just statistics. But when you lose your family, the heavy burden of grief can break your back. A heartbreaking yet amazing chapter!
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    Chapter 16

    Today, Bibles are printed all over the world. There are countless copies available, many of them free - not to mention that anyone can access them online. And what has it changed? Have people learned to love one another? To "love thy neighbour as thyself"? Not really. People often read holy books in ways that suit their own beliefs and interests. One of the most effective methods of manipulation is dehumanization. If women, children, or entire groups of people are seen as somehow "lesser" or "inferior," then others can continue to call themselves Christians while owning slaves, supporting persecution, or justifying the slaughter of those who are different. They can even blame those people for their own misfortunes and failures. History shows how easily human beings can twist even the highest moral teachings when they stop seeing others as fully human.
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    Chapter 16

    The last time I felt like this was while reading Quo Vadis. As I read the scenes of Christians being tortured and burned alive, tears began pouring down my face. This chapter is horrifying, yet utterly magnificent. It is the climax not just of this story, but of the entire series. The fall of Jerusalem - the day God died.
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    Wounded

    Go on...tell her!
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    Chapter 15

    Resurrection?! I mean...they are in Jerusalem after all!
  24. I’ve already mentioned elsewhere that, in my humble opinion, “abomination” is the worst word in the English language. I would be in blessed ignorance if I hadn’t encountered it so many times in LGBTQ+ stories.
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    Chapter 15

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