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Literary or...? Sorry...just...ignore me! 🤪
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Maybe some juicy epilogue...? 😜
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Hey @Topher Lydon, I have a question about the previous chapter. When Radoslav asked Darien what his sword was called, Darien said it didn't have a name. But didn't he name it Thorn earlier in the story? And one more thing - were you hinting that Guy died in the siege?
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A moron would probably interpret it as a divine message - something like: "Shit in your shoe, a crown on your head." 💩🤴
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Wasn't Latin part of Darien's and Ser Val's education? Or was it something they learned only for church services and religious matters?
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Gay Authors - The Next Update and Survey Discussion
Cane23 commented on Myr's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I haven't received the survey in my email. Nevertheless, I don't think it would have changed the majority opinion much. Great work, guys!- 38 comments
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Norris has the mentality of a beast, while Anton is the cunning one. They seem like the obvious suspects... perhaps a little too obvious. It almost feels as though the author is trying to lead us down the wrong path. But she wouldn't do that to us, would she? 😁 As for Lawrence... he went a bit too far this time. Hurting Bastien is one thing, but doing it publicly? He should know better!
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Work is good for the soul?
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Work is good for the soul?
Am I wrong, or does Alex’s insistence come across as possessive teenage schoolgirl behavior? And then there’s the guilt-tripping… Since when did his life mission become leading Neil onto the “right path”?- 14 comments
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I LOVE your terminology!!! 😂
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This ritual punishment of the middle brother reminds me of the “whipping boy” from Mark Twain’s novel The Prince and the Pauper. The boy’s duty was to take Prince Edward’s punishment upon himself in the court of King Henry VIII. But there, the boy was an outsider; here, it is the middle brother himself who bears the punishment, which brings out so many additional emotions - mainly guilt, but also revolt and rage. Whatever the Seljuk princes are going to do to their grandfather, it will be well deserved.
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The scene with the mask reminds me of Rebecca - the famous scene at the costume ball when the new Mrs. de Winter wears Rebecca’s dress, following Mrs. Danvers’s suggestion. Now, who from The Golden Circle has the wicked mind of Mrs. Danvers?!
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And Darien is more of a LORD than many who inherited the title through generations of nobility!
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I understand the transformation that war makes of man... But if I had to define my earlier thoughts:
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This is interesting because I had a feeling that King Radoslav wouldn’t survive the war.
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Extra dose of steam! 😁
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I'm so glad you came back to react to these comments, because you reminded me of this... So, tell me, @CasualWanderer82 how “far” would you go... without giving away any spoilers? 🤣
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Holding hands in public?!? ...Doesn't sound like a smart idea!
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Ketchup is basically sugar.
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There are still Stephan and Ashot left to find themselves a “beard,” actually! 😁 By the way, Ashot is far too eloquent for a little desert thief… he really reminds me of Aladdin! 😄
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Instead of drama, this wedding was such fun. Since the prologue was rather dark, the first chapter feels like a moment of entertainment before the chaos begins again. Nevertheless, although Julian and his wife are both gay, having intercourse at least once to produce an heir shouldn’t really be such a problem (there weren’t exactly many alternatives in the Middle Ages). Still, the fake performance was hilarious - “Oh, oh, OH!” 😂
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Better than apple! 😜
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And that’s not all - he’s eventually going to become King of Jerusalem. I only hope Lord Darien and his men will be back in Europe by then.
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Not quite the twist or cliffhanger, but still more than enough excitement and anticipation to make me impatiently wait for the next chapter!
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@CasualWanderer82 are you going to mark this story as Complete and start Book 2 as a new story, or will you continue from Chapter 11?
